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8.24题目

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36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."

41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

185"Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

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8.24题目

117The following is a memo from the business manager of Valu-Mart stores.

"Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores."

17The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove town newspaper.

"Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal (which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove for the past ten years) to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still $2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover, EZ—which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks—has ordered additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied' with EZ's performance."

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发表于 2005-8-24 12:15:46 |只看该作者

我第一个~哈哈~

issue41, 修改过
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325569

argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325571

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发表于 2005-8-24 15:27:50 |只看该作者

修改过的 argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1778329

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发表于 2005-8-24 15:40:41 |只看该作者

今天的作业：
argument17
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=325671

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发表于 2005-8-25 12:51:35 |只看该作者

8月24号的作业

issue36
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=326174

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发表于 2005-8-25 12:54:47 |只看该作者

参考下其它战队的情况，固定人员列表互改。

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发表于 2005-8-25 12:54:56 |只看该作者

：（

对不起各位了，这两天遇到了麻烦的事和人，不过我一定会努力把这两天补回来的，也希望大家能有好的心态，不被不相关的事情所打扰

一会把今天的题目贴出来

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8.25题目

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7、"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

154"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."

144"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.

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发表于 2005-8-25 14:04:47 |只看该作者

8.25 argument

163The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

"In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockingham's century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer. The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall. Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham."

131The following appeared in an environmental newsletter published in Tria Island.

"The marine sanctuary on Tria Island was established to protect certain marine mammals. Its regulations ban dumping and offshore oil drilling within 20 miles of Tria, but fishing is not banned. Currently many fish populations in Tria's waters are declining, a situation blamed on pollution. In contrast, the marine sanctuary on Omni Island has regulations that ban dumping, offshore oil drilling, and fishing within 10 miles of Omni and Omni reports no significant decline in its fish populations. Clearly, the decline in fish populations in Tria's waters is the result of overfishing, not pollution. Therefore, the best way to restore Tria's fish populations and to protect all of Tria's marine wildlife is to abandon our regulations and adopt those of Omni."

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发表于 2005-8-25 15:42:15 |只看该作者

请问请问,我也参加可以吗?我9.14的

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发表于 2005-8-25 16:31:39 |只看该作者

挖啊！！
每天三I二A么？！！

天啊！！

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发表于 2005-8-25 18:11:58 |只看该作者

Originally posted by 木紫000 at 2005-8-25 14:09
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=324973

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... 3Dtype%26typei ...

两个链接错误更改下:)

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