Issue105 ～ Issue11 【南智组 luckychina第四次提纲作业】

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105"The true strength of a country is best demonstrated by the willingness of its government to tolerate challenges from its own citizens."
一个国家真正的强大最好的表现在他的政府是否愿意包容人民的挑战
基本同意
1.      人民的挑战可以促进一个国家的发展。
2.      政府生而为人民，就应该包容
3.国家的强大还体现在很多其他方面
总感觉这题把握的不准的说，是不是离题了呢？

116"With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences."
agree
1.      education  资源共享
2.      science 学术合作、交流  eg.人类基因组计划
3.      policy
这里有个问题
这是属于is类的，如果写成
1.      国际影响的好处
2.      但是会对自身的生存发展安全造成威胁
3.      也会是diversity逐渐消失
这样会不会就成了写should呢？
如果是，那is题要如何证明事实呢，只有case by case的写法吗？

170"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
有保留的反对
1.      general welfare固然重要
2.      但这些elites的成就也是为了人们的生活更好
Eg.rulers使和谐安全，artists使更美，scientists使更方便
3.一个国家的伟大还体现在很多方面
请问这个B3是不是离题了呢，因为题目好像只给了两个选择的说~~

197"The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries."
基本赞成
1.      物质上
2.      文化上
3.      同时也要保持自身的unique
这里的material progress and well-being是不是只包括物质上而不包括文化呢？

11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
反对
1.      世界上的严重社会问题
2.       建立这所大学不能根除这些问题
3.       即使可以解决，也不可行
这一题是高频，大家可以参考一下前人的精华~~
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=441433&pid=1768399328&page=1&extra=page%3D1

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105 主要还是看你怎么展开了 1,2条现在看起来跟国家强大关系不大, 毕竟题目的意思是国家强大的表现, 而不是国家强大的原因
116 分领域写容易造成论述不全面, 不如按方面展开, 再从各领域里找例子, 反正看你怎么展开了, 找个观点逐条论证就行了, ISSUE也不是八股文
170 不偏, 对题目的development没问题
197
well-being
well-be.ing
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n.（名词）
The state of being healthy, happy, or prosperous; welfare.
康乐：健康、幸福或富裕的状态；福利

偏重物质性的

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谢谢lastangel~~

105。看了楼上的点评，想了想，可以改成这样吗
       1。人民的挑战有哪些  （类似unjust laws那题）
       2。政府对这些挑战的态度表现了国家的强大与否
       3。当然国家的强大还表现在其他的方面
      感觉没有离题，但还是不太好展开的说~~请教牛人还有什么好办法呢？

116。那楼上的意思就是可以用第二个提纲写啦？那和should题也没什么区别啦？还是我理解错了呢？
     confused:(

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105需要论证最好的表现吧？可以有其他表现，但是如果这个是最好的你就该完全支持，所以3还不足以成为你保留意见的原因吧？

116这里是 will be，跟is是有区别的吧？所有我觉得第二种没跑。

197 我发现well-being被我理解为安定了。。。

11 prefect

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105
并没有离题，过于笼统，缺少论据

116
没有离题，我更喜欢第二种写法

170
general welfare固然重要，重要在哪里？希望看到你的论据。B3不离题。

197
实在没法评论。。。。

11
思考问题角度不错

请允许我猛批：
实在是想评论点什么，但就没有话说，我希望以后在写提纲时一定要加上自己的论据，不然像这样笼统的"1、A好B不好  2、建议结合 3、需考虑其他“不能反应实际问题。至少要能保证你在拿到这道题时能思路清晰，说理到位。如果连论据都没有，到考场上在现想，那现在写的提纲岂不是没有任何意义？
如有不妥，请多包涵。。。

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谢谢组长恨批~~毕竟批评比表扬有价值的多~~

最近看了一些imong写的精华，尤其是那个给经常写提纲的人的贴，发现自己有很多他说的错。可是不那样写，又如何展开呢？

比如说imong说不要莫名其妙的补充说明，除了离题没有什么用处。尤其是事实性命题。不要来个“注意的问题”，就老师回答是，or不是。

这样的话，以上这些提纲的B3似乎都有这个补充说明的问题~~虽然我们应该辩证的灵活的运用这些所谓的“规则”，但如何去把握呢？

还有像116第二种写法明明就是should啦~~如何看是否离题呢？

欢迎继续讨论~~

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105"The true strength of a country is best demonstrated by the willingness of its government to tolerate challenges from its own citizens."
原来的没跑题，只是文章主题不是很明确

       国家强大最好的表现 VS 包容群众挑战

写之前想想这些：什么使国家强大？怎样算是包容人民的挑战？如何体现国家的强大？包容是不是最好的体现？

贴个我的收藏：
In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing complexity of national affairs and international relationship, issues on how to make a influntial and powerfull country are always enthusiastically debated, abstracting from the success of US and some european countries,more and more people realized the true strength of a country is best demonstrated by the willingness of its government to tolerate challenges from citizens.

