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发表于 2006-8-8 21:49:51 |显示全部楼层

怎么没人写提纲:(

没有一个同学写提纲:(
当然,也包括我自己,检讨...

第一次提纲作业推迟一天,明天大家一定要交齐
另外,写提纲的安排有所调整,大家可以去提纲大贴看看

关于大贴难找的问题
1.大家可以把本组大贴添加到自己的收藏夹里,方便查阅
2.我会与斑斑联系,把我们的小组大贴放到通道里.

之前一直把前面的位置留给大家交座位,现在大家都占位了,大贴里可以多恢复些帖子了.有什么想法,或者讨论都可以发到这里:)

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发表于 2006-8-8 23:32:33 |显示全部楼层
是在这个帖子力占座么?

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发表于 2006-8-9 22:28:38 |显示全部楼层

交作业啦~~

大家交作业呀~~~

555,你们不许偷懒:(

我自己也不许...

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发表于 2006-8-10 00:02:17 |显示全部楼层
回复中怎么改字体颜色呀?
还是只有黑的

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发表于 2006-8-10 15:04:56 |显示全部楼层
当然可以改颜色的,不过是英文表示的
我后天要旅游呢.......5555555555........我是不是没的救了,大家打我骂我让我醒悟哦

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发表于 2006-8-10 15:45:22 |显示全部楼层

这给西飞雁改的I17, 原主题发的格式不对被关了恳请组长再把格式详细述说一遍

As is known, laws are one of the important foundations in our society for justice and safety. Meanwhile, laws stand for the power of the nation which protect the interests of the majority of its people. Therefore, from my point of view, no matter whether the laws are just or unjust, their authority should be respected definitely.

In our recent world, with the high complexity of the society, laws play a more and more significant role in protecting the social justice and human rights. Legal regulations effectively control the crimes to the individuals which may bring our society into instability. Therefore, if we permit some deeds which are forbidden by the laws, although  the laws may be somewhat unfair for some people, the authority and purity of our laws may be totally ruined. For example,(又是一个例子呵呵谢拉) in some nations, it is prohibitted by the laws to fish in some rivers in order to protect the natural balance, but it is obviously unjust for the fishermen, who live on fishing in the rivers. If they disobey and resist the laws, then the regulations will have no ristrictions. Maybe in a few years the river will be seriously wrecked and then ultimately influence the benifits of the fishermen and all the people living near the rivers.(加一个短语体现渔民对河流做了什么,反过来他们最后收到什么的意思, 我不知道IN RETURN 是不是错的哦) Justice is a concept for all the social members, not only for some groups or individuals. Hence once we draw a law, all the members should be restricted by it, which is the real  precondition of the social justice.

On the other hand, however, laws can also make serious mistakes, which may be caused by several wrong thinkings. For instance, in the past, some regions in the world might be influenced seriously by the racial discrimination and passed the laws with unjust rules to the minority. Even so, in my opinion, the settlement of the unjustice problem should be legit better than disobeying or resisting them. We can express our dissatisfaction and arguments concerning the laws, or we can organize great remonstration to the government which can influence the legislature to correct the unjust laws. In a jural world(法制社会?) today, no one should be given the right to disobey the laws, but every one has the right to deliver his/her standpoint about the laws, or even fight against the unfair laws in legit ways, which I consider the most effective means to pursue the social justice.

Differing from the moral regulations, laws have much more holy station and more strict penalties. They offer us consistent standards for individual behaviors, which insure the security and justice of the society. Consequently, I approve using legit methods to solve the problems of unjust laws instead of disobeying or resisting unjust laws.

论证了法律在UNFAIR和有SERIOUS MISTAKES 两个不同层面上 论述, 总体论的比较有条理也比较清晰, 如果再引申一段意思就好了,毕竟我们的文采不行, 得靠字数, 起码得撑500吧

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发表于 2006-8-10 18:56:30 |显示全部楼层
应ivy的要求重申一下格式:

习作标题写为"ISSUE17 XXX"或"ARGUMENT53 XXX"

ISSUE,ARGUMENT 用大写,与题号数字间没有间隔.后面的文字与题号间空一格.
提醒大家注意格式,不然会被斑斑删贴的~~

ivy呀,你这个小家伙怎么老是玩呀玩的啊,抓紧时间啦~~
西飞雁,你的文章回不了,估计被斑斑锁了,注意标题的格式

看这个帖子
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2006-8-13 21:46:13 |显示全部楼层

人呢???

大家的作业呢????

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发表于 2006-8-14 08:19:44 |显示全部楼层

我们不能这样消沉下去

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发表于 2006-8-14 19:22:37 |显示全部楼层

不能吧 这是怎么搞的

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发表于 2006-8-14 22:47:33 |显示全部楼层

为什么????

怎么你们都不见了呢??

同学们,写作业呀~~~

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发表于 2006-8-15 18:54:25 |显示全部楼层

爬爬虫 不要着急我还在 我一定把作业补上

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发表于 2006-8-16 22:57:48 |显示全部楼层

消失

你们都不见了,不过,我还是会坚持的~~!!!

对着众人喊:"你快回来"~~~

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发表于 2006-8-17 12:49:11 |显示全部楼层
原帖由 liuwenqi24 于 2006-8-16 22:57 发表
你们都不见了,不过,我还是会坚持的~~!!!

对着众人喊:"你快回来"~~~


组长你好!

现在还可以加入作文小组吗?

我的情况:
9.11机考,下周一开始能参加写作和互改。

谢谢!

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发表于 2006-8-17 14:58:44 |显示全部楼层
原帖由 liuwenqi24 于 2006-8-16 22:57 发表
你们都不见了,不过,我还是会坚持的~~!!!

对着众人喊:"你快回来"~~~

我回来了

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