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发表于 2007-1-16 21:36:09 |显示全部楼层
题目:ISSUE40 - "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."
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Nowadays there is a controversial that how can we concerned with scholars and researchers. Someone suggest that scholars and researchers should be concerned with their contribution to our society. But another suggests that they pursue their individual interests however the interests is too special. In my opinion, i support the later, it is more important that the scholars and researcher pursue their individual interest whether it is unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem, not the contribution to the society.

Firstly, researchers should be encouraged to do researches freely, as interests always lead to efficiency. If a researcher does interest the subject, we can judge the can not make great progress in this domain. Without interest the scientist cannot get great progresses during researching. Take Thomas Edison for example, he tried thousands times to build a light bulb, if he did not interest in bulb, there would not be a bulb today. Also, we often see many physical scientist spend their whole life into dealing with the complex physical even if there is no tremendous progress or breakthrough, because the interest of physics they persist in doing the researches day by day. So we can see the interests in important, the motivation of the scientist in their research fields and they pursue is not the result but the interest.

But some one will ask if it is worthwhile to research those useless things? We can not say the useless things today but they may be useful things several years later. For example, when the quantum theory came out in 19th century, people thought it was a useless research in physics, but it make great stride for our researches and studies. There are many subjects correlate with the quantum theory,  without the "useless theory", there would not be such great progress as today's. Another example is the computer, when the computer came out in 1946, it was so huge, and the operation speed was slow, most people thought the computer was a useless thing, but the computer changes our life, society, and all of the world today.

Admittedly, scientists and researchers should pursue their individual interests more than their contributions to the large of society. However, they also should obey the moral and ethic. For instance, the clone human cloning technology is condemned because it would cause many ethic problems. Though scientists and researchers can select their subject in their interesting domain, when the subject relate with moral and ethic, it is forbidden.

To sum up, we encourage scientists and researchers pursue their individual whether the interests may unusual or idiosyncratic. We don't judge them by the contribution to our society. Only in this way the scientists and researchers can devote themselves to the researchers, and there will be a bright future for us.



真难写啊,写了一晚上都不知道自己再写什么,往死拍吧!

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Nowadays, there is a controversial that how can we concerned with scholars and researchers. Someone suggest that scholars and researchers should be concerned with their contribution to our society. But another suggestssuggest that they pursue their individual interests however the interests isare too special. In my opinion, i support重复 the later, it is more important that the scholars and researcher spursue their individual interests whether it is去掉 unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem, not the contribution to the society.觉得应该去掉
Firstly, researchers should be encouraged to do researches freely, as interests always lead to efficiency. If a researcher does interest the subject, we can judge the can not make great progress in this domain.什么意思? Without interest the scientist cannot get great progresses during researching. Take Thomas Edison for example, he tried thousands times to build a light bulb, if he did not interest in bulb, there would not be a bulb today. Also, we often see many physical scientist spend their whole life into dealing with the complex physical even if there is no tremendous progress or breakthrough, because the interest of physics they persist in doing the researches day by day. So we can see the interests in为什么用In,好象没有这种用法 important, the motivation of the scientist in their research fields and they pursue is not the result but the interest.后面一个例子,科学家由于兴趣而坚持研究但没有获得进步,这与该段要说明的兴趣能够促进提高相矛盾
But some one will ask if it is worthwhile to research those useless things? 这一句蹦出来的原因是上面一个例子吗?如果是,那前面一段的主题句就不应该是interests always lead to efficiencyWe can not say the useless things today but they may be useful things several years later. For example, when the quantum theory came out in 19th century, people thought it was a useless research in physics, but it make great stride for our researches and studies. There are many subjects correlate with the quantum theory,  without the "useless theory", there would not be such great progress as today's. Another example is可以换一下表达形式,another example显得有些僵硬 the computer, when the computer came out in 1946, it was so huge, and the operation speed was slow, most people thought the computer was a useless thing, but the computer changes our life, society, and all of the world today.单独的看这一段,例子用得还是很合理
Admittedly这个词在这里好象不够恰当,因为你的立场本来就是后面一句话,我认为用Although要好一些,再去掉后面的however, scientists and researchers should pursue their individual interests more than their contributions to the large of society. However, they also should obey the moral and ethic. For instance, the clone human cloning technology is condemned because it would cause many ethic problems. Though scientists and researchers can select their subject in their interesting domain, when the subject relate with moral and ethic, it is forbidden.句子错误
To sum up, we encourage scientists and researchersto pursue their individual whether the interests may unusual or idiosyncratic这个句子似乎错了 . We don't judge them by the contribution to our society. Only in this way the scientists and researchers can devote themselves to the researchersresearches, and there will be a bright future for us这句话有些站不住脚,科学家投身于研究我们就一定能有光明的未来吗?假设他违反了道德呢?就像作者前面说的

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