issue4 Liquidshile--Hamming组 我的效率咋这么低！

liquidshileUID: 2254332

4. "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
在任何一个研究领域当中，除非有该领域之外的人引进他们的知识和经验，否则该领域就很难获得巨大的发展。
Outsider: a person does not belong to a particular group

Outline:
0.    基本同意，倾向于同意， 我不知道我的开头结尾这样表达对不对
1.    Math introduced into economics
2.  Computer Science
3.     Biomedical
4.  自身的基础研究也很重要
5.  结尾，想在这里添加一点点反对，不知道应不应该
The world is a whole and the division of fields is factitious activity, in fact, every field relates with each other. So I fundamentally agree with this assertion that significant advances in a study field require knowledge and experience form various fields.

When mathematics was introduced into the field of economics by mathematician, John Nash, a great change happened in this field. Mathematics formed an alliance with economics as the tools of mathematical analysis, algebra, probability, and statistics illuminated economic theories. A specialty called econometrics links enormous numbers of equations to form mathematical models for use as forecasting tools. In 1973 Scholes and Black consulted with Merton in developing a formula for valuing stock options that became known as the Black-Scholes formula which caused a financial revolution in Wall Street.

As a computer programmer, I am very familiar with this field. Many different kinds of knowledge contribute to the development of computer science. First, the invention of computer derives from the demand of complex mathematical operation. LSI, which makes computer hardware smaller and smaller, is the contribution of electronic engineering and physics. Another notable example involves the field of computer image processing which is used broadly in architectural design, art, medical treatment and video games. Before using image processing technology, we should be familiar with algebra, biology and psychology, which work together to cheat our eyes by a computer image.   

With the development of science and technology, more and more new disciplines present. Such as Biomedical Engineering, application of engineering principles to the fields of biology and medicine, as in the development of aids or replacements for defective or missing body organ, concerns the chemical interactions between the human body and artificial materials that, implanted into life tissue, may provoke adverse reaction or rejection. For example, the most dramatic biochemical engineering feat, however, has been the design and construction of the Jarvik Artificial Heart for patients with incurable heart diseases. In 1982, Seattle dentist Dr. Barney Clark was the first person implanted with the Jarvik-7, an artificial heart intended to last a lifetime. William DeVries an American surgeon performed the surgery. The Jarvik-7 artificial heart was designed by Robert Jarvik.

Finally, the other side of the coin, so to speak, is not examined in the statement.  Development of any kind of discipline depends not only on the achievement from other subjects but on the experience and study of its own. As economics discussed above, although the introduction of game theory by Nash bring a great change in economics study, the advance of economics also depend on the classical economic theory, like The Wealth of Nations and so on.

There is no absolutely independent discipline in modern science. According to a recent survey, there are more than two thousandinterdisciplinary research today. Therefore, making significant improvement without outsiders help from other fields might be very hard in modern discipline study.

[ 本帖最后由 liquidshile 于 2006-12-23 13:03 编辑 ]

liquidshileUID: 2254332

带有倾向性的同意，不知道我表达的对不对
参考了amy和gradutae的文章

没有限时，限时的文章晚上给出

[ 本帖最后由 liquidshile 于 2006-12-23 11:23 编辑 ]

graduate06UID: 2223299

我改的

The world is a whole and the division of fields is factitious activity, in fact, every field relates with each other. So I fundamentally根本的？agree with this assertion that significant advances in a study field require knowledge and experience form various fields.

When mathematics was introduced into the field of economics by mathematician, John Nash, a great change happened in this field. Mathematics formed an alliance with economics as the tools of mathematical analysis, algebra, probability, and statistics illuminated? economic theories. A specialty called econometrics links enormous numbers of equations to form mathematical models for use as forecasting tools. In 1973 Scholes and Black consulted with Merton in developing a formula for valuing stock options that became known as the Black-Scholes formula which caused a financial revolution in Wall Street.

As a computer programmer, I am very familiar with this field. Many different kinds of knowledge contribute to the development of computer science. First, the invention of computer derives from the demand of complex mathematical operation. LSI, which makes computer hardware smaller and smaller, is the contribution of electronic engineering and physics. Another notable example involves the field of computer image processing which is used broadly in architectural design, art, medical treatment and video games. Before using image processing technology, we should be familiar with algebra, biology and psychology, which work together to cheat our eyes by a computer image.
这样说支持观点吗？  上面得都不错，熟悉的自然可以讲得很好。


With the development of science and technology, more and more new disciplines present. Such as Biomedical Engineering, application of engineering principles to the fields of biology and medicine, as in the development of aids or replacements for defective or missing body organ, concerns the chemical interactions between the human body and artificial materials that, implanted into life tissue, may provoke adverse reaction or rejection.前面这几句都查了吧？ For example, the most dramatic biochemical engineering feat, however, has been the design and construction of the Jarvik Artificial Heart for patients with incurable heart diseases. In 1982, Seattle dentist Dr. Barney Clark was the first person implanted with the Jarvik-7, an artificial heart intended to last a lifetime. William DeVries an American surgeon performed the surgery. The Jarvik-7 artificial heart was designed by Robert Jarvik.



Finally, the other side of the coin, so to speak, is not examined in the statement.  Development of any kind of discipline depends not only on the achievement from other subjects but on the experience and study of its own. As economics discussed above, although the introduction of game theory by Nash bring a great change in economics study, the advance of economics also depend on the classical economic theory, like The Wealth of Nations and so on.
此段有点太单薄，总体上正文三段你要是支持作者，2正1负就可以了。


There is no absolutely independent discipline in modern science. According to a recent survey, there are more than two thousand interdisciplinary research today. Therefore, making significant improvement without outsiders help from other fields might be very hard in modern discipline study.
也没有再提到靠自己发展的作用，如果你想完全支持作者也可以，之前那段去掉就行，
Amy就是那么写的。

[ 本帖最后由 graduate06 于 2006-12-23 23:15 编辑 ]

liquidshileUID: 2254332

电脑那一段的确没有写好，
观点我就改为赞同，把那一段删了,电脑那一段在丰富一下，明天就改