ISSUE136 下周就考了，望拍拍看！！不胜感谢

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Issue136  
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从2005年3月9日21时50分到2005年3月9日22时39分
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The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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In modern world,we often hear people grumble that there is no choice for them to select their destiny,their race,their nation,their family and parents.Deeply thought,we could realize that choices are elsewhere and the absence of it is extremely impossible.I content that sometimes there is something we couldn't choose,while most time we have countless chances to select the essential parts of our life.Apparently unchoiceable things usually reveal more prominent choices,the president of my school always said.


To begin with,choices are full of our daily life and permeated during this developing world.Take an easy example,everyday we may encounter numerous choices such as at which time have our dinner,whether to go swimming during noon time.Student could choose to finish homework or not.Parents could choose to have a baby or not,etc.Suppose there is no choice for us,this world will lack a multitude of funny and without activity.Without a choice,people won't understand the essence of truth,they will never know what is justice and what's wicked.For example,the ancestors of our human beings choose wars to solve disputation between countries.Such as the war of Troy caused by a beauty named Hallen.People gradually realize the damage of war to people's normal life.Nowdays we choose peace,a way we could live a vigorous and flourish life.

Further,there is no necessary to complain they have no choices to choose family,and nation they were born.Since the seemingly no choice implies more choices during your future life,some of which will definitely determine the destiny of your life.For example,once you were born in a poverty family,you could choose whether to live a freedom and happily life or step into the hierarchy of wealth and power,which actually owns more choices than those who were born in luxious family which hold the background of politics or economy and were destined to live a serious and arduous life based on the research of economy and political life.For example,many prince and princess of Europe nations will undoubtly inherit their parent's position to operate their country which may filled with pain and mire.From this point,some things which  apparently have no choice metopher affluent choices.

However,under certain circumstance,choice could only be regarded as a lavish precious which couldn't be availabe.For example,people who live in the nations dominated by  centralization of state power have no choice to select their presidents,their belief and backgrounds of politics.Suppose under such situations,people won't complain their fate,at least,they have rights to select to emmigrate to other countries through manners such as working and studying.

In a word,choice is the best friend followed or around us everywhere and everytime,just as we all know that best friends won't depart from us,there is no evidence to show that choices will disappear someday,once you live,there is choice undoubtly.

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The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
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In modern world,we often hear people grumble that there is no choice for them to select their destiny,their race,their nation,their family and parents[谁又有机会选择命运呢].Deeply thought[是被思考还是我们思考],we could realize that choices are elsewhere[everywhere?] and the absence of it is extremely impossible[温和一点否定嘛].I content[contend] that sometimes there is something we couldn't choose,while most time we have countless chances to select the essential parts of our life.Apparently unchoiceable things usually reveal more prominent choices,the president of my school always said.
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To begin with,choices are full of our daily life[反啦吧] and permeated during this developing world[很别扭].Take an easy example,everyday we may encounter numerous choices such as at which time have our dinner,whether to go swimming during noon time.Student could choose to finish homework or not.Parents could choose to have a baby or not,etc.Suppose there is no choice for us,this world will lack a  multitude of funny[能不能 a multitude of 我也清楚，查查] and without activity.Without a choice,people won't understand the essence of truth,they will never know what is justice and what's wicked.For example,the ancestors of our human beings choose wars to solve disputation between countries.Such as the war of Troy caused by a beauty named Hallen.People gradually realize the damage of war to people's normal life.Nowdays we choose peace,a way we could live a vigorous and flourish life.[战争有得选麽，人民很无奈呀]

Further,there is no necessary to complain they have no choices to choose family,and nation they were born.Since the seemingly no choice implies more choices during your future life,some of which will definitely determine the destiny of your life.For example,once you were born in a poverty family,you could choose whether to live a freedom and happily life or step into the hierarchy of wealth and power,which actually owns more choices than those who were born in luxious family which hold the background of politics or economy and were destined to live a serious and arduous life based on the research of economy and political life.For example,many prince and princess of Europe nations will undoubtly inherit their parent's position to operate their country which may filled with pain and mire.From this point,some things which apparently have no choice metopher affluent choices.

However,under certain circumstance,choice could only be regarded as a lavish precious which couldn't be availabe.For example,people who live in the nations dominated by centralization of state power have no choice to select their presidents,their belief and backgrounds of politics.Suppose under such situations,people won't complain their fate,at least,they have rights to select to emmigrate to other countries through manners such as working and studying.

In a word,choice is the best friend followed or around us everywhere and everytime,just as we all know that best friends won't depart from us,there is no evidence to show that choices will disappear someday,once you live,there is choice undoubtly.
[我个人觉得作者选择论点不大好论，种族，国家，家庭都很难选择，应该是不可选的，因此，论述有失偏颇，也许是我们看问题角度不同吧，在下愚见]

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谢谢！！！那阁下有什么好的提纲么？