美味英语雅思范文-空运水果蔬菜之利弊

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发布时间： 2005-8-2 13:41:46 被阅览数： 2 次 来源： 美味英语俱乐部  
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Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where those plants can’t grow or out of season. Some say it is a good thing, but others consider this use of air transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion



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Air transport is commonly used to move fruits and vegetables to places where those farm products can’t grow or are out of season. The benefits of such business are obvious, but air transport also creates a number of problems.



Transport of fruits and vegetables by air enables consumers to enjoy a wider variety of fresh and in-season farm products from all over the world. Not only is air transport good for consumers, it is also a blessing for farmers because the market is no longer restricted by regions. As a result, air transport increases the sale volume by selling more products in more places.



Moreover, air transport of food has now become a major resource of incomes for air companies. In the past, air companies’ business mainly came from serving passengers. However, facing an increasingly tough market, air companies need to expand their share of market to serve a wider range of customers in order to stay in the game and make a profit. With a booming economy and more money to spend, people create a great potential for food transport business and good margin for air companies.



In spite of such benefits, air transport is not free of problems. One major issue is high cost. Air transport is probably the most expensive way of transport. Higher costs entail high prices, which in turn deprive people with less money the opportunities to enjoy such privileges. So air transported food is now for the rich, a fact that is unfair for poor people.  

   

In addition, it is not the best option to solve problems by transporting food from outside for places where certain kinds of fruits does not grow. The most optimal way, it seems to me, is that we should change the environment required by such plants using scientific and biological methods such as creating suitable soil and temperature. Such solutions will be proven to be ultimately cost-effective and fundamental.



More importantly, research indicates that air transport pollutes the environment. For example, Britain transports half its food by air. However one kilo New Zealand fruit emits five kilo warm house gas on its way to destination. Therefore, some environmental groups and books advocate people to distinguish local fruit and air-transported fruit in an effort to cut the pollution from food consumption.



In conclusion, air transport has many benefits for consumers and farmers, but it also has problems such as high cost and pollution. More effective and environmental friendly solution should be found to address such problems.

蜻蜓切UID: 201589

这个好像是去年的真题。

lucy_zq2002UID: 177408

楼主的文章层次感很好，一目了然。大家看每段第一句就清楚了，可以借鉴来写。
谢谢yummy一直的支持！bow~~~

[ Last edited by lucy_zq2002 on 2005-8-2 at 23:16 ]

yummyenglishUID: 2110202

tingdao meimei dekuajiang

hen happy

qiaoUID: 2103572

第一段，先改写题目交代背景。第二句，本文中心句。
第二，第三段，分别从消费者，生产者的角度写好处，
接下来，一个转折，从成本，他因，环境的角度写坏处。由此，结构清晰，衔接的很好。
再回头看题目要求“Discuss both views ”，很好的完成了任务。
最后，因为前面说的很好，结尾只要再总结一下，相比就显得不那么重要了。

分析一个问题，特别是经济问题，往往可以从以上这些角度着手来写。这样文章就非常饱满了。就是一个一般性的问题，解决方式也不止一种，可能有他因，所以题目给出的未必是最佳方案。
插一句提外话，作文，给你的题目本身就是有争议的，写同意或者反对意见都可以，只要有理有据，能够自圆其说即可。

偶觉得，楼主文章第一句改写的不是很好。痕迹重了点。如果本文得高分，应该是胜在多角度分析和结构上。

BTW。LUCY是MM，不是MEIMEI：）
YUMMY老师加油！以后文章集结出书，给我签名！

yummyenglishUID: 2110202

其实要把这种文章写清楚，首先自己要把观点想清楚，写的具体一点，形象一点就好，
其中一些遗憾是肯定的，但是也没有太大必要要求过于完美，因为这样会考试的时候影响你的整体思路，就是说别因为考虑一句话一个字的表达，耽误了时间和其他部分写作

至于出书，是有这个打算，以后等条件成熟了再说吧，要是真出了，我送你一本