Issue 142 政治类
"The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority."
Key words: well-being, question authority
Relationship: question enhance well-being
PS: 题目倒是很容易分析清楚,但是政治类自己确实缺乏相关素材,到最后写的自己都不能支持自己观点了,失败!
分析:question authority 会增加社会的财富,其实只要找到古代名人多的例子就可以很容易展开,但惭愧于自己的词汇量: (
提纲:
Start:从古到今,社会财富不断积聚,这依赖于体制的健全,健全则依赖于对权威的质问;但有些情况下则导致了财富的下降
B1:谈财富增加,example:工业革命(蒸气机、电话、电视等)
B2:增加,example:教育体制、哥白尼日心说(这段写的很烂,例子都是后来查的词汇,而且也不是很支持分论点,财富增加)
B3:但财富也有下降,如:一战、二战、中国文革(就是想写对权威提出要求才有这些行动,从而导致了财富的下降,但感觉写的很不好,自己都不能说服自己)
End:重申观点,有事Question会增加、有时也会下降
For our grandparents, they created the well-being of the society by inquiring the nature which they have not known deeply. For the modern people, they are not comfortable about today's society and question everything to make the world advance a higher level. From our ancestors to us, with the progress of the society the well-being made by ourselves advanced a new level of the accumulated well-being, and this treasures are based on the better social system and craving for the life by people. The more question about the social system the more treasures we make. However, in my opinion, sometimes, the question to the authority could lead to a decent of the well-being.
Retrospections about the past days, our ancestors created various of inventions which are the director to our modern people. The Industrial Revolution told us that not only we can use the tools of the carriage, but we can better free our hands to manufacture new implements to convenience us. The steam engine appealed us to get on the comfortable cars or ships to go far away, telephones asked us to call relatives who are far way, television reflected a mirror about us and others in a iron box, etc. All of these provide us a wonderful new world. The reasons for our ancestors' inventions are that they are not content to the inconvenience environment around them and they prefer question about the authority like modern people do. Because no matter what the historical people or today person, we all need a changeable world.
A permanent teaching system is not a good reflection for one country’s development. For the old teaching system, such as the old tradition for the only male or female schools, modern schools found they should against this system and they know that this is bad for the school’s performance because just based on the mutual work or study by men and women they can do everything efficient. Nicolaus Copernicus was destined to become, through the publication of his heliocentric theory 70 years later, one of the seminal figures in the history of scientific thought. The enunciation of the heliocentric theory by Copernicus marked the beginning of the scientific revolution, and of a new view of a greatly enlarged universe. It was a shift away from the comfortable anthropocentrism of the ancient and medieval world. Relying on the above two examples, I believe we need question the authority in spite of the teaching or tradition to provide more well-being for the people.
Through the above analysis about the well-being of the society, can we say that if only we question the authority then we can get more treasures? The answer is no. After the World War I&II many people asked themselves why they have encountered such a terrible disaster in the human history. Germany, the main clue to the two wars, owned an autocratic government. Because its residents called a question about the government to extend their territory and national treasure, the war which is the worst calamity to human world began. In my country and in sixties, the revolutionary for the literature is also a result of questioning the authority. All above these questions lead to a well-being to decrease.
To sum up, the question about the authority can enhance the well-being of the society but it is not permanently right. In some cases it could lead to a bad result. We should discern clearly about our well-being. The question to the authority that is it beneficial for us or will it direct us to a poverty we should consider definitely.