Issue103 [synergy小组]polymerwufan第十一次作业

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Issue 103    Time:45min   Words:433

According to the speaker, the value of history study is of value only it has relevance to our daily lives. I concede that one of the functions of history study involves directing and leading our current actions in daily lives. However, the significance of history is not limited in this utilitarian objective. In my view, history can make people aware of themselves and their ethnics or nation in the broader world.

Admittedly, the study of history can serve to teach the past experiences of success and the lessons of failure to today's people in the similar conditions. For example, by learning the campaign in the past wars, the commander of army can know what dictation is more reasonable and avoid some faulty decisions. Therefore, the main courses in military academia involves the study the ancient war cases. Moreover, the history is replete with some severe accidents, such as chemical industry accidents and even nuclear accidents. Through the study of these accidents, people acquire enough information about the causes of the accidents and the sound measures to prevent them from reoccurring.Thus, the history actually serves as the alarm of disaster towards our today's actions, especially when it comes to some dangerous areas, such as wars and accidents.

Nevertheless, the significance of history is far more than the utilitarian purpose above mentioned. One important function of history is to identify our own ethnics and civilizations in the broader world. History can tell us enough information about our ancestors' lives and experiences as well as our nation's developments, which might help us to identify and appreciate our own civilizations. This function of history seems more important than ever since the communication among many different nation and ethnics becomes more and more frequent. Without history, we might merely differentiate people through the color of their hair or skin. This is obviously insufficient. Through learning the history of ourselves as well as other nations, we might acquire enough knowledge to know the current custom and ideologies among different countries. It is very important to deal with many conflicts in the world. After all, to some extent, the history determines how we think and act today.

To sum up, the speaker's claim reveals one of the functions of history study. However, he or she overlooks other ones involved in history. History, on the one hand, serve as the mirror of certain concrete human experiences which can help today's people live better ; on the other hand, it reflects the broader cultural circumstance during a long period, which might sever to help people clearly identify themselves in the world.

[ 本帖最后由 polymerwufan 于 2006-12-25 18:34 编辑 ]

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#1 发表于 2006-12-25 18:22  资料 短消息   Issue103 [synergy小组]polymerwufan第十一次作业 Issue 103    Time:45min   Words:433 According to the speaker, the value of history study is of value only it has relevance to our daily lives. I concede that one of the functions of history study involves directing and leading our current actions in daily lives. However, the significance of history is not limited in【to】 this utilitarian objective. In my view, history can make people aware of themselves and their ethnics or nation in the broader world.[首段总起，也应该提一下第二段的内容吧，只提了第三段的内容] Admittedly, the study of history can serve to teach the past experiences of success and the lessons of failure to today's people in the similar conditions. For example, by learning the campaign in the past wars, the commander of army can know what dictation【这个词好像不合适】 is more reasonable and avoid some faulty decisions. Therefore, the main courses in military academia involves the study the ancient war cases. Moreover, the history is replete with some severe accidents, such as chemical industry accidents and even nuclear accidents. Through the study of these accidents, people acquire enough information about the causes of the accidents and the sound measures to prevent them from reoccurring. Thus, the history actually serves as the alarm of disaster towards our today's actions, especially when it comes to some dangerous areas, such as wars and accidents. Nevertheless, the significance of history is far more than the utilitarian purpose above mentioned. One important function of history is to identify our own ethnics and civilizations in the broader world. History can tell us enough information about our ancestors' lives and experiences as well as our nation's developments, which might help us to identify and appreciate our own civilizations. This function of history seems more important than ever since the communication among many different nation【nations】 and ethnics becomes more and more frequent. Without history, we might merely differentiate people through the color of their hair or skin. This is obviously insufficient. Through learning the history of ourselves as well as other nations, we might acquire enough knowledge to know the current custom and ideologies among different countries. It is very important to deal with many conflicts in the world. After all, to some extent, the history determines how we think and act today. To sum up, the speaker's claim reveals one of the functions of history study. However, he or she overlooks other ones involved in history. History, on the one hand, serve as the mirror of certain concrete human experiences which can help today's people live better ; on the other hand, it reflects the broader cultural circumstance during a long period, which might sever[serve] to help people clearly identify themselves in the world. [本帖最后由 polymerwufan 于 2006-12-25 18:34 编辑]

