Issue83 Infinity小组第四次作业

sweet_fruitUID: 2190845

题目：ISSUE83 - "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."

1 同意题目观点
2 wilderness areas有很重要的科研价值，还可以调节气候
3 wilderness areas即使在比较偏远的地方也可以被破坏，因为人类的欲望没有止境
4 如果现在没有保护造成严重的后果而且也无法再弥补
5 重述观点


Should government preserver publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state? Some people believe that if the areas are so remote that few people travel to, it isn't necessary for government to protect them. In my point of view, I hold that government should protect the publicly owned wilderness areas despite they are remote and accessible to only a few people.

In the first place, the wilderness areas often have numberous amounts of previous resource such as some wildlife with a siginificant study and research  value. Not only can scientists acquire mant useful information and knowledge from the wildlife but they can obtain mant precious materials for experiments that can not be found in the common place. An apt example is panda, named as "live fossil", which supports a great many of useful information for the biologists and historian to research the evolution in the history. Moreover, the wildness areas also play crucial role in regulating the climate and keeping a balance nature because of the broad rainforest and other plants. The trees, often growing in the wildness areas, can aborb carbon dioxide and release oxygen making great efforts on improving the quality and environment.

In the second place, the wildness areas are readily to be destructed and polluted because human might do many behaviors even crimes to make profits regardness of the distance. Even some people derive the living rights of the wildlife for their own desire. The best instance is the chiru. It is known in the world for the wools woven into expensive shshtoosh shawls and scarves, which is the symbols of the fashion in the west. Though the chiru usually live in the least known cover of the world-----Qinghai-Tibetan Plateau and run at a remarkably speed, they are still poached and as a result decline 20,000 annually. If the government does not take action on the preserving of the chirus and the improvement of the living environment, the decline trend will be deteriorated and the chirus will extinct  one day.

Finally, if the wilderness areas are destroyed and polluted for the lack of the protection, a series of thorny problems will happen that government cannot solve no  matter how much money and energy it spends. The Earth is a whole that the relationship of each part is interdepending and interacting with each other. If one wilderness area is destroyed, the ecological balance will be destroyed and the environment and climate of other areas will be influenced heavily as a reault. The global warming is an problem to stand for my point. With the development of the technology, more and more carbon dioxide released to the air cause the average temperature increased and other problems. The rainfall decreased sharply and the fertile land is replace for the desert; the nature damage such as drought and flood happen frequently; the incidence of the infection increased.

To sum up, because the wildness areas play an important role not only in the research field but in keeping the balance of the nature, government should preserve the wildness areas enen if they are remote and accessible to only a few people.

PiggyHughUID: 2225387

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Should government preserver publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state? Some people believe that if the areas are so remote that few people travel to, it isn't necessary for government to protect them. In my point of view, I hold that government should protect the publicly owned wilderness areas despite they are remote and thus accessible to only a few people.
1.使用设问句，自问自答点出大众的普遍观点和笔者自己的观点。中心非常明确简洁。
In the first place, the wilderness areas often have (can provide) numberous（numbers）amounts of previous resource such as some wildlife (&plant) with siginificant (significant) (study and 删掉，无意义的重复) research  value. Not only can scientists acquire mant（many） useful information and knowledge from the wildlife ( & plant) but they can obtain mant(many) precious materials for experiments that can not be found in the common place. An apt example is panda, named as "live fossil", which supports a great many useful of information for the biologists and historian (ecologist生态学家应该比较合理，我也是查字典找的) to research the evolution in the history. （evolution of animal） Moreover, the wildness areas also play crucial role in regulating the climate and keeping a balance nature because of the broad rainforest and other plants (The trees删掉) often growing in the wildness areas, can aborb （absorb）carbon dioxide and release oxygen making great efforts on improving the (air) quality and environment.
2. 通过wildness areas 在生物和环境两个方面的贡献，点明了其重要性。支持第一段的观点，并为下文作铺垫。语法和用词需继续改进。
In the second place, the wildness areas are readily to be destructed and polluted, because human might do many behaviors even crimes to make profits (by destroy wildness areas 插入)，regardless of the distance. Even some people derive the living rights of the wildlife for their own desire. The best instance is the chiru. It is known in the world for the wools woven into expensive shshtoosh shawls and scarves, which is the symbol of the fashion in the west. Though the chiru usually live in the least known cover of the world-----Qinghai-Tibetan Plateau and run at a remarkably speed, they are still poached and as a result decline 20,000 annually. If the government does not take action on the preserving of the chirus and the improvement of the living environment, the decline trend will be deteriorated and the chirus will extinct one day. Chiru is just one of many wildlife endangers by human killing, to protect the habitat-wildness areas is the only way to save them. Think about this: If one day all the wildlife extinct How about ourselves?
3.通过藏羚羊的具体例子证明，为什么在偏远的区的wildness areas 同样需要保护。个人认为：加上一点儿总结应该会更好些。

Finally, if the wilderness areas are polluted and destroyed by the lack of protection, a series of thorny problems will happen that government cannot solve, no matter how much money and energy it spends. The Earth is a whole that the relationship of each part is interdependent and interacting with each other. If one wilderness area is destroyed, the ecological balance will be destroyed and the environment and climate of other areas will be influenced heavily as a result. The global warming is a problem to stand for my point. With the development of the technology, more and more carbon dioxide released to the air cause the average temperature increased and other problems. The rainfall decreased sharply and the fertile land is replaced for the desert; the nature damage such as drought and flood happen frequently; the incidence of the infection increased.
3. 总结性段落， 通过由于环境破坏而出现的各种灾害指出了wildness areas 被破坏后的严重后果和它的不可挽回性。
To sum up, because the wildness areas play an important role not only in the research field but in keeping the balance of the nature, government should (has 语气更重) preserve the wildness areas even if they are remote and thus accessible to only a few people, because wildness areas are the basic of our living world, if they be destroyed we will extinct.

sweet_fruitUID: 2190845

谢谢LS,写了几天了没人理,呵呵，改的非常认真,有些语法错误还要麻烦你:$
我家电脑没有WORD,晕,所以...,不过现在有了.

应该是老朋友吧,:D:handshake:victory: