快考试了,却找不着感觉了...

千年一叹2000UID: 192373

快考试了,感觉有很多东西还没背下了,模拟写作也越来越找不到感觉了.迷茫中........
哪为高人看看俺的作文吧.现在写作,不是超时,就是限时后自己看着都想吐.太郁闷了...
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The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records.
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The speaker alleges that the video camera has become a more important form of documentation than written records. I find that the issue is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between the video camera and written records. In my opinion, the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of several key factors.

First of all, written records help people to get the depth of their minds. The poem is a suit case to the point. The poet, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, describes the beautiful and quiet scene for us in the poem named 'The First Snow'. Yet people can not understand the depth meaning of this poem by watching television. Even if some subject factors have effects on the written records, they are the common avenue to record the history and the emotion of the human beings still.

Secondly, the video camera indeed provides such an accurate and convincing record to us. For instance, there are some video photos to express the actual conditions of the Second World War. These photos provide the accurate, object, and convincing information to inform us that the war is too terrible. We should coordinate to develop the overall world through understanding each other not war. Therefore, we should appreciate the video camera to record the significant historic information.

Thirdly, some people who are illiterate could watch the video photo, but could not read the written records. They might have no chance to enter school to study, but they also need to understand the important news which has happened every day. Fortunately, there is the video camera in the world. These unfortunate people could watch the video to gain the significant news of contemporary life.

In addition, more and more people are willing to use the video camera to record their own life. When the significant thing happened, for example, the journey, the wedding day, and so on, people hope that they could record it by the video camera. They consistently believe that the video photo could remind them with the beautiful memory. Therefore, there are so many people who will to get the video camera all over the world.

However, since the video camera is too expensive, some people can not afford it. I want to purchase a video camera, but just because I have not enough money, and thus the dream have not come true until now. And it is why I can not record my own interesting life by the video camera.

In conclusion, there are some distinguished difference between the video camera and written records. While people could appropriate some written records, such as poems and fictions, they could gain some accurate and convincing information by the video camera.

renarenaUID: 199516

别郁闷，我模考没有一次不超时，但最后还是写完了，而且字数足够，内容还算言之有物，别灰心，继续练，绝对没问题。天道酬勤，相信我！

iverUID: 198348

同感,加油!

千年一叹2000UID: 192373

太感谢大家的意见了.我28 号考,估计应算是较晚的了.还在挣扎中.....

THANKS TO timeleaver, 我看了看开头,的确需要修改.

我现在ISSUE的限时只能完成400词,是不是太少啊?

zoesmileUID: 198494

最初由 千年一叹2000 发布
[B]太感谢大家的意见了.我28 号考,估计应算是较晚的了.还在挣扎中.....

THANKS TO timeleaver, 我看了看开头,的确需要修改.

我现在ISSUE的限时只能完成400词,是不是太?.

以下省略...... [/B]

我们的情况很类似，也是才能写到４００多一点限时的话，２６号的说，只能指望是自己写过的题了