Homwork: Topic 182

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Topic 182

As is known to all, in the modern time, pets are playing more and more great role in the people's life. Too suffered by the the work, quick rhythm of everyday life, or tight budget, rasing pets offer an great opportunity for us to enjoy for comforter for a while. Living with a beloved pet, one can play with it, and invoke the longing for the appitite for a tranquit living that has disappeared ages ago. So, so far as I can see, keeping a close relationship with pets is not a ignoble thing at all, but a way to release the pressure and to enjoy the life and nature, with the following reasons to support it.

To begin with, to some extent, pets can ease our tamper and also comforte our spirit, which, confirmed by many a phsycologists, can be considered a fabulous method to keep a phsychological health. For example, dogs would bark at me to express its close feeling, as can calm me down in spite of when I am angry with something. Moreover, by communicating to our pets with whestling or petting them, pets can move ourselves to the ideal life, a life without debates and suspection. To a large extent, other pets like cats, birds, or even elephants, if that can ingite your instersts, would be a great help to be a depression killer.

Another advantage to raise pets is that one can learn how to love nature, in this world. If one has a child, it is the different kinds of pets at the first beginning that convey the meaning of nature, filled with various creature, respected equally by everyone, and gathered together by all the parts, not by signle individual. And also the pets in somewhat a light, shed our loves to other parts of the earth, one by one. In this meaning, we are not alone, being a essential mechanic element of nature and reciving a constant messages from this to that, and the other, here, there and everywhere.

In a word, as I discussed above, our pets give health to us, teach the unique concept of nature to us, and offer the opportunity of best life. We should cherish our pets, as well as other animals. Apparently, the best means is to develop a close relationshipto it.

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As is known to all, in the modern time, pets are playing more and more great role in the people's life. Too suffered by the work, quick rhythm of everyday life, or tight budget, raising pets offer a great opportunity for us to enjoy for comforter(comforter?慰问者?) for a while. Living with a beloved pet, one can play with it, and invoke the longing for the appetite for a tranquil living that has disappeared ages ago. So, so far as I can see, keeping a close relationship with pets is not an ignoble thing at all, but a way to release the pressure and to enjoy the life and nature, with the following reasons to support it.

To begin with, to some extent, pets can ease our temper and also comfort our spirit, which, confirmed by many physiologists, can be considered a fabulous method to keep a psychological health. For example, dogs would bark at me to express its close feeling, as can calm me down in spite of (后面应该不能接句子吧)when I am angry with something. Moreover, by communicating to our pets with whistling or petting them, pets can move ourselves to the ideal life, a life without debates and suspicion. To a large extent, other pets like cats, birds, or even elephants, if that can ignite your interests, would be a great help to be a depression killer.

Another advantage to raise pets is that one can learn how to love nature, in this world. If one has a child, it is the different kinds of pets at the first beginning that convey the meaning of nature, filled with various creature, respected equally by everyone, and gathered together by all the parts, not by single individual. And also the pets in somewhat a light shed our loves to other parts of the earth, one by one. In this meaning, we are not alone, being an essential mechanic element of nature and receiving a constant messages from this to that, and the other, here, there and everywhere.

In a word, as I discussed above, our pets give health to us, teach the unique concept of nature to us, and offer the opportunity of best life. We should cherish our pets, as well as other animals. Apparently, the best means is to develop a close relationship to it.

我也不会改，就是觉得很多地方很别扭，标了一下，而且觉得整体的结构好像有点头重脚轻？

而且，，，LZ下次自己要改拼写错误啊，好多啊－－

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文中没有死套八股句套，而是用了一些背过的一些篇章中的句型，可能有些晦涩：），comforter的意思是 安慰你的东西。

下午写完就去忙别的了，拼写错误有些。总之，谢谢老兄了！祝你杀T成功！