[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

被遗忘的UID: 2109758

基础太差
才开始学半个月
开始的时候听力完全听不懂，跟我自己比较，现在我Pa部分错13个，段子目前还是完全听不懂，语法错13个，阅读15个。。。语法和阅读都根本没练呢

我该怎么安排复习时间，有建议吗？
我自己准备8月15号把单词过一遍，这个月过3遍
这个月就把95——00的真题听力Pa部分搞懂，然后就是单词
其余的根本没时间弄。。。。

这样时间来的及吗？心灰意冷，呵呵

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by 被遗忘的 at 2005-8-9 23:46
基础太差
才开始学半个月
开始的时候听力完全听不懂，跟我自己比较，现在我Pa部分错13个，段子目前还是完全听不懂，语法错13个，阅读15个。。。语法和阅读都根本没练呢

我该怎么安排复习时间，有建议吗？
我 ...

那一定要大量练习才可以了，不要着急，给自己定个详细计划
个人建议拿95-99的入门，听力试试新东方的听力突破，找一本语法书系统过一便，阅读每天至少2篇，单词反复过
然后做00-04的模考，10T时候肯定还有互助活动的，跟大家一起讨论进步会很快的
偶可能体会不了在职gter的苦，anyway，给你加油！

[ Last edited by 蝴蝶结 on 2005-8-9 at 23:56 ]

被遗忘的UID: 2109758

谢谢你，我会努力的
我现在工作都辞了，呵呵
主要是我的基础太差

我也在听网络课程
再次谢谢你

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by lpingyang at 2005-8-9 23:46
蝴蝶结姐，能帮我看一下作文吗？我个人认为自己论据不行，但又不知如何提高啊！急死了！
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life.

Probably nowhere  ...

不急的话，明天改好么？

cookUID: 181960

谢谢蝴蝶结jj

lpingyangUID: 2120588

不急不急,休息休息,谢谢谢谢

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life.

Probably nowhere else in the world has the issue whether games teach is about life been so much debated in our country. Contrary to the generally accepted idea（既然上句说是debate，这里怎么又generally accepted idea了呢？）, I would like to prove that playing games teaches us about life. First, children learn how to communicate; second, it helps develop the children’s ability to cooperate.开门见山，不错，不过怎么都是children？

The most important thing children learn from games is the art of communication. Children usually have to persuade others to work with them to accomplish a task or overcome a difficulty during a game. As a result, they must talk to their friends and discuss the details before they finally come to an agreement. During the process, children must declare their objectives clearly and eloquently, invite their friends to participate in a respectful way, and convince their friends. Children can learn how to be an effective communicator through games.

Equally important, children can learn to balance their benefits with others’ in order to work together. According to a survey, children who often play games appear to performance better than those who do not in teamwork. During games, children learn how to be leaders as well as companions. They can negotiate with other children when confronting conflicts. It is crucial for people to be cooperative. Children can master that through games.      

Critics of children’s playing games argue that any games provide children an imaginary world which has nothing to do with the children. But I want to say that it is impossible to require every game being designed perfect. These games often tell us about responsibility and friendship. It is probably not fairly to say that they teach children nothing.

Superficially, playing games seems meaningless to children , but when carefully weighing in mind, we find that games actually provide children many things more than fun, such as the art of communication, the ability to cooperate and so forth. In conclusion, I do not agree to the idea that playing games teaches children nothing.

首先，文章完全定位于children，是不是有些偏了？你的论点同样适用于成人呀！
第二，body1、2、3都没有例子的说~
第三，既然有body3的反面论述，开头主题句写成让步比较好
第四，其他都不错的说~~
第五，可能说的有点苛刻了，因为刚考完AW，不太适应TWE了，说的不对的地方见凉:p;);)

[ Last edited by 蝴蝶结 on 2005-8-10 at 00:55 ]

cookUID: 181960

蝴蝶结jj，我今天模考0401，听力错了十个，partA错了8个，语法全对，阅读错了4个，用了53分多，twe ye没有思路，好像全面下滑了呀，我该怎么办呀

[ Last edited by cook on 2005-8-10 at 11:49 ]

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by cook at 2005-8-10 11:42
蝴蝶结jj，我今天模考0401，听力错了十个，partA错了8个，语法全对，阅读错了4个，twe 没有思路，好像全面下滑了呀，我该怎么办呀

恩这套听力本来就比较BT的，多听几遍Part A，其实就是语速语调的问题，难度没有变
语法阅读难道下滑了？0个4个还不好么？
TWE还是要多思考哦，昨天Fernando和苹果的讨论不错，加入他们吧~

lpingyangUID: 2120588

怎样才叫有例子呢,是只要有for example就行吗

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by lpingyang at 2005-8-10 12:08
怎样才叫有例子呢,是只要有for example就行吗

举出一个具体游戏的说~

Sugar_zhaoUID: 2126020

看到大家互助好感动啊~!我也想加入,只是自己在哪方面都是新人.
看到蝴蝶结jj帮了好多人呐~!请也帮帮我吧.
我要奋斗10T
gg,jj8T之后请多帮助我!先谢谢了!
在这就先不插嘴了!

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by Sugar_zhao at 2005-8-10 14:05
看到大家互助好感动啊~!我也想加入,只是自己在哪方面都是新人.
看到蝴蝶结jj帮了好多人呐~!请也帮帮我吧.
我要奋斗10T
gg,jj8T之后请多帮助我!先谢谢了!
在这就先不插嘴了!

多多发帖，10T互助的时候早点报名~~

Sugar_zhaoUID: 2126020

好!
可是要怎么报名?

Sugar_zhaoUID: 2126020

jj不用回答上个问题了！我看到贴子了．
１０Ｔ的时候看到互助贴跟贴就行了，对吧．