我写的作文，帮修改一下

小雅UID: 2139709

some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge,but to give practical training benefit to society.do uagree or disagree.use your own experience and knowledge to support your idea.
  
   Nowadays more and more university students begin to be aware of the methods of education.Some people say that we should learn practical training;other people suggest that we should not only learn practical but theoretical as well.I fully agree with the statement of latter.
   
   As to me,theoretical is very important as well practical.We can learn theoretical from books,incontrast,we obtain experience3 from society,i.e.pratical.One in a newspaper,i hit upon the report that undergraduate just from university engaged in business,he fully use theoretical in co-operative,however,result in unsuccessful.If only practical,i feel it's still do.Beause,we can gain the theoreticalknowledge in studying,the same as associate with pratical.This person,i believe,he or she is elite.
   
   Of course,there are a large amount of arguments which may be advanced in defense of the theoretical knowledge and practical in useful.There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for the capable of student in all company.It is undeniable that the ability of person has become the biggest concern of the elite of market,even the present-day world.There are numerous reasons why the association with the theoretical and pratical in human being,and i would explore only a few of the most significant ones here.

   From the foregoing,we can get result from some of reasons at top of it.What we must do is make sure that the theoretical ones are encouraged and the pratical ones are strengthen as far as possible。

[ Last edited by 小雅 on 2005-11-4 at 15:55 ]

蜻蜓切UID: 201589

theoretical is very important as well practical

我觉得这个错误太明显了，最好检查一下

We can learn theoretical from books

……建议楼主先自己检查一下，整篇文章有很多问题。

另外我觉得开头太普通了，我觉得考官如果发现每篇文章都这样，心情一定很郁闷。

小雅UID: 2139709

谢谢咯！