iBT作文满分的一点经验

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should take a secure job immediately when finding one instead of waiting for the job that they find more satisfying.
(Work)


Working has already become a requisition in modern life. People cannot live if without this staple. However, whether taking a stable job immediately or waiting for a satisfied job, we should talk about this issue carefully. In my opinion I prefer latter one for the following reasons.

Firstly, a satisfactory job can stimulate one's potential talent and find an individual value. Assuming that Bill Gates chosen work for stock marketing as same as Warren Buffet in his time, or stayed Harvard University to study and find a ordinary job for IT company. How did he create his Microsoft world? How did he become one of the richest people in the world? Obviously, people need a right job to find a self-value or create more valuable things.

In addition, a secure job is easy to make people became unwilling to change. I remember Jane, a friend of mime. Her original goal is a reporter in a newspaper publishing. But she failed to find a satisfactory job that she wanted in her graduated and chosen an editor for career. Two years later. She didn't give up this secure job to challenge a new situation even though an opportunity confronts her. As she thought this would waste more time to renew her process of work.

Lastly, I hold the opinion that we can wait a comfortable job via any kind of ways. Learning is an indispensable method. For instance, many people are willing to pursuit MBA when they work in several years later. Not only do it enhanced their individual skills in any aspect but provided more time to look for better chances.

In sum, personally, a right job appearance before we required reserved our all aspects ability rather than chosen a secure job right now, some times a impulse choice would bring uncertain and bad impacts.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The way a person is dressed in is a good indication of his/her character or personality.






With advanced of living standard, people have more choices than in the past including dressing, food, living and walking. The first of them is dressing. Clearly, it is vital to us to dress. Not because it indicated personal character but professional indentify or even country’s custom. So we should mention that how dressed suitable and reasonable.
Firstly, the way a person is dressed rely on one's character. Beautiful life provides myriad of choices to make up. Some person like pursue tendency of fashion, so they dressed colorful. Such as Weiwen Huang, Hong Kong' fashionable icon, Always boldly dressed unique and special to the public, sometimes cute and sometimes shining. No one believes he is an old man with a child heart.
Furthermore, wearing habits indicated a characteristic of job. For example, Doctor must be dressed a white coat on working time. Not only the professional requisition but personal needed.
Also, politician or some public workers, like seller and client presenter are all needed wear western-style clothes. It is vital to work when you face the customers or public and a basic etiquette.
Finally, Character of dressing enabled to showing customs and culture of a country. British, as we know, long period of time rounded windy and rainy, due to this climate people have to dress some thicker coat and than other tropical and subtropical countries. Thus, the country developed an English style wearing and crafts populated all over the world. Certainly, different countries have different styles, Chinese's Han style and Japanese Kimono expressed totally different culture. Even in one country. There has a lots differ from one to one. In China, there were 56 minorities; most of them have their unique wearing. Just from these dressing, we are able to recognize where they are come from.
In brief, I agree the statement that the way a person is dressed in is a good indication of one's character or personality.

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thank you for sharing

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121017,作文也是满分。我认为最重要的是用词地道，不能太中文化，内容倒是其次。一点小建议，供参考。

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