[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

zozoUID: 2116386

热心的蝴蝶JJ:
我作文写了7篇了，可还是严重超时啊。
没人帮改也不知写到什么程度。
更头疼的是：总想不到好的例子来论证，不知咋办了

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by zozo at 2005-8-15 22:40
热心的蝴蝶JJ:
我作文写了7篇了，可还是严重超时啊。
没人帮改也不知写到什么程度。
更头疼的是：总想不到好的例子来论证，不知咋办了

米有时间了，多看范文和列提纲吧~

cookUID: 181960

段子有必要一块听一下吗
今天看了一下错题，一部分是由于不懂场景，另一部分是觉得选项中没有自己停下的那个意思

[ Last edited by cook on 2005-8-15 at 23:10 ]

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by cook at 2005-8-15 23:07
段子有必要一块听一下吗
今天看了一下错题，一部分是由于不懂场景，另一部分是觉得选项中没有自己停下的那个意思

不必，按考试数量就可以了~
总结出来就好，多下点工夫在弱项上吧~
加油~~

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

今天的网不知怎么了，5分钟一断，气愤:@:@:@
所以文章先不看了，明天一定~:)
恩各位有问题的话先讨论讨论吧~~
记着早点睡~~~
good night~;)

FernandoUID: 157455

模考真的好影响心情，昨天模的不好，结果郁闷了一天，晚上床上躺了2个小时才睡着，失眠了阿，二进宫的滋味可真不好，老妈说，不行再考一次，再考我会疯了的
今天刚模完，巨爽，建议大家做一下ets发的那个test题，增加自信的哦
0308开始的题目都有变态的，做得不好可不要影响了心情

Zero0120UID: 2121937

语法求救

most of our ideas of (what) ancient people looked (and) dressed （come） from the（ works of ）Renaissance artists.
answer A
why
massachusttes was ( first explored ) in the late sixteenth and (early) seventeenth (centuries), and the first premanent (settlement at) playmounth in 1620.

my answer is B the early
answer is D

why

Zero0120UID: 2121937

With the development of modern media, the lives of famous people such as public figures, stars and celebrities are exposed more and more thoroughly. Some persons argue that media pay too much attention to these persons’ private lives, but what I want to say is that the attention to famous figures can never be more than necessary.
At first, many famous persons usually exert big influence over normal people, such as politicians and entrepreneurs. These persons’ behaviors can be closely relative to our daily life. For example, if a entrepreneur invest a factory which produce a new sort of productions, many consumers will buy it and use it. However, if the production has faults and knowing that the entrepreneur still insists on introducing it into the market for money, many people may suffer the damage from the faults. If we had known more about the personality of the businessman through knowing his personal life, we can judge the quality of the new production. Therefore examining famous people’s personal life helps protect public profits.
Further more, some entertainment stars and politicians have become a part of normal people’s lives. We often char with friends about certain movie stars at lunch or exemplify some behaviors of some politicians in our argument. The lives of these famous figures have not only belonged to themselves but also to all the people caring about them. Therefore, more exposures of their lives is the need of the society.
Though some people, especially these famous persons themselves, complain too much attention to these famous ones, I deem that media are doing just a right thing. After all, when these big persons chose to be abnormal ones, they should have known that they would lead an abnormal life as well.

wscikiUID: 168925

恭喜恭喜!!哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈!!!

fiaoyayaUID: 193089

我干掉0408和0410了~~受了很大的打击~~~~看来这就是我的真正水平了~~~
0408 听力错了6道或者8道因为有争议~~短的3-4道,长的3-4道,我的长对话~~~~/``怎么办啊? 语法全对,阅读错了3道~~~~死定了
接着偶又干了0410,听力还是错了6道,2短4长,语法也错了4道,阅读更是恐怖8道,算了下分数,607,心寒~~~听力我要抓长对话了,该怎么抓呢?

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by Zero0120 at 2005-8-16 11:34
语法求救

most of our ideas of (what) ancient people looked (and) dressed （come） from the（ works of ）Renaissance artists.
answer A
why
massachusttes was ( first explored ) in the late six ...

