issue103 hugo010311-hamming组第七次作业

hugo010311UID: 2237388

TOPIC: ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
WORDS: 438        TIME: so long       DATE: 2007-1-4

It cannot be denied that the study of history has value to the extent that it is relevant to our lives, but it is absurd when we think that it is only in our daily lives that there are values of the study of history. Actually, not only history has values relevant to our daily lives, but its values will serve us for our future as well.  

On the one hand, no doubt, the value of study of history offer human being good experience helping to study and work more efficiently in our daily lives. For instance, commanders in our times can avoid the mistake made by past commanders to make for more effective wartime leadership. From the ancient Chinese author Sun Tzu's book "The Art of War", today's military commanders and even business leaders gather valuable information that allows them to operate more efficiently and effectively. In addition, all the scientific knowledge we learn today are in the instruction of ancestors’ experiences of study, from the theory of relativity, Principia Mathematica to the theory of EM wave. Not departure from the orbits of the truth, we create higher levels of principle much more efficiently due to the contribution given by the sage in the past. Notably, our daily lives would be hindered and slowed without the value of the study of history.

On the other hand, to study history human being learns how to make better decision for the future of the world in that history show us human being a scientific thinking that proved to be the objective truth. The exploder of the 'little boy' in Japan admonished us to be serious about atomic weapon. The extinction of the varieties species tells us but for environmental protection creature in the future would become fewer and fewer. As we know, in world war two, the chauvinism in Germany led to great disaster not only to the Germans but also to the people of whole world. Fortunately, the government of Germany leant from the history that chauvinism would be harmful, and thus takes effective actions to restrict the resurgence of Nazism in all of the aspects of society. It is apparent that attitudes and actions Germany conducted would have a deep and thoughtful influence on the future of them. As a consequence, the world in the future is affected by the study of history because the rules and lessons of history decide the way we act for the fate of our offspring.

To sum up, the study of history will make us better lives in daily time and more advisable decisions in the future.  

ScorpionSkyUID: 2273954

问题就在于这里, 日常生活可以包括未来的日常生活,和现在的.
所以从时间上区分的话会有点疑问,我个人觉得日常生活是个领域,那么我们可以从以外的领域,和人类的日常生活联系不紧密的去区分,比如人类的起源,社会的发展规律等^'
呵呵，咱们的例子撞车了,都用了别人的军事.
也没有办法,例子确实难找了点 ~

tomato217UID: 2126636

It cannot be denied that the study of history has value to the extent that it is relevant to our lives, but it is absurd when we think that it is only in our daily lives that there are values of the study of history. Actually, not only history has values relevant to our daily lives, but its values will serve us for our future as well. [读起来挺别扭，建议：Actually, history has values relevant to not only our daily life but also our future.] [这里还涉及到一个本质性的问题，什么是daily life？你的观点是建立在daily life和future完全是两码事的前提下。但这个前提是否成立？这也是我没写这篇题目的原因之一]

On the one hand, no doubt, the value of study of history offer human being good experience helping to study and work more efficiently in our daily lives.[理清逻辑关系：study history->experience->help human being。这整个过程体现value。] For instance, commanders in our times can avoid the mistake made by past commanders to make for more effective wartime leadership.[关键的“借鉴历史”应该在这个例子的小TS里面点明，而不是让读者去体会联想] From the ancient Chinese author Sun Tzu's book "The Art of War", today's military commanders and even business leaders gather valuable information that allows them to operate more efficiently and effectively. In addition, all the scientific knowledge we learn today are in the instruction of ancestors’ experiences of study, from the theory of relativity, Principia Mathematica[拼写] to the theory of EM wave[要么全称，要么不写。举例应尽量避免专业缩略语]. Not departure from the orbits of the truth, we create higher levels of principle much more efficiently due to the contribution given by the sage in the past. Notably, our daily lives would be hindered and slowed without the value of the study of history.

On the other hand, to[from] study history human being learns how to make better decision for the future of the world in that history show us human being a scientific thinking that proved to be the objective truth.[历史体现一个科学思想？？？] The exploder of the 'little boy' in Japan admonished us to be serious about atomic weapon. The extinction of the varieties [of] species tells us but for environmental protection creature in the future would become fewer and fewer. As we know, in world war two, the chauvinism in Germany led to great disaster not only to the Germans but also to the people of whole world. […great disaster swept over not only Germany but also the whole world ] Fortunately, the government of Germany [the Germanic government] leant from the history that chauvinism would be harmful, and thus takes effective actions to restrict the resurgence of Nazism in all of[可省掉of the，society前面加the] the aspects of society. It is apparent that attitudes and actions Germany conducted would have a deep and thoughtful influence on the future of them [指代什么?]. As a consequence, the world in the future is affected by the study of history because the rules and lessons of history decide the way we act for the fate of our offspring.

To sum up, the study of history will make us better lives in daily time and more advisable decisions in the future.[没有make sb decision一说吧；假设daily time跟future能区别开，那么应该是the study of history makes our daily lives better and will provide more advices for our decisions in the future. ]