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Some people hold the opinion that students should be require to attend class , which do have lots of benefits for college students . On the other hand , others believe that going to classes should be optional for students . And it is , in so many aspects , very difficult ro prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages which is hard to distinguish .

On the one hand , university students who are required to attend class can acquire numerous benefits . Attending class regularly , they can manipulate the basic knowledge very well , and they will not be worried the final exam . Moreover , this kind of restriction can confine the students’ behavior which may induce a very terrible result . For example , some university students who always do not appear in the class will not get any score in the final exam . That is fair to the students who attend class all the time . However this kind of education system can not aspire the students’ enthusiasm . “ Nothing can be achieved successfully without enthusiasm . “ How often we hear such word s like these . And students must go to learn some of the subjects in which they are nor interested . It is boring .

On the other hand , the other system which states that going to classes should be optional for students has more advantages which far outweigh the disadvantages . University students can choose the course in which they are interested , and their enthusiasm can be achieved in a high level . Furthermore , students can acquire more spare time , in which they can work part-time , do some sports like swimming , and communicate with their friends and families . Last but not least , students can really experience the most significant learning method in university called self-study , which may be the most useful thing in the future . Students also can learn something about the method of critical thinking be themselves . Even though this system can not restrict all the students and some classes in which less students are interested can be cancelled , students do benefit a lot .

In conclusion , everybody want to choose the one that fits him or her . so, ti is of great merits for me to choose the second education system which is that going to classes should be optional for students . There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness for it , but the obvious ones have been presented above .

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Some people hold the opinion that students should be require to attend class , which do have lots of benefits for college students . On the other hand , others believe that going to classes should be optional for students . And it is , in so many aspects , very difficult ro prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages which is hard to distinguish .寄托家园,J Y*N _ u z

On the one hand , university students who are required to attend class can acquire numerous benefits . Attending class regularly , they can manipulate the basic knowledge very well , and they will not be worried the final exam . Moreover , this kind of restriction can confine the students’ behavior which may induce a very terrible result . For example , some university students who always do not appear in the class will not get any score in the final exam . That is fair to the students who attend class all the time . However this kind of education system can not aspire the students’ enthusiasm . “ Nothing can be achieved successfully without enthusiasm . “ How often we hear such word s like these 去掉. And students must go to learn some of the subjects in which they are nor interested . It is boring .

On the other hand , the other system which states that going to classes should be optional for students has more advantages which far outweigh the disadvantages . University students can choose the course in which they are interested（in） , and their enthusiasm can be achieved in a high level . Furthermore , students can acquire more spare time , in which they can work part-time , do some sports like swimming , and communicate with their friends and families . Last but not least , students can really experience the most significant learning method in university called self-study , which may be the most useful thing in the future . Students also can(can also) learn something about the method of critical thinking be去掉 themselves . Even though this system can not restrict all the students and some classes in which less students are interested can be cancelled , students do benefit a lot

In conclusion , everybody want to choose the one that fits him or her . so, ti is of great merits for me to choose the second education system which is that going to classes should be optional for students . There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness for it , but the obvious ones have been presented above .
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