8T同主题写作第二期 75

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Taking classes in many subjects is better

Nowadays, some universities require students to specialize in one subject. They might consider that specializing in one subject can strengthen the students’ comprehension on this subject and save the time to accept unrelated or unnecessary information and knowledge. However, in my point of view, students taking classes in many subjects can benefit more.

At the first place, common sense tells us that those experts in one field such as physics often expert on many other fields too. Generally, the full development of one field cannot be achieved without the help of other related subjects. For instance, researches no material design are not the sole work in chemistry. They also accompany with the application of physics, computer science, advanced mathematics, and so forth. Therefore, students majoring in material science and engineering should master lots of knowledge covered with chemistry, physics, computer and so on.

On the other hand, taking classes in many subjects provide students a good opportunity to communicate with students in other majors. Through their conversation, group discussion, or group study, one can enrich their knowledge, broaden their perspectives, or even boost their spirits. For example, a literature student may achieve enlightenment from an art student. A student majoring in science can also benefit a lot from the conversation with an art student, whose vivid thinking style can be helpful to the one with strong logical thinking ability.

Finally, at present specializing in one subject is so monotone that the efficiency of study is certainly low to most students. To an engineering student, it would be boring only studying the laws, formalizations, and the chemical qualities. Adding subjects such as music, literature, and sports would be a pleasure for them. And then they will regain their energy to study.

In sum, the benefits taking classes in many subjects surely outweigh only specializing in one subject. It is advisable for universities to require students to take more subjects, which are helpful and interesting.

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Nowadays, some universities require students to specialize in one subject. They might consider that specializing in one subject can strengthen the[去掉]students’ comprehension on this subject and save the[去掉] time [应该加个not吧，或者用of accepting]to accept unrelated or unnecessary information and knowledge. However, in my point of view, students taking classes in many subjects can benefit more.

At the first place, common sense tells us that those experts in one field such as physics often expert on many other fields too. Generally, the full development of one field cannot be achieved without the help of other related subjects. For instance, researches no[on？] material design are not the sole work in chemistry. They also accompany with the application of physics, computer science, advanced mathematics, and so forth. Therefore, students majoring in material science and engineering should master lots of knowledge covered with chemistry, physics, computer and so on.

On the other hand, taking classes in many subjects provide students a good opportunity to communicate with students in other majors. Through their conversation, group discussion, or gracp study, one can enrich their knowledge[不对称], broaden their perspectives, or[and] even boost their spirits. For example, a literature student[这种表达行吗？] may achieve enlightenment from an art student. A student majoring in science can also benefit a lot from the conversation with an art student, whose vivid thinking style can be helpful to the one with strong logical thinking ability.

Finally, at present specializing in one subject is too[so] monotone that the efficiency of study is certainly low to most students. To [改为for] an engineering student, it would be boring only studying the laws, formalizations, and the chemical qualities.[这句话感觉不太好，建议具体讲某一学科和其专业课程] Adding subjects such as music, literature, and sports would be a pleasure for them. And then they will regain their energy to study.

In sum, the benefits [from] taking classes in many subjects surely outweigh only specializing in one subject. It is advisable for universities to require students to take more subjects, which are helpful and interesting.   

第一次改文章，好像在word里面修改的红色没了，
建议把每段要表达的意思用中文写出来，这样可以看有没有 围绕着主题写。
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... 3D280#pid1768899852
my article，期待提供点意见。