[ 本帖最后由 zhouwanqiu 于 2006-12-25 20:55 编辑 ]

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According to the speaker, the value of history study is of value(两个value? )only (when)it has relevance to our daily lives. I concede that one of the functions of history study involves directing and leading our current actions in daily lives.(能这样理解吗?关于这道题的理解我发了贴子,你可以去看一下,个人觉得应该是讨论研究与日常生活相关或无关的历史有没有价值,或许可以有两种理解,至少范文是你这样理解,但是范文也有不是没有跑题的时候)However, the significance of history is not limited in this utilitarian objective. In my view, history can make people aware of themselves and their ethnics or nation in the broader world.

Admittedly, the study of history can serve to teach the past experiences of success and the lessons of failure to today's people in the similar conditions. For example, by learning the campaign in the past wars, the commander of army can know what dictation is more reasonable and avoid some faulty decisions. Therefore, the main courses in military academia involves the study
(of)the ancient war cases. Moreover, the history is replete with some severe accidents, such as chemical industry accidents and even nuclear accidents. Through the study of these accidents, people acquire enough information about the causes of the accidents and the sound measures to prevent them from reoccurring.Thus, the history actually serves as the alarm of disaster towards our today's actions, especially when it comes to some dangerous areas, such as wars and accidents.

Nevertheless, the significance of history is far more than the utilitarian purpose above mentioned. One important function of history is to identify our own ethnics and civilizations in the broader world. History can tell us enough information about our ancestors' lives and experiences as well as our nation's developments, which might help us to identify and appreciate our own civilizations. This function of history seems more important than(没有than吧) ever since the communication among many different nation(复数) and ethnics becomes more and more frequent. Without history, we might merely differentiate people through the color of their hair or skin. This is obviously insufficient. Through learning the history of ourselves as well as other nations, we might acquire enough knowledge to know the current custom and ideologies among different countries. It is very important to deal with many conflicts in the world. After all, to some extent, the history determines how we think and act today.你在你的Ts是不是应该加上identify other 民族或文明,因为你后面谈到了这个问题,而TS里没有这个意思,另外,感觉尾句的语意不明确

To sum up, the speaker's claim reveals one of the functions of history study. However, he or she overlooks other ones involved in history. History, on the one hand, serve as the mirror of certain concrete human experiences which can help today's people live better ; on the other hand, it reflects the broader cultural circumstance during a long period, which might sever to help people clearly identify themselves in the world.(我觉得这篇文章应该是谈研究历史的价值,而不是历史的价值,而你全篇侧重与后者,或者说把两者的概念混淆在一起了,不知道你到底是在谈研究历史的价值还是历史本身的价值,我用兰色的字把你文中出现的这两个词都标出来了,你看是不是搞混了)

另外,我说poly啊,你每次都能限时完成,我们都很佩服呀,但是你能不能再多写一点,感觉你都在说理,没有具体的例子,既然你写作文已经很快了,一个下午写出三篇,真是很强,你再在找例子方面多花一点点时间,你的文章就会精彩很多
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According to the speaker, the value of history study is of value(两个value? )only (when)it has relevance to our daily lives. I concede that one of the functions of history study involves directing and leading our current actions in daily lives.(能这样理解吗?关于这道题的理解我发了贴子,你可以去看一下,个人觉得应该是讨论研究与日常生活相关或无关的历史有没有价值,或许可以有两种理解,至少范文是你这样理解,但是范文也有不是没有跑题的时候)However, the significance of history is not limited in this utilitarian objective. In my view, history can make people aware of themselves and their ethnics or nation in the broader world.

Admittedly, the study of history can serve to teach the past experiences of success and the lessons of failure to today's people (people nowadays)in the (when confronting) similar conditions (matters). For example, by learning the campaign in the past wars, the commander of army can know what dictation is more reasonable and avoid some faulty decisions. Therefore, the main courses in military academia involves (involve) the study
(of) the ancient war cases. Moreover, the history is replete with some severe accidents, such as chemical industry accidents and even nuclear accidents. Through the study of these accidents, people acquire enough information about the causes of the accidents and the sound measures to prevent them from reoccurring.Thus, the history actually serves as the alarm of disaster towards our today's actions, especially when it comes to some dangerous areas, such as wars and accidents.

