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不为虾米UID: 195785

Reasons why people work other than living

Working to make a living seems to be a major reason for most people while there are still some reasons to account for a large number of people who are engaged in a life of work.

Interest is probably a good reason to explain why today so many people are busy working with a low salary even when they could live a life of a much higher quality. Doing what he likes is always more important than how much he earns. One of my friends has been working for a non-profit organization for about two years to protect wild animals. A deep affection for animals keeps him working passionately and, without any regret. Just as he said, “I am working for interest which makes me complete, not money.”

Furthermore, some people turn such interest into another term which maybe called conviction. People working in charity help other people may best demonstrate this word. They do not work for living but for the happiness of people in bad condition. This conviction may due to their religious belief or just form the pathetic love for the world.

Obtaining knowledge and experience in a certain kind of job will also drive a lot of people to work. This is particularly true for some college students or people just at their early stage of career. To achieve a long-term goal seems somewhat tough for a beginner and thus emphasizes an importance of experience and knowledge which makes a lot of young people regardless of material things when choosing to work.

To live, maybe, sometimes to be more competent or just to be contented are reasons why people work and, at most times, you don’t have to separate them for work is complex and so are the reasons.

lalalaUID: 186478

问几道语法题：
Stage producers klaw and erlanger were the first to eliminate arguments among leading performers ()  in order of apperrance instead of prominence
a of whome list the program
d be listing them on the  program
answer is d! why a

the texas legislature selected VM () in 1982 and again in 1988
b as the state's poet laureate
c the state's poet laureate
answer is b ,  but c?

the distinguishing feature of a fluid in contrast to a solid , is the case ()
b to deform a fulid
d with which a fluid may be deformed
answer is b,  why d?
thank you bow!!!

楼上的作文题目是什么意思， 是说工作不为生计的理由吗？
文中有很多地方指代有问题如many people are busy working with a low salary even when he or she would live a life of a much higher quality   后面不应该变成he or she 应该 they 类似的地方很多，
第二段的中心句是想说为了信仰工作吗？ 那样不应该用conviction 应该是belief  
最后一段病句 很多同一个句子中有两个v词
中心不是很明确，主题句不明显，结构还可以但病句很多。兄弟一句话我们都还的练呀！！
能说一下你写的是那篇文章吗 ？我想看看原文 自己也想写一下 谢谢

不为虾米UID: 195785

to lalala :
谢谢你对我文章的点评，希望对题目不懂的时候查一下字典 other than 还是可以 查到是什么意思的。
conviction可以这样用。
最后一段我不是很肯定，我会再修改。
指带问题我犯错误了，非常感谢。

kidkytUID: 203137

高手，帮忙看一下作文阿！！！！！！
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.


Depending on personal attitude and emotional concern, we find that some people agree that we should real only those books that are about real events real people and established facts. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them because of countless reasons, and I explore a few primary ones as follows.

Firstly, if we just read those books that are about real events, we will lose a lot of joy in our lives. It is believed that we can read other books that are not about real events such as novels and fables for fun. There is on denying that many of novels and fables are worth reading. Fictional as the novels are, we can appreciate the stories and feelings given by thy writers. For example, we all like reading Anderson’s storybooks in that we can find another ideal world from his books. And we can get some new ideas, as a result, we will improve ourselves by reading various books.

What is more, reading books that are about real lives, we will feel boring and dull. Nowadays, we always feel tired in our daily lives, hence, reading other fictional books enable us to feel relaxed. Suppose that you read a fiction or storybook every weekend, drinking a cup of tea or coffee and listening to a jazz cd, it is a use way to make yourself comfortable.

Furthermore, only by reading those books that are real events will restrict us, and our creation ability will be limited. In contrast, reading fictional books can enhance the imagination of people. Consequently, fictional books exert the positive influence on our lives.

Nevertheless, we cannot ignore those books that are about real events because they also do good for us. In a sense, we can learn lots of experience from those books. Just as I like reading the Freud’s autobiography, and I obtain a great deal of knowledge and experience about him.

As far as I am concerned, I disagree that people agree that we should real only those books that are about real events real people and established facts.

shaoyixiangUID: 172467

我是新来的，我可以加入吗？
我0411 587+4.0
希望能通过努力达到620+5.0
现在听力6+语法3+阅读8
以前也被过很多单词书，但都没有巩固而忘记了，现在被王玉梅背到e
总感觉各方面都没什么提高：（
希望大家指点！！！！
谢谢

zuniverseUID: 149102

2000 08 几问,谢谢
1: 阅读38题,答案给A,我选B,这两个词在这里能有什么区别啊?
2:阅读42题,答案给C,我觉得是不是题有问题,我看都能选, 你们怎么看?
3:阅读43答案给B,我看A,B都可以,呵呵,你们怎么看? 这endurability在这里能当耐久性讲吗?
2000 10
28．/Photograph /was revolutionized in 1851 /by the /introduction /of /the collodion process
           A                                                                  B                         C
/for making /glass negatives.
      D
答案给A, 那么D在此是什么意思?
2000 05
21. The first city in the United States that /put /into effect major /plan/ for /the
                                                                   A                                  B             C
clustering /of government  /buildings /was Washington,
                                               D

