LZ首先说not many universities in China provide this degree. 下面一句话应该是but in the stats, many universities provide such kind of degree,对吧。可是LZ却说美国的要比中国好得多,中国都没有当然要比中国好得多了,所以此句一点意义都没有。你如果想说美国这方面比重过好很多,你前面一句话至少也应该说: although many chinese universities provide such kind of degree,这样才让VO感觉到你有很强的逻辑性和条理性。