Nevertheless, the significance of history is far more than the utilitarian purpose above mentioned. One important function of history is to identify our own ethnics and civilizations (from other ones) in the broader world. History can tell us enough information about our ancestors' lives and experiences as well as our nation's developments, which might help us to identify and appreciate our own civilizations. This function of history seems more important than(没有than吧) ever since the communication among many different nation(复数) and ethnics becomes more and more frequent. Without history, we might merely differentiate people through the color of their hair or skin. This is obviously insufficient. Through learning the history of ourselves as well as other nations(这两个不对称), we might acquire enough knowledge to know the current custom and ideologies among different countries. It is very important to deal with many conflicts in the world. After all, to some extent, the history determines how we think and act today.（这两句最好整合成一句，理解历史的不同有助于我们处理这个世界的种种矛盾，因为正是基于不同历史背景的意识形态决定了这些矛盾的产生）你在你的Ts是不是应该加上identify other 民族或文明,因为你后面谈到了这个问题,而TS里没有这个意思,另外,感觉尾句的语意不明确

To sum up, the speaker's claim reveals one of the functions of history study. However, he or she overlooks other ones involved in history. History, on the one hand, serve as the mirror of certain concrete human experiences which can help today's people live better ; on the other hand, it reflects the broader cultural circumstance during a long period, which might sever to help people clearly identify themselves in the world.(我觉得这篇文章应该是谈研究历史的价值,而不是历史的价值,而你全篇侧重与后者,或者说把两者的概念混淆在一起了,不知道你到底是在谈研究历史的价值还是历史本身的价值,我用兰色的字把你文中出现的这两个词都标出来了,你看是不是搞混了)我现在也觉得好像我自己和你写的是一个套路的了，westlife’不说，我根本没有意识到这个问题。

[ 本帖最后由 hyt0303 于 2006-12-28 09:43 编辑 ]

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总是修改不过来，你将就一点考下来再看吧：（

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According to the speaker, the value of history study is of value only it has relevance to our daily lives. I concede that one of the functions of history study involves directing and leading our current actions in daily lives. However, the significance of history is not limited into this utilitarian objective. In my view, history can make people aware of themselves and their ethnics or nation in the broader world.

Admittedly, the study of history can serve to teach the past experiences of success and the lessons of failure to people nowadays who are in the similar conditions. For example, by learning the campaign in the past, the commander of army can know what dictation is more reasonable and avoid some faulty decisions. Therefore, the main courses in military academia involves the study the ancient war cases. Moreover, the history is replete with some severe accidents, such as chemical industry accidents and even nuclear accidents. Good PointThrough the study of these accidents, people acquire enough information about the causes of the accidents and the sound measures to prevent them from recurring.Thus, the history actually serves as the alarm of disaster towards our today's楼主好象很喜欢这种表达法 actions, especially when it comes to some dangerous areas, such as wars and accidents.

Nevertheless, the significance of history is far more than the utilitarian purpose above mentioned. One important function of history is to identify our own ethnics and civilizations in the broader world. History can tell us enough information about our ancestors' lives and experiences as well as our nation's developments, which might help us to identify and appreciate our own civilizations. This function of history seems more important than ever since the communication among many different nation and ethnics becomes more and more frequent. Without history, we might merely differentiate people through the color of their hair or skin，which is obviously insufficient. Through learning the history of ourselves as well as other nations, we might acquire enough knowledge to know the current custom and ideologies among different countries. It is very important to deal with many conflicts in the world. After all, to some extent, the history determines how we think and act today.

To sum up, the speaker's claim reveals one of the functions of history study. However, he or she overlooks other ones involved in history. History, on the one hand, serve as the mirror of certain concrete human experiences which can help today's people live better ; on the other hand, it reflects the broader cultural circumstance during a long period, which might sever to help people clearly identify themselves in the world.

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today's 可以用current，present，modern等词代替着用哈，不然感觉很重复单调。

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我也写了同一篇请大家也帮忙看看！我也觉得在写的过程中很容易把历史价值和历史两个概念混淆，但是稍微调整，换个说法就可以转换过来了！

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