我们的九月小组-----第十次作业

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不好意思，没有限时，写多了，下次一定把握好时间。Nowadays, there is no doubt that people are able to acquire more relevant information and knowledge concerning the strange placed with the widespread of television and computer internet in the world. Meanwhile, some people claim that the convenient approach of obtaining the substantial amount of information and knowledge is expected to make tourism become unpopular and outdated. Admittedly, the universal possession and use of the television and worldwide computer connections will significantly influence the tourism; however, it will not result in that tourism becomes out-of-date. What is more, the tourism might be promoted in the process.

Indeed, the universal exploitation of television and computer networks can help us obtain more required information with regard to the places where we have never been. As we know, with fierce development of television programs and internet, people are able to gain more information about many places in the world displayed in not only words, but also pictures and video, which are particularly vivid and detailed. For instance, a television program named "The introduction to the famous Chinese mountains", presents information and video of those mountains, from which I become familiarized with the Tai Mountain, Huang Mountain, Hua Mountain and so on. Particularly, this program makes some comparisons between different mountains, which focus on the distinctive characteristics of them. In short, the information and knowledge in the programs is rather abundant and affluent. Meanwhile the same is true for the worldwide computer connections. For example, when you type the name of the place into the search engine, like Google, you probably obtain thousands of relevant information regarding the place.

However, a problem probably arises in the process of utilizing the information from television programs and internet is that the second-hand materials might be incomplete, inaccurate, and subjective. Generally speaking, the television programs are produced by a group of people who hold their own understandings of the places; therefore, it is totally possible that the program only displays certain aspects of the places from one particular perspective. In other words, the programs might be incomplete and subjective. Again, take the program "The introduction to the famous Chinese mountains" for example, it tends to emphasize the natural scenes and landscapes of those mountains, sometimes lightly ignore the significant historic buildings and architecture in those mountains. Under this case, people who prefer places of interest might make some incomplete judgment and evaluation about the mountains. Additionally, the sources of information on Internet is various, sometimes we even can not make sure exactly where, when, the information comes from. Consequently, the reliability and accuracy of the information is open to doubt.

Furthermore, the satisfaction from tourism is beyond merely browsing the net pages on the computer screen and watching TV, thus tourism is irreplaceable. Take my personal experience for example, whenever I go out for tourism, I always feel exited during the journey from the preparation to the end, which mood cannot be generated by exclusively watching television and using computer Internet. Moreover, only when we go to visit a place personally, we can breathe the fresh air in the local place, or observe the natural scene or historic buildings from our own understandings and perspective. Hence, it is impossible that tourism would be replaced by the satisfaction from the information produced by the modern media.

In addition, the tourism might be promoted to be more popular and fashion. Nowadays, people have more opportunities to acquire information regarding the destinations for trip from television and computer before setting out. This is to say that tourists are capable of making detailed comparisons and selection between different choices of trips. Accordingly, the requirement and preference of the tourists could be better met in the trip since so much consideration is involved in the selection based on the available information. For instance, once my friends and I went to QingCheng mountain in SiChuan province in China, a famous place of interest with Taoistic temples. Before deciding the trip, we check a lot of relevant information in Internet to ensure whether the place is to our taste. Finally, the trip proved that the information is helpful and useful.

To sum up, thanks to the widespread of television and computer Internet, we are able to obtain much useful information on the unacquainted places, further this condition will have positive effect on the development of tourism.

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Nowadays, there is no doubt that people are able to acquire more relevant information and knowledge concerning 是不是和relevant 有些重复 the strange placed with the widespread of television and computer internet in the world. Meanwhile, some people claim that the convenient approach of obtaining the substantial amount of information and knowledge is expected to make tourism become unpopular and outdated. Admittedly, the universal possession and use of the television and worldwide computer connections will significantly influence the tourism; however, it will not result in that tourism becomes out-of-date. What is more, the tourism might be promoted in the process.

Indeed, the universal exploitation of television and computer networks can help us obtain more required information with regard to the places where we have never been. As we know, with fierce development of television programs and internet, people are able to gain more information about many places in the world displayed in not only words, but also pictures and video, which are particularly vivid and detailed. For instance, a television program named "The introduction to the famous Chinese mountains", presents information and video of those mountains, from which I become familiarized with the Tai Mountain, Huang Mountain, Hua Mountain and so on. Particularly, this program makes some comparisons between different mountains, which focus on the distinctive characteristics of them. In short, the information and knowledge in the programs is rather abundant and affluent. Meanwhile the same is true for the worldwide computer connections. For example, when you type the name of the place into the search engine, like Google, you probably obtain thousands of relevant information regarding the place.

However, a problem probably arises in the process of utilizing the information from television programs and internet is that the second-hand materials might be incomplete, inaccurate, and subjective. Generally speaking, the television programs are produced by a group of people who hold their own understandings of the places; therefore, it is totally possible that the program only displays certain aspects of the places from one particular perspective. In other words, the programs might be incomplete and subjective. Again, take the program "The introduction to the famous Chinese mountains" for example, it tends to emphasize the natural scenes and landscapes of those mountains, sometimes lightly ignore the significant historic buildings and architecture in those mountains. Under this case, people who prefer places of interest might make some incomplete judgment and evaluation about the mountains. Additionally, the sources of information on Internet is various, sometimes we even can not make sure exactly where, when, the information comes from. Consequently, the reliability and accuracy of the information is open to doubt.

Furthermore, the satisfaction from tourism is beyond merely browsing the net pages on the computer screen and watching TV, thus tourism is irreplaceable. Take my personal experience for example, whenever I go out for tourism, I always feel exited during the journey from the preparation to the end, which mood cannot be generated by exclusively watching television and using computer Internet. Moreover, only when we go to visit a place personally, we can breathe the fresh air in the local place, or observe the natural scene or historic buildings from our own understandings and perspective. Hence, it is impossible that tourism would be replaced by the satisfaction from the information produced by the modern media.

In addition, the tourism might be promoted to be more popular and fashion. Nowadays, people have more opportunities to acquire information regarding the destinations for trip from television and computer before setting out. This is to say that tourists are capable of making detailed comparisons and selection between different choices of trips. Accordingly, the requirement and preference of the tourists could be better met in the trip since so much consideration is involved in the selection based on the available information. For instance, once my friends and I went to QingCheng mountain in SiChuan province in China, a famous place of interest with Taoistic temples. Before deciding the trip, we check a lot of relevant information in Internet to ensure whether the place is to our taste. Finally, the trip proved that the information is helpful and useful.

To sum up, thanks to the widespread of television and computer Internet, we are able to obtain much useful information on the unacquainted places, further this condition will have positive effect on the development of tourism.

总的来说 论证有力 思路清晰
只是语言方面 可以精简一些，表达上可以用长句子概括， 有些话可以不用反复说
最好加些论证性的语言 对例子做些分析 不然例子的作用就不那么明显了