又是两道SAT IMPROVING SENTENCE的题目和大家讨论

EdwinUID: 2114023

1.Although most celebrated for his performance as the Jedi knight Obi Wan Kenobi,Alec Guinness also won acclaim for his skill in portraying a wide range of character roles, most notably in Kind Hearts and Cronets, in which he played twelve separate characters.
A).Although most celebrated for his performance as the Jedi knight Obi Wan Kenobi,Alec Guinness also won acclaim
b).Besides being celebrated mostly for his performance as the Jedi knight Obi Wan Kenobi, Alec Buinness aso won acclaim
2 I  H5 J) o# b7 qc).Alec Guinness is most celebrated for his performance as the Jediknight Obi Wan
2 s0 ?: y+ K$ f& Ud).Alec Guinness is celebrated most for his performance as the Jedi knight Obi Wan Kenobi, and he also won acclaim
e). While celebrated most for his performance as the Jedi knight Obi Wan Kenobi, Alec Guinness, winning acclaim
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3 O6 o+ [% e$ F- j; m6 u2.Rarely has a funeral procession been as moving to the public as was the cortege that accompanied John F.Kennedy to his final resting place.
A). Rarely has a funeral procession been as moving to the public as was thecortege that accompanied John F.Kennedy to his final resting place.
B). It was rare that there was a fnearl procession that was as moving to the public as the cortege that accompanied John F.Kennedy to his final resting place.
" g5 d. I1 }; r, T% \* J; cC). A funeralprocession was very rare as the cortege that moved the public asit accompanied John F.Kennedy to his final resting place.
  k7 D- h  |6 E1 [( E+ h/ o- [D). Rarely has there ever been any funeral procession moving the public that finally accompanied John F.Kennedy to his resting place.
E). Rarely has a funeral procession been so publicly moving as the cortege that had been accompanying John F.Kenndy to his final resting place.

% O1 \# ]) h) X: `4 [最近我和SAT激战,这是昨天刚做完的30个IMPROVIN SENTENCE的两个,最后答案是,都选A,恩,怎么说呢,我分析来分析去,我都差不多 可以把两个题的B C D E分析出错误的原因,具体说是不适合作为WRITTEN AND STYLISH ENGLISH.所以希望大家一起补充点意见和分析.

AvalokitesvaraUID: 2113513

我好像回答过你了