issue40 关于Scholars and researchers教育类[自由女神作文第五次作业]

rebecca0302UID: 2249779

Issue40（教育类）
" should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."

Outlines
On the one hand
1  firstly,there are benefits for scholars and researchers to be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society
Secondly it is essential for they to be concerned with whether it makes a contribution to individual .There are benefit for them to chase their individual interests
2 admittedly, it is important to pursue their individual interests
However ,it is not more important to pursue individual interests , the purpose of the education.
Therefore, they should be concerned with the contribution not only to the society but also the individuals


What is the relationship between scholars and researchers and their contribution?  In my opinion,  scholars and researches should be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution not only to the larger society but also the individual. Is it important for them to pursue their individual interests , no matter how special those interests may seem,  and social interests
Firstly, there are large benefits for scholars and researchers to be considered with whether their work is benefit for the large society .  Only if their work is good for the large society, the direction of their research would be point out, and then, the action done by scholars and researchers would be supported by the mass. For instance. In order to be good for the large society, the headmaster of school would reform its teaching schedule and the way and purpose of education. Then, an logical thinking, analysis, creative problem solving student would be created and ultimately it will be possible for the students to break the circles in which they are trapped. they may be jolt into believing in themselves as unique men and women and have the power to shape their own future. Society would be of powerful inspiration in turn. Admittedly, the relationship between society and the scholars and researchers’ contribution is indirectly, it would influence the process of the development of the society and their contribution.
Secondly, Obviously, it is the straightforward propose for the scholars and researchers to chase their individual interests. Taking Thomas Edison for example. In order to work in darkness and earn money, he knew 1800 ways to build a light bulb!
Admittedly, it is important to pursue their individual interests, however. it is not more important to do this. For the reason that, the education must make a man to become more efficient, to achieve with increasing facility the legitimate goals of his life, and also train one for quick, resolute and effective thinking, and enable one to sift and weigh evidence, to discern the true from the false, the real from the unreal, and the facts from the fiction. Otherwise, some one scarify his individual interests to pursue other things, taking insight thought and good manner for example.
In sun, the scholars and researchers should be concerned with the contribution not only to the society but also the individuals to make our life better.

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Outlines
On the one hand
1  firstly,there are benefits for scholars and researchers to be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society
Secondly it is essential for they to be concerned with whether it makes a contribution to individual .There are benefit for them to chase their individual interests
2 admittedly, it is important to pursue their individual interests
However ,it is not more important to pursue individual interests , the purpose of the education.
Therefore, they should be concerned with the contribution not only to the society but also the individuals


What is the relationship between scholars and researchers and their contribution?  In my opinion,  scholars and researches should be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution not only to the larger society but also the individual. Is it important for them to pursue their individual interests , no matter how special those interests may seem,  and social interests

Firstly, there are large benefits for scholars and researchers to be considered with whether their work is benefit for the large society .  Only if their work is good for the large society, the direction of their research would be point out, and then, the action done by scholars and researchers would be supported by the mass. For instance. In order to be good for the large society, the headmaster of school would reform its teaching schedule and the way and purpose of education. Then, an logical thinking, analysis, creative problem solving student would be created and ultimately it will be possible for the students to break the circles in which they are trapped. they may be jolt into believing in themselves as unique men and women and have the power to shape their own future. Society would be of powerful inspiration in turn. Admittedly, the relationship between society and the scholars and researchers’ contribution is indirectly, it would influence the process of the development of the society and their contribution.
这段写的有些虚个人认为没有很好的扣紧主题　或者说有些牵强，　可能对问题的理解不是很深
你的例子一点说服力也没有
Secondly, Obviously, it is the straightforward propose for the scholars and researchers to chase their individual interests. Taking Thomas Edison for example. In order to work in darkness and earn money, he knew 1800 ways to build a light bulb!
也太少了吧　　要多充实内容
Admittedly, it is important to pursue their individual interests, however. it is not more important to do this. For the reason that, the education must make a man to become more efficient, to achieve with increasing facility the legitimate goals of his life, and also train one for quick, resolute and effective thinking, and enable one to sift and weigh evidence, to discern the true from the false, the real from the unreal, and the facts from the fiction. Otherwise, some one scarify his individual interests to pursue other things, taking insight thought and good manner for example.

In sun, the scholars and researchers should be concerned with the contribution not only to the society but also the individuals to make our life better.
整体感觉条理不是很清楚，没太看明白你的中心意思．建议楼主多看看斑竹的帖子

rebecca0302UID: 2249779

好的 是感觉自己没有什么例子 发愁...!  谢谢GONGZHEN的点评:)