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发表于 2007-1-5 18:08:08 |显示全部楼层
103."The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

研究、学习历史具有其自身的价值仅仅在于它和我们的日常生活相关联。


有保留的反对:研究学习历史在和我们日常生活无关时也很有意义。
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历史不仅仅指那些伟大的事件国家人类的历史,个人的过去也是历史。历史不仅在日常生活相关联的事情时有价值,在很多其他的方面也有价值。
History involves not only the record of great men and significant events in a nation or in human history. As a matter of fact, the past of a common person is also a composition of history. Therefore, we would benefit from study of history whether it is related to our daily lives or not. [54]
日常生活中的学习历史知识的好处,比如烹饪cookery
It is true that in some cases, studying history is valuable to us in our daily lives. Cookery, the oldest and most essential of arts and crafts, frequently connects our daily lives. The three major styles of cookery are the Chinese, Italian, and French. In modern community, people concern quality rather than simply quantity, we can make a delicious meal by studying a cookbook in which the means of cooking inherited from previous cuisine. [74]

在很多情况下,研究历史对我们的日常生活有很多的帮助,例子:给我们灵感,前人的经验,精神帮助和鼓励我们,
In addition, learning about great mens achievements of the past can provide inspiration to us. For example, boys inspired by the determination, willpower and courage of the great explorer, like Amundsen, who is the first person known to reach the South Pole, his success was due primarily to his knowledge of polar conditions, his attention to minute details, and his ability to endure great physical stress, would have decision to be a man like Amundsen. This decision, in turn, could affect the boys everyday life, makes the boy have strong character. In short, learning about grand accomplishments of the past can help us get through the everyday business of living, whatever that business might be, by encouraging us and boosting our spirits. [122改自北美]   


研究历史对现代社会和国家的好处,比如政策的制定,(与日常生活无关)
The study of history can help our society avoid repeating same mistakes with antecedent experience. Studying economic crisis in the past, like the Great Depression through the 1930s and Asian financial crisis in the late 1990s, our government would be able to adjust policies to modern economic situation and make appropriate course of action to stimulate increase in modern economy. In addition, American independent history, which is a long time battle against English colonial administration, could show the cost of freedom and equality for young generations. More important, histories that tell the national story, emphasizing distinctive feature of national experience, would be a means of understanding of national values and a commitment to national loyalty. [115]


掌握历史规律可以预测未来(和日常生活无关,预测未来)
History study does not only benefit our present life, but is salutary to our future. In fact, we can seize the inherent rule of history through research of the past, which can provide necessary experiences for improvement of our society. For example, current government can manage the nation better from studying the blossom and ruin of historical country. [58没写好]

In my opinion, history can provide examples, perspectives and insights that are directly or indirectly relevant to contemporary challenges. Research in the field of history would benefit our nations and humanity. [31]


这次写的不好写了两天,没有找到多少例子,历史类的好难写!郁闷啊~就要考了!
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Issue103 Liquidshile--Hamming有点郁闷!我怎么写成这样

103."The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

研究、学习历史具有其自身的价值仅仅在于它和我们的日常生活相关联。有保留的反对:研究学习历史在和我们日常生活无关时也很有意义。

[ WORDS: 454 ]

历史不仅仅指那些伟大的事件国家人类的历史,个人的过去也是历史。历史不仅在日常生活相关联的事情时有价值,在很多其他的方面也有价值。

History involves not only the record of great men and significant events in a nation or in human history. As a matter of fact, the past of a common person is also a composition of history. Therefore, we would benefit from study of history whether it is related to our daily lives or not. [54]

日常生活中的学习历史知识的好处,比如烹饪cookeryIt is true that in some cases, studying history is valuable to us in our daily lives. Cookery, the oldest and most essential -arts and crafts, frequently connects our daily lives. The three major styles of cookery in the worldare the Chinese, Italian, and French. In modern community, people concern quality rather than simply quantity好像联系不大, we can make a delicious meal by studying a cookbook in which the means of cooking inherited from previous cuisine. [74]好像可以多说几句更有说服力

在很多情况下,研究历史对我们的日常生活有很多的帮助,例子:给我们灵感,前人的经验,精神帮助和鼓励我们,

In addition, learning about great mens achievements of the past can provide inspiration to us. For example, boys inspired by the determination, willpower and courage of the great explorer, like Amundsen, who is the first person known to reach the South Pole, his success was due primarily to his knowledge of polar conditions, his attention to minute details, and his ability to endure great physical stress, would have decision to be a man like Amundsen. This decision, in turn, could affect the boys everyday life, makes the boy have strong character. In short, learning about grand accomplishments of the past can help us get through the everyday business of living, whatever that business might be, by encouraging us and boosting our spirits. [122改自北美]

研究历史对现代社会和国家的好处,比如政策的制定,(与日常生活无关)

The study of history can help our society avoid repeating same mistakes with antecedent experience. Studying economic crisis in the past, like the Great Depression through the 1930s and Asian financial crisis in the late 1990s, our government would be able to adjust policies to modern economic situation and make appropriate course of action to stimulate increase in modern economy. In addition, American independent history, which is a long time battle against English colonial administration, could show the cost of freedom and equality for young generations. More important, histories that tell the national story, emphasizing distinctive feature of national experience, would be a means of understanding of national values and a commitment to national loyalty. [115]例子不错

掌握历史规律可以预测未来(和日常生活无关,预测未来)

History study does not only benefit our present life, but is salutary to our future. In fact, we can seize the inherent rule of history through research of the past, which can provide necessary experiences for improvement of our society. For example, current government can manage the nation better from studying the blossom and ruin of historical country. [58没写好]

In my opinion, history can provide examples, perspectives and insights that are directly or indirectly relevant to contemporary challenges. Research in the field of history would benefit our nations and humanity. [31]

自己感觉历史确实不好写,不过LZ已经分析的很好了,值得学习

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发表于 2007-1-5 22:51:06 |显示全部楼层
要抓紧限时了

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发表于 2007-1-5 23:48:45 |显示全部楼层
就是没法限时阿,好难写
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发表于 2007-1-5 23:50:26 |显示全部楼层

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谢谢修改了
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发表于 2007-1-6 21:55:53 |显示全部楼层
现在开始限时正好哈
2007,我们的救赎年……


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