[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

LIULI0901UID: 2110320

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-10 20:06

恩，最近就在看JJ给的155例文

你能看完么？？我在在试图去看，但是我发现好多啊，我连论点还没有写完:L

fiaoyayaUID: 193089

Originally posted by LIULI0901 at 2005-8-10 21:27
jj帮我看两道语法题吧
Stars derive (their) energy (from) thermonuclear reactions that (take place) in (their) heat interiors.为什么选D)啊.
The Mississippi , the (longest) river in the United State ...

我记得第一个划线是在 heat下, 所以是heat>hot
as small> as a small

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LIULI0901UID: 2110320

大家帮我看一下作文题吧
125agree or disagree ?All students should be required to study art and music in secondry school?
126agree or disagree?There is nothing that young people can teach older people.除了高科技还有啥牙？
128Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day.Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies.锻炼身体除了有易于身体健康还有什么啊

LIULI0901UID: 2110320

Originally posted by fiaoyaya at 2005-8-10 21:31

我记得第一个划线是在 heat下, 所以是heat>hot
as small> as a small

谢谢了，偶的书居然印错了:L

cookUID: 181960

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-10 19:51


例子不在数量，要支持自己论点才可以的说，但绝对不能没有~
范文是最好的老师:cool:

如果有两个分论点是不是都得有例子？

还有，我今天也试着写了篇人物的，编了一个人既是教育家又是化学家
发现支持分论点的全是例子，说理的只有一句，这样合适不合适啊

cookUID: 181960

总结 听力时从哪几个角度阿

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by cook at 2005-8-10 23:08

如果有两个分论点是不是都得有例子？

还有，我今天也试着写了篇人物的，编了一个人既是教育家又是化学家
发现支持分论点的全是例子，说理的只有一句，这样合适不合适啊

既然大家都有疑问不妨把文章贴出来讨论一下恩~

FernandoUID: 157455

Originally posted by LIULI0901 at 2005-8-10 21:43

谢谢了，偶的书居然印错了:L

ETS官方出的那本上面是错的

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by cook at 2005-8-10 23:14
总结 听力时从哪几个角度阿

这个很难讲啊，因人而异滴~

cookUID: 181960

明天中午贴上来吧
considering that almost 300 words, that will be a big project !

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

Originally posted by LIULI0901 at 2005-8-10 21:40
大家帮我看一下作文题吧
125agree or disagree ?All students should be required to study art and music in secondry school?
126agree or disagree?There is nothing that young people can teach older peo ...

锻炼人的心理，使人自信

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

Originally posted by LIULI0901 at 2005-8-10 21:28

你能看完么？？我在在试图去看，但是我发现好多啊，我连论点还没有写完:L

看多少是多少
看看结构，句子。。。。。。

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-10 23:29


既然大家都有疑问不妨把文章贴出来讨论一下恩~

支持恩，人物好难写的感觉。。。。

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

89. If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

    Some day I can travel back in time since the  development of science.History is the lens in camera.I can learn mang lessons frome it and ancient people. Have I the chance,I would travel many different countrys,meet many differnet people such as Licon,Newton,Kong Zi and lso on,however,Wu ZeTian is who I want to meet best.

    Wu ZeTian,a wife of the king of China,is different from others.She was the first Queen in Chinese history,and was the only one during  so long time.

    Wu Ze Tian had been  so bright since she was a little girl that she had learned many tings.For instance,she had learned how to sew,how to cook while she also can read and write,paly variouties of music instruments and dance.She even been a poet. Until the time of today,we can read her poems.

     When she had been married with the emperor,she started to study in how to manage the country.Quickly,she became a very good asistant of her husband.She helped him to make laws and policies and do many good suggestions as well.
  
    At last,Wu ZeTian became the Queen of the Tang.She made many decisions for the development of the economy,subjected to develop science and tecnolgy.For example,during her times,the medican developed fast,Many doctors wrote books,one of which was written by Sun SiMiao who had been more than one hundand years old.She also tried her best to promote rights of woman.

    Although many historian do not think she  was a good queen,I regard her as a great woman,also want to meet her and ask her many questions

放大ING

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

whether people should do the things they do not enjoy doing?

Currently, some people claim that there is no need to do the things people do not enjoy doing, which I take leave to doubt----then everyone can choose the most satisfying life. Unfortunately, the fact is just the opposite, accordingly, in my view, doing the unenjoyable is necessary.

Admittedly, life is always fraught with numerous uncertainties, be they enjoyable or unenjoyalbe, we are bound to confront them. For instance, it is true that no man is willing to take exams, however, because competitions are increasingly fierce and there is no other better way to choose the most desirable person for a certain post, we have to take the exams, though we are reluctant to do so.

Aside from that, choosing only the enjoyable things to do is to some extent a negative attitude towards life. It is widely acknowledged that things we most would like to do are probably the easiest for us. Therefore, evading the unenjoyable is simply shying away from difficulties. A person may be fortunate enough to get rid of one problem, but sooner or later he has to knuckle down to reality and at that time, he may find more difficulties he has to face.

Further, compared with happiness or the sense of achievement, which is always fleeting and sometimes can make us complacent, perseverence 这个词对么？we derive from the process of dealing with the unenjoyable is usually indispensable when we are in a similar situation. And only in this way can we always have a down-to-earht attitude, which is of great importance while we are coping with other problem.

By and large, because it is inevitable to be confronted with the unenjoyable, which will in some degree endow us with a possitude attitude and perseverance,  it is surely wise to challenge them.

写的很好啊，再说不好就打pp了哦~
恩如果说问题的话，三个body都是泛指的例子man啊，a person啊，试试举个具体的，自己的，身边人的，名人的都行，文章会生动很多哦~~
嘿嘿，偶可是深夜给你挑骨头啊，得了5.5要请客的说~~~
好了~下班~Zzzzz去了~

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