1，A thriving society is always based on democratic spirits which emphasize the the right of all citizens.
2，Since the function of a government is to serve their citizens rather than to rule them, the goverment should always encourage the challenges from it's own citizens without which the government becomes either autarchic or unimpassioned.
3，Moreover,as a matter of fact,the history of development of the human society is a history of limiting the power of goverment and allowing more and more citizens participating in polity ,government are experiencing more and more chanlenge from it's citizens :in old times, major policy decisions were only made by individuals with supremacy such as kings,queens and sovereigns who are almost nonchallengable, with the advance of the civilization,congress shares the power and help to make the policy,today in a developed courty,each civilian is enfranchised for some most important events such as voting for a new president of the nation,even a normal individual could question the president of the whole nation.

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116"With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences."

Agree
1、经济方面，国家之间联系紧密，全球的资源，进行市场分配，每个国家都需要从其他国家进口一些资源，另外，旅游业是某些国家的支柱。
2、政治方面，别国政坛的不稳定，会通过两国之间已经签订的各种协议而影响到一个国家。
3、反恐方面，现在的犯罪很多都是国际组织所为，他们往往在另外一个国家策划，而犯罪过程也通过辗转几个国家。

原来的两种写法都可以，第二种非should，写的也更丰富一些，绝对不是跑题，怎么觉得是should呢？

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170"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."

这道题目太典型的需要理解关键词系列。本题关键词是“general welfare ”

First, it should define "general welfare."
Second, it assumes that the sorts of achievements that the speaker cites have nothing to do with a nation's general welfare.

A. It is our scientists, artists, and political leaders—or so-called rulers—who by way of their achievements bring the aim of people's welfare into fruition. When we speak of "promoting the general welfare," we refer to the following index: public health and safety, security against military invasion, individual autonomy and freedom, cultural richness, and a high standard of living.
B. Scientific achievements serve to enhance a nation's general welfare.
a) Advances in the health science have enhanced our physical well-being, comfort, and life span.
b) Advances in technology have enabled us to travel to more places, communicate with more people from different walks of life, and learn more about the world much more effectively.
c) Advances in physics and engineering make our buildings safer, and enable us to travel to more places, more distant places, with greater safety and speed.
C. Artistic achievement is also needed to make a nation a better place for humans overall.
D. The military and diplomatic accomplishments of a nation's leaders provide an integral contribution to the general welfare of any nation's populace.

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197"The material progress and well-being of one country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well-being of all other countries."

Interconnection of nations
Agree
1、经济方面，国家之间联系紧密，全球的资源，进行市场分配，每个国家都需要从其他国家进口一些资源，另外，旅游业是某些国家的支柱。
2、政治方面，别国政坛的不稳定，会通过两国之间已经签订的各种协议而影响到一个国家。
3、反恐方面，现在的犯罪很多都是国际组织所为，他们往往在另外一个国家策划，而犯罪过程也通过辗转几个国家。

这个，well-being 不受 matreial限制，material progress 就是物质方面

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11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
这道题题目一看，可行性是个讨论点

Disagree
1、诚然，现在的许多问题，范围不仅仅局限在一个国家，而是影响全球。例如污染、毒品。在解决这些问题时，各国必须同心协力，各出各的力量。
2、建立一所大学是没有必要的。当今，在解决这些问题的时候，各国已经非常紧密地合作。
3、另外，专门为这类问题培养学生是不正确的，这限制了他们的思路。
Though each social problem appears to be different in different nations, as theft in affluent nations may be conducted more for psychological reasons rather than for the value of the issue with regard to its counterpart in poor nations, there is always a radical key lying beneath.
On the other hand, though nearly all the social problems are persisting in every nation, some may be disasters in one nation while slight flaw in another.  Such a global university asks for the support from all nations of the world.