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发表于 2005-3-31 10:01:11 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
ISSUE27: No one can possibly achieve success in the world by conforming to conventional practices and conventional ways of thinking.


sigh,居然还超时1分钟,哭啊,写得太滥了,最后一片了,大家看看有没4分
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Is it real that no one can possibly achieve success in the world by comforming to conventional practices and conventional ways of thinking as the author asserts? From my point of view, I fundamentally agree with this statement insofar as the importance of not confined by conventional practices and ways of thinking. Nevertheless, in some points, I also consider conventional practices and ways of thinking still own some merits as explicit paradigms for people to obtain useful knowledge or experience.

To begin with, as society and science advance on a fast speed, conventional practices and conventional ways of thinking in most cases stand as limitations on people to make breakthroughs. Since everything is changing from time to time, conventions could necessarily make people limited by old theories or standpoints. When we refer to history, numerous incidences serve as fit corroborations to this very point of view. On the one hand, in the science fields, conventional theories or ideas often serve as extraordinary limitations for people to think freely and treat things from various perspectives. Uncountable hypothesis or breakthrough in science could be greatly attributed to creativity or originality. The well-known scientist, Newton, is a suitable example to this point. It is entirely possible that he was not the only one to notice the phenomenon of gravity. Yet most people at that time were seriously astricted by religious conceptions or thoughts that it was owning to God. Fortunately, Newton treated this seemingly unnoticeable phenomenon from a new perspective using his creativity and originality and finally he discovered gravity and perfectly built up two excellent theories--theory of gravity and classical mechanics, which stand as two signposts in the development of science.

On the other hand, in the fields of art, remarkable success or contributions always result from creativity but not conventional practices or conventional ways of thinking. From the advancement of arts, we could see only a small fraction of the totally numerous artists were excellent as a result of originality. In the very inception of last century, the whole realm of painting was in a depression since at that time most painters treat conventional thoughts and tact as immutable. Yet impressionism, famous for the connotations in the paintings, was not totally confined by those thoughts in their mind. They tried to depict or portray the world from a new perspective. In their works, values lie in their various connotations to express inner world such as attitudes and emotions and the like and especially, their distinct tact of painting. Though they were not popular at first, times serve as powerful catalyst to their final success and widely acknowledgement and apprehension.

However, it is not to say that conventional ideas or thoughts are totally useless. Through comprehensive understanding of conventions, people could necessarily derive beneficial experience and knowledge, which also could help people a lot in pursuing their goals and lead to the final success. For instance, one of the greatest philosopher of old China, Mencius, had fully absorb and utilized conventional thinkings and thoughts handed down from another famous philosopher, Confucius, which helped him to build up his own theory system that make him famous.

To sum up, achieving success often include creativity or originality but not conventions. What we should do is to absorb useful and beneficial knowledge and experience to pave the way to success.
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发表于 2005-3-31 10:36:12 |只看该作者
具体就不改了~我看有4.5~5分吧~
牛顿后半生信仰宗教的例子尽量不要用!国内把他信仰宗教教育成我们以为宗教阻碍了科学的发展~这个例子国外的普遍看法和我们所收的教育不同!
还有就是楼主的开头的restate我还是不建议用~不过既然明天要考了~有自己的魔板也未尝不可~
加油!祝明天旗开得胜!

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发表于 2005-3-31 11:03:36 |只看该作者
我觉得楼主写的挺不错的了,明天就信心百倍的去考试吧!
到时时间肯定够用的,不用担心。
一切顺利!!!

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发表于 2005-3-31 11:17:58 |只看该作者
谢谢大家,希望到时候能正常发挥就好了.

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