【请教哪位大牛...】

yixiaotianxiaUID: 204368

还有一周就考作文了，还是垃圾水平，咋办呢，愁死了哦，要不要退考，还是该怎么努力，大牛们给点建议啊，以下是今早模考，真吐血.......
74. "The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language."
In the society, people communicate with each other everyday, our family, colleagues, friends, and even varies of strangers. We get information from them or give it to them. After all, the most effective way to communicate may be the use of language, which is quick, valuable in my opinion and not the images.
   Firstly, it is quick to communicate with each other by the means of language. As we know, the time we take to say something is much less than to draw something. When you go shopping wanting to buy something you may ask the assistant to show you the goods not take out a picture.  When you boss want you to make a report of the ,of course a series of picture  are so bad, even take you into trouble. Moreover, as a part of you family, when your mother show a picture want you to know it is time for dinner, and your father's picture meaning give him a cup of tea... what a fun, but so ineffective!
   Not only in our daily life, but also in many field, such like physics, chemistry, math, literature...if images take place of language, be the most effective way to communicate, I can not images what will happen.
   We can not live without language.
   However, beside above, image may not the most important, it can also be a method to communicate.  When you read book or newspaper, we receive information from images.
  Through the things discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that the most effective way to communicate is language not images.   
   大概2分的作文？丢死人了。。。

Henrry_FFUID: 165187

其实从楼主这个水平飞跃到over4会比4到4。5要快！坚持写！写多了字数才会上去！另外，看一下范文，特别留意一下他们用的句法，一些宾语从句，定语从句，并列等基本的举行要烂熟于胸！毕竟G对句子的长度要求是比T高的！1星期可以是很长也可以是很快！看你怎么利用哦～～别急，一步一步来！加油！：）

wanggoudanUID: 166988

如果真的是这样，sigh

victerUID: 194988

建议你可以赶紧找一些不错的例子可以是前人习作中的也可以是范文中的然后将其中的事实部分记住剩下的考试时自己编就行只要别编走样了。这样有了一定量的例子你的作文的字数肯定能上去，这样起码解决了字数的问题。像表达法和用词上的问题我看一周的时间对于任何人来说都是不可能提高的。在这一周里建议你可以搞一下机经里高频题的提纲。相信这样做的话你在最后一周中一定可以有很大的进步。
祝你好运！！加油哦！！

yixiaotianxiaUID: 204368

3X~感觉浑身是劲，hoho~!~

快乐王子UID: 194162

多背多写～背住一些句子，准备好模板吧，字数上不去没办法～
一个礼拜可以改变很多的～
现在不可以退考了～
没退路～

而且做事情不要放弃～
gter应该有永不言败的精神～

kawayieUID: 200247

没关系，不要灰心！
其实……咱俩水平差不多，情况也差不多……