issue203 社会与英雄 (coffee小组) 拖欠作业了,,

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题号        203        题材分类        社会发展问题        考频       
题材倾向       
"The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines.”
中文翻译
了解一个社会特点最好的方法是去考察被这个社会视为英雄的人们的特点。
立场
4        1：完全同意 2：完全反对 3：中立态度 4：大正小负 5：大负小正
中文提纲
中文        论证        例证
1        基本同意立场       
2        英雄的含义和特点        Mother Teresa
3        社会特点的表现及决定因素       
4        英雄与社会的关系、作用.         Helen Keller
5        英雄不是全能的        firefighters and policemen
6        英雄的特点部分反映了社会特点——总结       


From ancient times to the present, almost every society chooses its heroes and heroines who can generally reflect the character of the whole nation. As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with the speaker to the extent that, it is just one way rather than the best way to understand the character of a society by examining the character of its heroes and heroines.

First of all, what is the character of heroes or heroines? In other words, who would be the hero or heroine? In common sense, the person admired for one’s achievements and noble qualities is considered as a hero or a heroine. The principally heroic merit in that heroes an heroines not only rescue people from jeopardizes, but also be regarded as the spiritual commander who can lead the masses to confront with difficulties and obstacles. Admittedly, as an abstract conception, the meanings of hero or heroine are discrepant according to the individuals’ philosophy and moral psychology. Mother Teresa, a Nobel Peace Laureate, in fighting for the dignity of the destitute in a foreign land, she gave the world a moral example that bridged divides of culture, class and religion. She is an undoubted heroine, and represents the noble qualities of the society.

On the other hand, how could we define the character of a society? Simply, it is the disposition and manner of human are formed by their situation, and arise from the state of society in which they live. Then, what are the mirrors of the social character? Both spiritual and behavioral, social character has various embodiment for certain, heroic traits should be an typical one.

As an old saying goes, “A hero is known in the time of misfortune.” Heroes and heroines are made and not born. Nearly every society spontaneously chooses its heroes or heroines are corresponding to current circumstance. Furthermore, they change people’s thinking in ways that lead to changes in actions, and thus to changes in the larger system that emerges from those actions. As we know, Helen Keller, worshipped for her courage and fortitude, altered our perception of the disabled even remapped the boundaries of sight and sense.

But it is unnecessary that all character of heroes and heroines ought to be the symbol of a society, whether it is proper or not. To be sure, no one is perfect. For instance, hundreds of firefighters and policemen that perished while trying to save others in the World Trade Center attacks in New York. No one can question their bravery, and certainly no one can deny that each and every one, no matter what their background, is a hero/heroine. One could possibly look into each firefighter, policeman or civilian's background and find problems in the past but there is absolutely no denying them their hero/heroine status on that day.

In sum, the prominent outstanding qualities of heroes and heroines display some aspects of social character. Thus examining the heroes’/heroines’ traits can be an ingenious but incomprehensive method to understand the character of a society.

[ Last edited by shiel on 2005-12-29 at 00:14 ]

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1. 开头对题目的分析不够,感觉就是一个背景+一个观点,可以研究一下范文的开头,小小那总结的有~~呵呵~~很经典的
2. 第二,三段最好放在一块儿写,又英雄的含义特点引出社会特点的表现及决定因素,这样文章结构显得要紧凑一点
3. 第四段的名言引用的很好~~但是在说完例子后最好在展开一下

shielUID: 2140229

范文---多看多看!再多看!

恩,  我会注意的,  谢谢!!

关于开头, 是不够有力, 是我这次看到有种主张是要简洁的开头, 所以...  唉,是自己功力不够, 写少了就表达不够有力了,  嘿嘿----

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From ancient times to the present, almost every society chooses its heroes and heroines who can generally reflect the character of the whole nation.( As far as I am concerned,  I tend to agree with the speaker to the extent that, it is just one way rather than the best way to understand the character of a society by examining the character of its heroes and heroines.表明立场)
First of all, what is the character of heroes or heroines? In other words, who would be the hero or heroine? In common sense, the person admired for one’s achievements and noble qualities is considered as a hero or a heroine. The principally heroic merit in that heroes an heroines not only rescue people from jeopardizes, but also be regarded as the spiritual commander who can lead the masses to confront with difficulties and obstacles. Admittedly, as an abstract conception, the meanings of hero or heroine are discrepant according to the individuals’ philosophy and moral psychology. Mother Teresa, a Nobel Peace Laureate, in fighting for the dignity of the destitute in a foreign land, she gave the world a moral example that bridged divides of culture, class and religion. She is an undoubted heroine, and represents the noble qualities of the society. （我认为这一点论证得不是很恰当，英雄的特质反映这个社会的价值取向和追求，并不能说英雄的特质就是社会的特质吧，那每个社会都有这种英雄，那每个社会都很高尚，这样就不算特点了吧）On the other hand, how could we define the character of a society? Simply, it is the disposition and manner of human are formed by their situation, and arise from the state of society in which they live. Then, what are the mirrors of the social character? Both spiritual and behavioral, social character has various embodiment for certain, heroic traits should be an typical one.

（As an old saying goes, “A hero is known in the time of misfortune.” Heroes and heroines are made and not born.好引用） Nearly every society spontaneously chooses its heroes or heroines are corresponding to current circumstance. Furthermore, they change people’s thinking in ways that lead to changes in actions, and thus to changes in the larger system that emerges from those actions. As we know, Helen Keller, worshipped for her courage and fortitude, altered our perception of the disabled even remapped the boundaries of sight and sense.

But it is unnecessary that all character of heroes and heroines ought to be the symbol of a society, whether it is proper or not. To be sure, no one is perfect. For instance, hundreds of firefighters and policemen that perished while trying to save others in the World Trade Center attacks in New York. No one can question their bravery, and certainly no one can deny that each and every one, no matter what their background, is a hero/heroine. One could possibly look into each firefighter, policeman or civilian's background and find problems in the past but there is absolutely no denying them their hero/heroine status on that day. （这个角度很好，但是没有展开说明，感觉再论述一下会更清楚）
In sum, the prominent outstanding qualities of heroes and heroines display some aspects of social character. Thus examining the heroes’/heroines’ traits can be an ingenious but an incomprehensive method to understand the character of a society.

总得看来，语言表达清楚，结构也清晰，可能跟我论证的角度不同吧，咱俩可以取长补短哈！
呵呵，加油！！！

shielUID: 2140229

很是谢谢的说哦,,

多多改进----