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[i习作temp] issue 111 大家帮我打个分,收笔之作,不用改了,3,31鼎钧 [复制链接]

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发表于 2005-3-30 00:35:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
用pp3模拟的,在规定的时间内完成,大家给个分数,明天就上场了,多谢大家了!!!

In the course of human events, the wheel of art turns with the accelerating velocity in accordance to the development of societies as a whole. The aim of art is obliged to fulfill the desire of the spiritual need and appreciation. Embedded in every day’s life and existing in unconsciousness, it is difficult to define and quantify or tends to be at least pervasive and elusive. Perhaps few issues cause so much concern and widespread public debates as does the issue whether the art reveal the hidden ideas and impulse of a society. On my basis of my personal experience and expertise, hardly can it be articulated and illuminated without complex analysis and comprehensive evaluation.

Without a doubt, the art, especially the creation of paintings, are able to predict the future life in the next decades. It is universally acknowledged that what people most expected can be realized through the creation of arts. Because in the real world, limited by the natural resources and technology, individuals fail to achieve every dream in the mundane world. Therefore, as a sort of satisfying this desire, the only way is to express their ideas and thoughts through arts. The discovery of robot is able to serve as a convincing example to shed light on this point. As we know, the prototype of robot firstly appeared in some fictions. At that time, people dreamed of one day when people may employ the robot to accomplish some dangerous projects that are vital to human. After few decades, the artist's dream came true. The achievement in the domain of science makes the robots that only existed in people's illusion in the past time available. From this point of few, Should we deny the fact that the arts are able to predict the future world? Nay!
Furthermore, The arts are instrument of human inner heart feelings and expression just as a vessel laden of merchandises. On account of the various forms of arts, artists would make their feelings to the society and surroundings ingrained into these creations. Vincent Van Gogh functions as a telling example, there is no denying that from masterpiece of Van Gogh, such as The Potato Eater, Starry Night and Heliotrope, which give rise to a negative desperation and somber feeling to the viewer and want them to know his unfortunate experiences in the society. On the other side, when people appreciate the works by Da Vinci, his paintings will inevitably bring about a scientific spirit and philosophic thought. Therefore, the arts, which have been developed with the enhancement of civilization, were considered to be a way of expressing the artist's feeling and thoughts in the world.

In addition, from the presentation of the arts, especially the literatures, people will be acquainted with the society and circumstance that the artists lived in. That is to say, the literatures often reflect the merits as well as drawbacks that existed in the society. A good example in case is Chekhov, the preeminent and outstanding novel writer in Soviet Union. In his literatures, we might realize the unsympathetic relationship between individuals, even the relatives. Besides, it also uncovered the fact that people in that time were imbued with the notion that the materialism and capitalism are the priority of the world. Few literatures have characterized the past decades more than those by Shakespeare, who created a lot of tragic dramas, such as Hamlet, Othello, King Lear, which reflect the tragedies that existed in that society and times. Thus, it is the arts that uncover and illuminate the real facts and truths that prevailed in different times.

In conclusion, it is sensible to maintain that the arts reveal the hidden ideas and impulse of a society. Needless to say, a colossal number of empirical evidence that mentioned above has convinced that point. Therefore, the significance of the creation of arts ought to not be neglected because the arts, just as the air, exist in every place in the world.
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发表于 2005-3-30 07:43:39 |只看该作者
自己顶一下,谢谢大家了!!!

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发表于 2005-3-30 09:23:43 |只看该作者
不敢打分.感觉不错.明天肯定好成绩.BTW,一楼的时间好怪啊,12:35AM?!

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发表于 2005-3-30 09:47:26 |只看该作者
感觉很不错了啊
我也是明天鼎军 祝我们好运

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发表于 2005-3-30 09:52:11 |只看该作者
牛啊牛!
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发表于 2005-3-30 10:12:22 |只看该作者

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文章整体感觉不错,说理也挺清楚的, 4分是肯定有了的,但是你这个不是issue111吧,题号标错了 吧,还有,老美比较欣赏开头简洁的表明自己的观点.还有三段式的结构比较好,纯熟个人意见,但只要把理说清了,几段都可以的.呵呵,希望你明天好运哦,
ps:这道是机精题吗?收笔应该练机精里面的吧.
去purdue的同学请和我联系,我们可以成为飞友

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发表于 2005-3-30 10:15:08 |只看该作者
真的不错啊!

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发表于 2005-3-30 10:56:09 |只看该作者
其实 不用担心 只要坐在那里 就有表达不完的话  我一开始总担心自己没话说 可事实证明 到时候的 思路很顺畅  不过给你给建议好是看看 argument 的中文  翻译 很有好处的

还有 鼎均的环境很好  我当时是带着耳机  什么东东 都没房 就是隔些音 其实 带不带都成 因为还是能听到  精神集中的时候什么都听不到了

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发表于 2005-3-30 10:59:59 |只看该作者
我考的题目就不是什么高频  但是到现场可以发挥啊  只要你知道拿个题目说的是什么意思就行 所以遇到什么题目都不要灰心  又的时候 你越师写过得越 回忆当初是怎么写的反 而写不好

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发表于 2005-3-30 11:53:53 |只看该作者
谢谢大家的意见和建议,我主要想练习一篇比较"虐"的题目,是属于那种说不出什么话的题目,锻炼一下自己的心理承受能力,,就是怕自己"人品不好",抽到"虐"题,给咱们中国人丢了脸.其实现在心里还是蛮紧张的,虽然写的数目是不少了.希望大家多提建议和意见

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发表于 2005-3-30 12:04:54 |只看该作者
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