issue11 hugo010311--hamming小组

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TOPIC: ISSUE11 - "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
WORDS: 495         TIME: 1:30:05          DATE: 2006-12-21

It cannot be denied that social problems varied from nation to nation apparently, but all nations develop based on essential similarities of the world’s most persistent social problems. Actually, it is a sound idea that all nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems.

Admittedly, different nations suffer from different social problems respectively, which need to be solved effective by different nations' own means. As every nation’s social problems are attributed to their history, tradition, customs, economics, politics and so on, different nation’s social problems may totally different. For instance, China has the largest population in the world that contributes to unemployment, traffic tangle, lacks of resource and so on. As we know, few western countries face such serious social problems as those in China. On the other hand, the campus violence in America in may be an imagination in China in that their politics and tradition are different.

However, all nations develop based on essential similarities of the world's most persistent social problems. As we know, the world’s most persistent social problems include environmental pollution, energy crisis as well as conflicts among nations, which have been harassing almost all the nations in the world. Takes conflicts for instance, from Middle East conflict to Taiwan problem in China, all the conflicts between nations is nothing but dispute of interest. Once the essence of interest problem between nations has been settled, the conflicts will no longer exist. From the US campus violence to the suicide in group, all violence affairs are nothing but extreme men’s abreaction means. Once such people are cultivated and disabused sufficiently and duly, peace and serenity would full of our world.

As a matter of fact, it is a sound idea for all nations to help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems. On the one hand, based on common social problems, every college student absorbs ideas and experience from a worldwide aspects, thinking about an issue more deeply. Hence, with wit of entire human beings, it would be easier and more effective for students in the global university to cope with a most persistent social problem in the world. On the other hand, divarications may turn up in global university inevitably coming with its establishment. Actually, all social problems are derived from every tiny divarication among people, becoming greater and exacerbating with time. A room is offer by the global university for every college student in the world to debate, tolerant, cooperate, and come to an agreement.

As all nations are developing based on essential similarities of the world’s most persistent social problems, it is essential for all nations to help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems.   

ScorpionSkyUID: 2273954

It cannot be denied that social problems varied from nation to nation apparently, but all nations develop based on essential similarities of the world’s most persistent social problems. Actually, it is a sound idea that all nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress [是不是要说process] of solving the world’s most persistent social problems.

Admittedly, different nations suffer from different social problems respectively, which need to be solved effective [effectively] by different nations' own means. As every nation’s social problems are attributed to their [复数]history, tradition, customs, economics, politics and so on, [主语和前面最好不要重复，前面用代词可以了] different nation’s social problems may totally different. For instance, China has the largest population in the world that contributes to unemployment, traffic tangle, lacks of resources and so on. As we know[这种用法不是很常见], few western countries face such serious social problems as those in China. On the other hand, the campus violence in America in may be an imagination in China in that their politics and tradition are different.[这个例子有点牵强，中国的校园暴力也很严重，只是没有枪罢了，呵呵]

However, all nations develop based on essential similarities of the world's most persistent social problems.[简单拷贝过来可不行啊，和上面的带下划线的句子一模一样] As we know, the world’s most persistent social problems include environmental pollution, energy crisis as well as conflicts among nations, which have been harassing almost all the nations in the world. Takes [Taking] conflicts for instance, from Middle East conflict to Taiwan problem in China, all the conflicts between nations is nothing but dispute of interest. [good] Once the essence of interest problem between nations has been settled, the conflicts will no longer exist.[ 要点过渡词 ] From the US campus violence to the suicide in group, all violence affairs are nothing but extreme men’s abreaction means. .[good] Once such people are cultivated and disabused sufficiently and duly, peace and serenity would full of our world. [好直接哦，有那么好？]

As a matter of fact, it is a sound idea for all nations to help[去掉] support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems.[又来，好懒哦！] On the one hand, based on common social problems, every college student absorbs ideas and experience from a worldwide aspects,[前后是并列吧，还是限定？加连接词and，thinking 改成thinks] thinking about an issue more deeply. Hence, with wit of entire human beings, it would be easier and more effective for students in the global university to cope with a[the] most persistent social problem in the world. On the other hand, divarications may turn up in global university inevitably coming with its establishment.[ divarications may turn up inevitably in the process of the establishment of global university] Actually, all social problems are derived from every tiny divarication among people, becoming greater and exacerbating with time. A room [classroom] is offered by the global university for every college student in the world to debate, tolerant, cooperate, and come to[manage to] an agreement.

As all nations are developing based on essential similarities of the world’s most persistent social problems, it is essential for all nations to help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the progress of solving the world’s most persistent social problems. [不可哦，出现了三次~]