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Issue46  第10篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：44分29秒     480 words
从2005年3月2日14时35分到2005年3月2日15时19分
------题目------
While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas
attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a
society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in
them a sense of cooperation.
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Which is a better way for us to prepare our young people for
leadership:instilling in them a sence of cooperation or a well-developed
sence of competition?I fundamentally agree with the former opinion
which the author favors that we should instill  in our young a sence of
cooperation.

One reason that I fundamentally agree with the author is that with the
grobality of the world ,our young will confront even more complex things
which they can not solve by themself and the cooperation is in need.It is
turning impossible now for the single treating such as the warming of
the world,the pollution and global diseases(AIDS and so on).And
nations should get rid of their national emotion,take immediate
measures to fix these problems under their cooperations.Without the
cooperations,human will disappear from our beautiful planet-earth in a
few years.

A second compelling reason for instilling in young people a sence of
cooperation over competition is that effective leadership depends less
on the latter than the former.A leader should show his remarkable
ability on uniting workers if a firm want to thrive,expecially when the firm
is in difficulty.If the leader always impacts the idea that we should
compete with each other,the workers will spend more time on compete
with others than working for the thriving of the firm and the firm will go
into bankruptcy.However the idea of cooperation will have a reverse
effect.When the leader instill his workers that they should cooperate
with others in order to thrive the firm,they work togerther effectively
which is needed by every thriving companies.

The final reason why I fundamental agree with author is that more
impact on competition will disperse our focus.And it is impossible for us
to get a job well-done when we can not concentrate our focus.It is very
harmful when we have such short-term views.So we should focus our
money and ideas on cooperation,and work togerther with our so-called
competors for a better future.

However we indeed need competition.Darwin's natural selection has
showed that there are competitions among animals and the weak ones
will disappear for the health of the species.Moreover the natural
selection is also effective for our society and this selection should be
taken by competition other than cooperation.Without competition,our
society will be less mordern and the quility of our life will be vey bad.

In sum,if we were to take the speaker's advice too far we would risk
becoming a world less mordern and without many leaders who are bred
of a competitive spirit.Nevertheless,on balance I agree that it is more
important to instill a sense of cooperative alliance and efforts in solving
the world's most pressing problems.After all,our society need both
cooperation and healthy competition.

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Issue46 第10篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户 共用时间：44分29秒 480 words
从2005年3月2日14时35分到2005年3月2日15时19分
------题目------
While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas
attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a
society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in
them a sense of cooperation.
------正文------
Which is a better way for us to prepare our young people for
leadership: instilling in them a sencesense of cooperation or a well-developed
sence of competition? I fundamentally agree with the former opinion
which the author favors that we should instill in our young a sence of
cooperation.

One reason that I fundamentally agree with the author is that with the
grobalityglobalization of the world ,our young will confront even more complex things which they can not solve by themselves and the cooperation is in needin need的意思是在危难中,就用needed. It is turning不懂 impossible now for the single treating加things such as the warming of the world, the pollution and global diseases(AIDS and so on).And nations should get rid of their national emotion, take immediate measures to fix these problems under their cooperations. Without the
cooperations, human will disappear from our beautiful planet-earth in a
few years.其实可以稍微在具体论证些,感觉有点空,突出单个力量很弱需要合作

A second compelling reason for instilling in young people a sence of
cooperation over competition is that effective leadership depends less
on the latter than the former.A leader should show his remarkable
ability on uniting workers if a firm want to thrive, expeciallyespecially when the firm is in difficulty. If the leader always impacts the idea that we should
compete with each otherothers, the workers will spend more time on compete
with others than working for the thriving of the firm and the firm will go
into bankruptcy. However the idea of cooperation will have a reverse
effect. When the leader instill his workers that they should cooperate
with others in order to thrive the firm, they work togerther effectively
which is needed by every thriving companies.

The final reason why I fundamental agree with author is that more
impact on competition will disperse our focus. And it is impossible for us
to get a job well-done when we can not concentrate our focus. It is very
harmful when we have such short-term views. So we should focus our
money and ideas on cooperation, and work together with our so-called
competorscompetitors for a better future.
However we indeed need competition. Darwin's natural selection law of selectionhas showed that there are competitions among animals and the weak ones will disappear for the health of the species. 由于健康原因,还不如说由于竞争导致缺乏食物等具体的东东Moreover the natural selection is also effective for our society and this selection should be taken by competition other than cooperation. Without competition, our society will be less mordern and the qualityof our life will be veyvery bad.

In sum,if we were to take the speaker's advice too far意思就是过分强调这个观点? overemphasize行不? we would risk becoming a world less mordern and without many leaders who are bred of a competitive spirit. Nevertheless, on balance I agree that it is more important to instill a sense of cooperative alliance and efforts in solving the world's most pressing problems. After all, our society need both
cooperation and healthy competition.

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[Issue46 第10篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户 共用时间：44分29秒 480 words
从2005年3月2日14时35分到2005年3月2日15时19分
------题目------
While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas
attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a
society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in
them a sense of cooperation.
------正文------
Which is a better way for us to prepare our young people for
leadership: instilling in them a sencesense of cooperation or a well-developed
sence of competition? I fundamentally agree with the former opinion
which the author favors that we should instill in our young a sence of
cooperation.

One reason that I fundamentally agree with the author is that with the
grobalityglobalization of the world ,our young will confront even more complex things which they can not solve by themselves and the cooperation is in needin need的意思是在危难中,就用needed. It is turning不懂impossible now for the single treating加things such as the warming of the world, the pollution and global diseases(AIDS and so on).And nations should get rid of their national emotion, take immediate measures to fix these problems under their cooperations. Without the
cooperations, human will disappear from our beautiful planet-earth in a
few years.其实可以稍微在具体论证些,感觉有点空,突出单个力量很弱需要合作

A second compelling reason for instilling in young people a sence of
cooperation over competition is that effective leadership depends less
on the latter than the former.A leader should show his remarkable
ability on uniting workers if a firm want to thrive, expeciallyespecially when the firm is in difficulty. If the leader always impacts the idea that we should
compete with each otherothers, the workers will spend more time on compete
with others than working for the thriving of the firm and the firm will go
into bankruptcy. However the idea of cooperation will have a reverse
effect. When the leader instill his workers that they should cooperate
with others in order to thrive the firm, they work togerther effectively
which is needed by every thriving companies.

The final reason why I fundamental agree with author is that more
impact on competition will disperse our focus. And it is impossible for us
to get a job well-done when we can not concentrate our focus. It is very
harmful when we have such short-term views. So we should focus our
money and ideas on cooperation, and work together with our so-called
competorscompetitors for a better future.
However we indeed need competition. Darwin's natural selection(这个可以的啊,是自然选择) law of selectionhas showed that there are competitions among animals and the weak ones will disappear for the health of the species. 由于健康原因,还不如说由于竞争导致缺乏食物等具体的东东(我这里要说的是可以保持物种的生机)Moreover the natural selection is also effective for our society and this selection should be taken by competition other than cooperation. Without competition, our society will be less mordern and the qualityof our life will be veyvery bad.

In sum,if we were to take the speaker's advice too far意思就是过分强调这个观点? overemphasize行不? (应该两个都行)we would risk becoming a world less mordern and without many leaders who are bred of a competitive spirit. Nevertheless, on balance I agree that it is more important to instill a sense of cooperative alliance and efforts in solving the world's most pressing problems. After all, our society need both
cooperation and healthy competition.
谢谢这位大虾帮我改作文

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