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发表于 2005-7-17 22:04:26 |显示全部楼层

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
这是我的，谢谢~~~
还没有人改过呢。。

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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-18 at 19:05 ]

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发表于 2005-7-18 19:17:36 |显示全部楼层

http://edu.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
这篇感觉不太好，多谢修改～

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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-19 at 01:17 ]

其实我要求很低～
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发表于 2005-7-18 19:24:00 |显示全部楼层

斑竹帮忙看看这篇吧，可能是写的人太多了，大家都不想改向同的题目，保证没有语法和拼写错误的
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bahqiu

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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-19 at 00:10 ]

谢谢你，虽然我只想亲吻一片雪花，你却给了我银色的世界。

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发表于 2005-7-18 19:39:19 |显示全部楼层

斑竹辛苦了,20多天没写,很不顺手的说,
期待被批的遍体鳞伤,寻找动力中
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... =1628567&page=1

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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-19 at 00:12 ]

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发表于 2005-7-18 19:49:44 |显示全部楼层

我仔细修改过了。请老大看看。谢谢啦！

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ;highlight=%2Bzehua
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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-19 at 00:50 ]

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发表于 2005-7-18 20:11:58 |显示全部楼层

恳请老大指点一二，谢谢！！！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-7-19 at 00:48 ]

APPLY:1-->AD:1-->飞了

The luckiest dreamers are those who never quit dreaming!

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发表于 2005-7-18 20:16:38 |显示全部楼层

顶一个！·自己写出来后也放到这里吧！要加油啊！:)谢谢斑竹！

Mencius said,"When heaven is about to confer a great office on any man,it first exercises his mind with suffering, and his sinews and bones with toil.It exposes his body to hunger………….By all these methods, it stimulates his mind, consolidates his character, and increases his efficiency".

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