答案给D,为啥?
谢谢各位,尤其是两为当家,呵呵

lalalaUID: 186478

28  改成 photography 照相技术
21 应该是plans 吧 可数名词复数

alifeUID: 135068

忙于实验室工作，前不久才开始正式准备。现在的情况是：
听力：才听到9705，错5－13，一般错6－7个（前30错2－3，后20错4）；
语法：0－2；
阅读：1－3；
作文：还没开始练。
打算从现在开始到考试，平均每天8小时。
听力的练习方法是n套卷子的前30题集中听，做笔记，反复听3遍左右；现在开始集中听n套卷子的后20题，也听3遍左右－－不知道是否能错得少点？另外听说01年后听力明显变难，不知该怎样准备？
语法打算像二当家的那样集中做题，不知五月初准备是否来得及？
阅读则因为考过G的原因，读起来比较顺。不过据说现在T的阅读有向G靠拢的驱使，惴惴中。
作文呢，我的写作用词应该不是大问题，因为平时在实验室讨论问题多用英语写作；关键是立意，和例子，我想。

guozaiUID: 33200

找到备考GT计划（Guozai版）了，在这里：http://blog.gter.net/more.asp?name=guozai&id=297

guozaiUID: 33200

TOEFL听力训练方法

听力的情况不错, 只要正式考试的时候能达到这样水平就可以了. 我听力只得了61的说. 不过那个什么《听力笔记》和《弦外之音》我没有看过, 可能当时还没有出来吧.
   不过我的感觉是, 练的时候最好做到不错, 不要让自己错的超过两个. 这样正式考试的时候由于临场发挥的问题, 可能错的不容易少于5个. 听力有三种境界: 没听懂把题做对了; 听懂了把题做错了; 听懂了也把题做对了. 偶长期困扰于第二种状态, 上次TOEFL考完终于可以smirk一下啦.
   给你的建议是, 如果有可能的话, 听第二遍应放在所有的题都做完了之后, 就是你做完了4套题之后再把这4套题在不看卷子的情况下听一遍. 当带子上念到每一道问题的时候, 你根据刚才听到的东西应该能把答案在脑子里大概给想出来, 对吧? 如果不能本能的反应出答案, 而需要看ABCD选项的话, 你一定用的是排除法. 这种方法需要你绝对的集中, 我只有在28、29、30有时候听不懂的情况下才会用它, 对你的脑力消耗太大, 所以不能从第一个题一直这样做到最后一个题.
   还有一个最难抗拒的情况是有一个题没听清楚, 做后面题的时候总在想前面那个题. 这个问题想必老钱也已经题过无数次啦. 反正就我来说, 我是克服不了, 唯一的办法就是不让这种情况发生. 反正我是会本能的去想的, 约克制后面的题才做的越差. 正是考的那回我好像也遇到了一个题对答案not so sure, 后来想没想我也忘啦, 反正我用的是"大概听听法"(瞎起的名字, 反正就是区别于什么都得听懂呗.), 想不想对我的影响也不大:P

guozaiUID: 33200

Normally, people will take 6 months to prepare for the GRE test. As it for me, I took the TOEFL class of New Oriental School in the summer of 1999. And I took the TOEFL test for the first time in Oct,1999. The result was 580. Then I took it for the second time in October,2000. I didn't do any preparation until a month before the test. I had the GRE lesson in the summer of 2000 and planed to take the test in March,2001 at first. Then I changed it to June when I found it difficult to take the test so early. As more time I spent on GRE, I felt more unprepared for it. Finally, I made October,the 15th my test date. And the result of my first GRE test was 1940. It was November,the 7th that I got my test score of 2250.
   The period that counts in my preparation is from July,the 7th to November,the 6th. And the turning point is August,the 16th when I began to use Taisha wordlist(太傻) to remember GRE words for the first time.

alifeUID: 135068

多谢！看过你的blog了，很好的说！

guozaiUID: 33200

你的作文我会打印出来拿给老美看，她批改完的会以gif形式发上来。
你需要做的就是，根据人家的修改再写一篇，然后再拿去批改再写，再批改再写。
这样作文才能练出来。
写多少篇只写一遍都是没有用的。

guozaiUID: 33200

无法上传jpg，看看rar行不行

不为虾米UID: 195785

非常感谢! 我正在学习中.感谢.