Issue38 [synergy小组]polymerwufan第五次作业

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Issue 38    time:45min  words:400



According to the speaker, reading book spales in importance compared to watching television with the respect to learning information and knowledge now that television program can convey much than books. I concede that the assertion is reasonable when it comes to the fact that the advances in television media technology provide people with amore convenient and vivid means for acquiring knowledge. However, the speaker overestimates the significance of televisions and overlooks the importance of books--the traditional methods for studying.

Admittedly, with the advancement in electronical technology, especially in television media, people might learn much through TV set. Additionally, compared with books, television can provide more vivid and rapid information about almost every aspect of human lives, including the political affairs, sports news, and some scientific knowledge. In other words,in the age of television, it is possible for people to acquire any information they want while staying at home. Thus, the television plays a very important role in the learning endeavors.

Nevertheless, we should keep in mind the fact that the television's ultimate objective is for entertainment   rather than learning. After all, the television media career involves the profit-oriented procedure. Imagine that atelevision channel which is replete with learning programs but has little ones for fun might lose many audiences, while which can lead to an consequential decline in profits. Thus, television, the tool for entertainment, cannotreplace the role of learning means and the best way for learning is to read books.

Furthermore, another reason why I fundamentally disagree with the speaker involves the fact that when it comes to some profound and complicated knowledge system, books have obvious advantages over televisions. An apt illustration involves the studying process in acomplex subject such as mathematics and physics, which is composed of abstract equations and concepts. Few would argue that nobody can deeply understand the essential notions of these subjects merely through television programs. This perhaps explains the fact that in colleges or universities, students often learn through books rather than watching televisions.

To sum up, thespeaker's claim is reasonable to some extent, particularly when it comes to the fact that by television people can get information more rapidly and conveniently. However, the speaker unnecessarily indicates that reading books is not as important as it once was. In my opinion, people should make good use of the television while without ignoring the importance of books.

[ 本帖最后由 polymerwufan 于 2006-12-7 00:04 编辑 ]

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我也是刚刚才帖上去,呵呵
明天再改啦

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According to the speaker, reading book spales（什么词，查不到）in importance compared to watching television with the respect to learning information and knowledge now that television program can convey much than books. I concede that the assertion is reasonable when it comes to the fact that the advances in television media technology provide people with amore convenient and vivid means for acquiring knowledge. However, the speaker overestimates the significance of televisions and overlooks the importance of books--the traditional methods for studying.Admittedly, with the advancement in electronical technology, especially in television media, people might learn much through TV set. Additionally, compared with books, television can provide more vivid and rapid information about almost every aspect of human lives, including the political affairs, sports news, and some scientific knowledge. In other words,in the age of television, it is possible for people to acquire any information they want while staying at home. Thus, the television plays a very important role in the learning endeavors.Nevertheless, we should keep in mind the fact that the television's ultimate objective is for entertainment   rather than learning. After all, the television media career involves the profit-oriented procedure. （这段感觉不是很充实，这里是不是要举点例子描述一下电视里的很多节目都是以利润为目的，如广告，综艺节目啊，）Imagine that a television channel which is replete with learning programs but has little(few )ones for fun might lose many audiences, while which can lead to an(a) consequential decline in profits. Thus, television, the tool for entertainment, cannot replace the role of learning means and the best way for learning is to read books.Furthermore, another reason why I fundamentally disagree with the speaker involves the fact that when it comes to some profound and complicated knowledge system, books have obvious advantages over televisions. An apt illustration involves the studying process in a complex subject such as mathematics and physics, which is composed of abstract equations and concepts. Few would argue that nobody can deeply understand the essential notions of these subjects merely through television programs. This perhaps explains the fact that in colleges or universities, students often learn through books rather than watching televisions.To sum up, the speaker's claim is reasonable to some extent, particularly when it comes to 你的这个短语用太多了，换一个吧）the fact that by television people can get information more rapidly and conveniently. However, the speaker unnecessarily indicates that reading books is not as important as it once was. In my opinion, people should make good use of the television while without ignoring the importance of books.
45min 写的啊，不错！

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According to the speaker, reading book spales （books pale）in importance compared to watching television with the(把the去掉) respect to learning information and knowledge now that television program can convey much（more） than books.(感觉此句有点乱，另外，speaker 只说reading books is not as important as it once was，没说television program can convey more than books.) I concede that the assertion is reasonable when it comes to the fact that the advances in television media technology provide people with a more convenient and vivid means for acquiring knowledge. However, the speaker overestimates the significance of televisions and overlooks the importance of books--the traditional methods（method） for studying(of study).

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According to the speaker, reading book spales (这个词不懂。) in importance compared to watching television with the respect to learning information and knowledge now that television program can convey much (more) than books. I concede that the assertion is reasonable when it comes to the fact that the advances in television media technology provide people with a more convenient and vivid means for acquiring knowledge. However, the speaker overestimates the significance of televisions and overlooks the importance of books--the traditional methods (method) for studying. （你批判了题目，但是自己的观点是怎样的似乎不够明确。读书的地位如何还是不明确）
Admittedly, with the advancement in electronical (electronic) technology, especially in television media, people might learn much through TV set. Additionally, compared with books, television can provide more vivid and rapid information about almost every aspect of human lives, including the political affairs, sports news, and some scientific knowledge. In other words,in the age of television, it is possible for people to acquire any information they want while staying at home (in front of the TV set读书也可以静坐家中的). Thus, the television plays a very important role in the learning endeavors.Nevertheless, we should keep in mind the fact that the television's ultimate objective is for entertainment   rather than learning. After all, the television media career involves the profit-oriented procedure. Imagine that atelevision channel which is replete with learning programs but has little （few 后面是可数名词） ones for fun might lose many audiences, while which can lead （leading） to an (a) consequential decline in profits. Thus, television, the tool for entertainment, cannotreplace the role of learning means and the best way for learning is to read books.Furthermore, another reason why I fundamentally disagree with the speaker involves the fact that when it comes to some profound and complicated knowledge system, books have obvious advantages over televisions. An apt illustration involves the studying process in acomplex subject such as mathematics and physics, which is composed of abstract equations and concepts. Few would argue that nobody can deeply understand the essential notions of these subjects merely through television programs. This perhaps explains the fact that in colleges or universities, students often learn through books rather than watching televisions.To sum up, thespeaker's claim is reasonable to some extent, particularly when it comes to the fact that by television people can get information more rapidly and conveniently. However, the speaker unnecessarily indicates that reading books is not as important as it once was. In my opinion, people should make good use of the television while without ignoring the importance of books.文章一直在论证电视作为学习主要工具的不可行，并没有提到这个观点吧。

正篇文章看下来，觉得第二段不错，但是第三段和第四段都在说电视机如何比不过书本，从而不可胜任，却始终没有说为什么书应该是主要途径。有一点偏向argu的写法了感觉。我想比较理想的结构应该是这两段重点强调为什么读书重要。