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88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics.
Outline:
1.        technologies influence social customs and ethics. Technologies prolongs the people’s survive ,and changes the people’s attitude of medication
2.       more over , in terns of the society, the way of communication brought about by electronic technology have transformed the way we associate with each other in out daily lives,makes the society more efficient  and coherent
3.       however, technologies will not determine social customs and ethics. For social customs and ethics are based on humanity. Technology has to confine the principle of human nature. Taking Hitler for example
4.       we should take the advantages of technology to make it contribute with the society


150."Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
Outline
1         it is true television and worldwide computer connections that made people become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. But it will indicate that tourism will soon become obsolete
2         firstly, people could see the places that they have never visited by television and worldwide computer connections.
3         Secondly, people could knew of the cultural and ethical of other country
4         Admittedly, there are some limitation that exist in the process of recording and watching
5         Other wise, it is different seeing the place with watching television and worldwide pc from visiting the place in reality.
6         It is impossible for every body to see every corner of the world.



7."The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
Outline
1 the video camera provides an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation
  Firstly, Video could record vivid picture and record
2 it is impropriate to say that the video is more important form of documentation than written records
  Written records can be restored , can be transformed for ever


159."The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
Outline
1         the human mind will be always superior to machines
2         human mind will be not superior to machines in some respects
3         machines are tools of human minds but not the only tools.




30"The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
Outline
1         the primary goal of technological advancement is to increase people’s efficiency
2          on the other hand, technological would harm to people’s efficiency
3         Everyone would  have to learn more technology to fit for the advancement of technology


176."The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each."
Outline
1,  the function of science is to reassure the purpose of art is to upset
2  the value of the science and the value of the art


4."No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
Outline
1         field of study can advance by bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study
2         there are many other factors can be bring to improve the field of study


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