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发表于 2005-9-14 17:07:37 |只看该作者

美味雅思范文-反复记忆对教育的重要性

Memorization of information by frequency repetition (rote learning) plays a role in education system to what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Learning is a complex process that involves different strategies and stages. As a key approach of learning, memorization of information by repetition contributes to the overall effectiveness of an education system. But we should also admit that rote learning has a number of limitations.   

Learning by repetition is an effective strategy in learning. For example, Chinese people believe that one will get the gist of a book after reading it for a hundred times. Researchers have found that rote learning is particularly useful for young learners. When teaching children how to use a computer, instructors show them over and over again until they can perform tasks correctly. Moreover, for certain kinds of learning at early stage, the understanding involved is often minimal. Naturally rote learning assumes an important role.   

However, we need to bear in mind that meaningful learning is more essential for our education system. When students grow older and enter higher grades, the scope and depth of their learning grow. Surely rote learning can help students learn knowledge by heart but it could do little to improve their analyzing ability and creativity. There has been strong criticism that some schools overemphasize the importance of memorization of knowledge and produce students with great weaknesses in applying knowledge in practice. Solution for such problem could be that schools and students put in more effort into meaningful learning.  

To conclude, learning is a complex progress and students employ different strategies at various stages. Rote learning is important in education system, but meaningful learning is more critical for students in obtaining advanced ability and skills.

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发表于 2005-9-14 23:05:04 |只看该作者
对yummy老师感激之情,无以言表,献上美图一张,笑纳:hug:(偶在这个帖子里面插上一脚,无比光荣;P)

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发表于 2005-9-15 09:34:18 |只看该作者

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发表于 2005-9-16 12:12:19 |只看该作者

雅思作文论点选择技巧

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请认真阅读以下例子:
If a five-year-old commits a crime, should the parents be held responsible and punished? What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility? 如果一个5岁小孩犯罪,小孩父母应该负责并接受法律制裁吗?你认为在小孩多大的情况下,父母就不应该为孩子的行为负责了?

题目分析:
题目要求考生回答2个问题,问题1:should the parents be held responsible and punished?问题2:What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility? 首先,考生应该分析年幼儿童犯罪、父母责任、法律制裁之间的关系,其次需要回答父母与孩子的责任与孩子年龄之间的关系。

在进行初步的思考后,考生会根据自己的理解,想出一些和问题有关的论点。根据上题要求,我们给出一些论点,请考虑应该选择下面哪些来阐明你的论点:

a  Parents give their children early education in many ways and have direct  
   influences on them.
   父母是孩子的直接教育者和影响者
b  Society takes a critical role in the development of children.
   社会对孩子的成长起到重要的作用
c  Personalities of children affect their behaviors.
   孩子本身的性格特点影响其行为方式
d   Children’s rights should be protected.
    儿童权益应该得到保护
e   Crimes are among the major determents to the stability and development of  
society.
犯罪是危害社会安定和发展的重要原因
f   It is inhumanistic act to punish young children by law.
    用法律惩罚儿童不人道
g   Children should be fully responsible for their action when they reach 18.
儿童18岁后就应该为自己行为全部负责
h   Children become mentally and physically fully developed at 18.
    儿童在18岁身心发展均变成熟。

经过对上面的一些论点分析后,基本可以得到以下的结论:

a  把孩子的行为和父母教育联系起来,支持孩子犯罪父母应该受到惩罚的论点。
b  把孩子行为和社会影响联系起来,支持孩子犯罪父母不应受到惩罚的论点。
c  把孩子行为和本身性格联系起来,支持父母不应受到惩罚的论点。
d  儿童权益应该得到保护的论点和父母是否受惩罚没有直接关系。
e  犯罪是危害社会安定和发展的重要原因也和父母是否受惩罚没有直接关系。
f  用法律惩罚儿童不人道也和父母是否受惩罚没有直接关系。
g  儿童18岁后就应该为自己行为全部负责回答了第二个问题
h  儿童在18岁身心发展均变成熟和回答第二个问题有关。

通过考虑,我们排除与问题没有直接关系的d、e、f项。考生需要注意:在写作中不要仅仅因为文章好写而只论述单纯支持,或者单纯反对的论点。因为雅思考官希望考生可以相对全面看待一个问题,所以要在表达自己论点的同时合理把正反两面的论点都溶入文章里。考虑问题更全面,考生写作素材也更多,可以降低考生在字数方面的压力。

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发表于 2005-9-18 00:41:45 |只看该作者

王军美味英语9月17日雅思真题范文

Some people believe that the use of animals for experimentation purpose is cruel; others believe that it is necessary for the development of science.

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Animal testing has been applied as a normal procedure of scientific research for years. There are emerging criticisms arguing that the sufferings inflicted on laboratory animals are brutal. However, the progress of sciences would be seriously hampered if heavy regulations are imposed on animal research.

Many medications and procedures currently in use would not exist if animal testing was banned. Animal testing has assisted mankind in successfully developing vaccines and antibiotics. Life-saving techniques such as organ transplant also own thanks to animal research. Such development in science has cured people around the globe, saving millions of lives. However, what could we use to achieve comparable results without animal research? Our science is not so advanced that we could test a new drug on a flower or tomato before its clinical application. Of course, mankind could not sacrifice human lives for the purpose of research.  

In comparison to the costs in terms of the sufferings on animals, the advantages that animal testing has brought to humans are much greater. Human society is required to generate valuable consequences, even at the cost of inflicting pain to some animals whose lives may be worthy. Nevertheless, the value of their lives does not count as much as the value of human life because human beings have much higher capability and sensibility than animals.

However, it is also true that pain killers are not administered to animals in many cases of animal testing. Animals even as a lower form of life deserve to be treated with due humanity. So mankind has a moral obligation to decrease the sufferings of animals within their power.

In conclusion, animal testing is crucial as a procedure of science. Its elimination would severely hamper development of sciences. However mankind should also do their best to decrease the sufferings of laboratory animals.

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发表于 2005-9-18 16:35:22 |只看该作者

谢谢关心

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发表于 2005-9-20 13:23:11 |只看该作者

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发表于 2005-9-23 15:00:37 |只看该作者

政府应该建老式建筑吗

政府应该建老式建筑吗

Government should protect culture. Therefore, some people believe that new building should be built in traditional style. Do you agree or disagree?

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The culture of a country changes in the course of social development. This is what is happening in developing nations such as China. Government has the obligation to preserve the culture of a country in a proper way.

In the real-estate business, for example, developers build houses, apartments, and offices to meet the demands of consumers differing in taste and spending power. Some buildings are built in traditional style as a selling point to differentiate from competing products. In some cases, a municipal government tries to give its city a unique aroma by constructing buildings in old style. However, such newly built “old” buildings appear strikingly different from the originals centuries old. On the campus of Peking University, we can easily tell the differences between the old and the new. Even we admire the university’s efforts, this is not a work beautifully done. More examples would be found in many architects that are ridiculed by both consumers and critics.

The real issue is: could culture be replicated? If yes, then to what extent do buildings represent a culture? In China, the more commonly known architect styles are found in temples or palaces. Though the government tries to recreate such places, people often label them as fake.  

In spite of the disadvantages in government’s efforts in cultural preservation, we have to recognize that such endeavor reminds people of their unique identity and legacy. And it balances the trend that tries to make everything western just to keep up with the trend.

To sum up, it is very hard or sometimes impossible for the government to create truly good work in traditional style to preserve a culture. Nonetheless, such efforts are worthy because of the positive influences they have on people in a country with rich history and culture like China.

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发表于 2005-11-12 21:50:25 |只看该作者
老师?
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