1.what改成how
2.觉得是settlement in
   the early米有这么表达的说,the earlist是对的:)

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by fiaoyaya at 2005-8-16 14:40
我干掉0408和0410了~~受了很大的打击~~~~看来这就是我的真正水平了~~~
0408 听力错了6道或者8道因为有争议~~短的3-4道,长的3-4道,我的长对话~~~~/``怎么办啊? 语法全对,阅读错了3道~~~~死定了
接着偶又干了0410 ...

不象你啊，要有信心的说~~~
段子要注意开头和结尾，语法再强化，错题不能多于2道！
坚持一下，就要胜利了~~:victory:

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

晕，怎么没题目？

With the development of modern media, the lives of famous people such as public figures, stars and celebrities are exposed more and more thoroughly. Some persons argue that media pay too much attention to these persons’ private lives, but what I want to say is that the attention to famous figures can never be more than necessary.（猜你这段前面是题目原话吧，尽量改写一下比较好）

At first, many famous persons usually exert big （换个高级点的词汇）influence over normal people, such as politicians and entrepreneurs. These persons’ behaviors can be closely relative to our daily life. For example, if a entrepreneur invest a factory which produce a new sort of productions, many consumers will buy it and use it. However, if the production has faults and knowing that the entrepreneur still insists on introducing it into the market for money, many people may suffer the damage from the faults. If we had known more about the personality of the businessman through knowing his personal life, we can judge the quality of the new production. Therefore examining famous people’s personal life helps protect public profits.

Further more, some entertainment stars and politicians have become a part of normal people’s lives. We often char（chat） with friends about certain movie stars at lunch or exemplify some behaviors of some politicians in our argument. The lives of these famous figures have not only belonged to themselves but also to all the people caring about them. Therefore, more exposures of their lives is the need of the society.

Though some people, especially these famous persons themselves, complain too much attention to these famous ones, I deem that media are doing just a right thing. After all, when these big persons chose to be abnormal ones, they should have known that they would lead an abnormal life as well.

整体感觉不错，如果有三个body就更好了~
加油~~

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

When it comes to the best way to travel, some people argue that traveling in a group led by a tour guide is best, how ever some people prefer to travel alone or with a few friends without a guide. My opinion is that there exists no best means to travel, the way chosen should depend on the nature of the travel.

A travel with a guide is more comfortable when a person want to experience something new or travel at dangerous places. You can image that when you travel aboard and come to a local religious place e.g. a temple which is unfamiliar to you, you cannot acknowledge the meanings of the cult and enjoy your trip without a guide. Some other cases may fall onto trips at dangerous places, namely high mountains turbulent rivers or forests full of dangerous species. In these cases, a guide may ensure your security and make you enjoy your tour without worrying about it.

On the other hand, a guide may make a travel less comfortable if one only want to relax himself or to enjoy the time with friends during the travel. If I am at this sort of travels, I will not hire a guide.（米有展开）

A guide in a travel can surely make it more comfortable, more enjoyable and safer with his or her knowledge, but whether a traveler needs one will depend on the particular situation of the travel.

30分钟

还是分论点少，看完觉得你就是同意题目观点，而且字数好象不够~

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Topic: 93（又米有题目）

Nowadays what most university students must experience is living with roommates. There are many arguments about what makes a good roommate. In my opinion the following three characters can outline a person with whom most people will be pleased to live.

First of all, he or she should be considerate. Everyone vulnerably has some difficulties in daily life, however, because of certain reasons, it may be hard for us to turn to others. For example, when short of money, some person prefers to cut down costs rather than borrow money. However, if your roommate find the fact and is considerate enough, he or she perhaps will help you to overcome the financial difficulty which will be of great help.

Another feature should be tolerance. Students living in a dormitory come from different locations, and they may have various cultures and backgrounds, so there are likely to exist differences between them. Everyone in the room should respect the others’ personality and be tolerant with the variation existing. Without this, everybody in the room will not get the peace.

At last, the college life will be better if your roommate happens to have the same hobby with you. Then you will have a lot to do at leisure time and besides enjoying yourself you can also make a very good friend.（加个例子就好了）

Although the criteria of a good roommate vary from one to another, I think one is fortunate enough if he or she has one who is considerate and tolerant and has the same interest.

恩最好的一篇了，继续努力~