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why is music so important to everyone?

nowadays, one can hear different kinds of music almost at every corner of the world. Flok music, country music, classic music, hip-pop and so on, each of them has certain group of listerner for its importance to everyone. basicaly, there are three main reasons to support this view as follows

to begin with, music mean life to musicians. many musicians, like Beetoven, consider music as essential as their life. they can almost give up everyone that they possess but music. meanwhile, music has become a way to present themselves to others. high peach represents their wrath, bass represents the peace from their innomost hear. what's more, music can also enlarge their life to some degree. for them, every time they finished a new composition, they experience a new life in that process and the music through being passed by, as a matter of fact, extends their physical life amd makes that meaningful.

secondly, to those ordinary people, music can be count as one of the best way to relax themselves from the competitive society and satisfy their illusion. for example, aftr working intensly for a long time, people will feel extremly relaxed when they sit down and listen to a piece of light music which lets them forget about that tidious work and find the true peace from their hearts. moreover, people can fly their thoughs with the pace of music and fullfill their illusion.

last but not least, to some extent, music is a very good way to make peple know other cultures,history, religions and so on. obviously, different cultures have different music style. American country is different from chinese country music for instance. through appreicating music, we can touth that culture with our sensative hearing and catch the culture's essence and that period of history as well. for example, American Lost generation's special music, althogh is not acceped by most people, really reflect that geneation's thoguh and that period of history background as well.

to sum up, music with its various styles and multiple functions, serves as an important part in peple's life. as long as it exists, it will make the world more colorful!

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susan8940UID: 160449

很喜欢楼主的名字啊：）
大概看了下，个别语法和句法错误楼主再改一下啊
另外第一段可以强调下观点，有点模糊，还有第四段有点偏，可以从people的角度来讲他们enjoy/share different culture,etc总之紧扣下主题
暂时没法细看啦，以上说的纯属个人意见，说的不对楼主见谅啊：）
我的，楼主指教下吧
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