Issue185 ScorpionSky--Hamming组 丑闻~高频中的高频,冲刺第10篇,最终修改版!

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TOPIC: ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
WORDS: 436/559          TIME: 上午 12:45:00+15     DATE: 2007-1-26

The speaker asserts that, about areas of politics, academia and so forth, scandals always benefits society, because it somewhat counterbalanced the shortages of those speakers and reformers insofar. I fundamentally agree with this assertion. On one hand, scandals actually have certain attractive to public and impelling people to search for solutions. On the other hand, however, we should aware that some individuals and groups of individuals are utilizing scandals with malice for certain disgraceful interests.

First of all, scandals often serve us pay attention to pervasive social or political problems, which otherwise neglect by those speakers or reformers. For instance, when oil-to-food plan was unmasked, it overshadows Annan's entire ten years adeministration in UN, which actually is vevry excellent job. In addition, it also enlightened serious thinking，forced us to face with such questions: what is humanitarian (人道主义)? Or, what a severe corruption among government officials. On the other hand, when it comes to the field of academia, many people used to associate it with a pure impression. Whereas, Dr. Hwang Woo Suk's faked research awake the public from such a simply illusion. Moreover, it left scientists pondering how he had risen so fast and deceived so many. Both the two cases above just illustrated one fact, scandals benefit society in many facets actually.

Moreover, not only scandals could appeal public to concern certain social problems, but also appealing people to look for solutions. Consider, for instance, in February 1999, the biggest occupation scandal in the history of the Olympic Game's,  reports of widespread payoffs and improper gifts to International Olympic Committee (IOC) members were unfolded. Plentiful (multiple) investigations implicated that it involved at least 24 IOC members as well as Salt Lake City, local officials who had led a successful bid to host the 2002 Winter Games. The scandal resulted in appealing to major reform within the Olympics' governing body. Indeed, senior IOC member Marc Hodler called the fund a bribe and further alleged that 5 to 7 percent of the IOC's 115 members yet accustomed to solicited bribes from cities bidding to host the Olympic Games. If it does not owe to the corruption scandal, problems would not be exposed and remedied in time, otherwise occupations will keeping up spread..

Finally, to the society, scandals also serve mass of harms, especially when they are utilized by some individuals or groups which concerned them with selfish. There is a small example to support my point of view. More recently, in China, Zhang Jue, a starlet in the domain of movie, who exposed some private sexual relationship between herself and several famous Chinese directors. Many a media following this matter made a large number of reports, in fact, all those reports are meaningless. Both the media and the female starlet herself, even crowds who pay overmuch attention on it, they all have their perspective intentions. To the individual intend for reputation, to the mass medias desired as many attention as possible, and to the public only themselves know what they are want. After all, their behaviors pollute society's circumstance and particular hurt the youth, who are premature to clear the things of right and wrong.

To the end, as the speakers assertion, sandals are really benefits our society much more, and make up certain insufficient functions of speaker and reformer. In other words, sandals contribute to politics, academia and those fields as like. Meanwhile, human should bright eyes to distinct and resist those mean individuals or groups of individuals who inclined to cater public for their own interests.

[ 本帖最后由 ScorpionSky 于 2007-1-28 10:36 编辑 ]

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Issue185 "Scandals -- whether in politics, academia, or other areas -- can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."  丑闻，不管是政治、学术还是其他领域，都是有用的。它们能吸引人们的注意力，而使我们聚焦于问题，以一种演讲者和改革家都做不到的方式。

提纲
topic(部分同意)：作者说，对于社会的很多方面，比如政治，学术等，都是利大于弊的，因为他们弥补了发言人和改革家比较薄弱的方面。我基本上同意这个观点，确实丑闻有独特的吸引力和莫名的力量促使人们行动，但是，也不可否认，丑闻有时候被故意利用从而损害公众的利益。
The speaker asserts that, about areas of politics, academia and so forth, scandals are more benefits, because they could counterbalance the shortages of those speakers and reformers. I fundamentally agree with this assertion. For one thing, scandals have certain particularly attractive to public and impelling people to search for solutions. However, there remains an undeniable fact that certain individuals or groups of individuals utilize scandals with malice in order to some disgraceful interests.

1丑闻比发言人和改革家更容易吸引人们的注意力focus attention，而这是任何改革的第一步。
First of all, scandals can sometimes serve to call our attentions to pervasive social or political problems that we would otherwise neglect.
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When oil-for-food program was unmasked, this scandal overshadow the entire ten years of Annan’s administration in UN, which actually is very excellent job. Oil-for-food program is not only an event that affects Annan himself, to broader extent, it also enlightened serious thinking，forced us to face with such questions: what is humanitarian (人道主义)? Or, what a severe corruption among government officials.

举学术界为例。韩国黄禹锡(Dr. Woo-Suk Hwang)的克隆实验数据造假事件在一定程度上反映了当今学术界的造假问题。由此促进人们努力通过立法或法律的完善来制止一些类似的丑闻再次发生。
On the other hand, when it comes to the field of academia, many people used to associate it with a pure impression. Whereas, Dr. Hwang Woo Suk's faked research awake the public from such a simply illusion. Moreover, it left scientists wondering how he had risen so fast and deceived so many. Both the two cases just illustrated one fact, scandals benefit society in many facets actually.


2丑闻在一定程度上反映了社会问题，有利于促进法制的健全。
Moreover, based on the focus of society’s attention, scandal often pressing the related department to take some effective actions for responding.
A 如对1999年Olympic Games最严重的一次腐败案，大范围的支付和不正当的礼品，IOC成员中至少24个以及盐湖城本地的
In February 1999, the biggest corruption scandal in the history of the Olympic Games, reports of widespread payoffs and improper gifts to International Olympic Committee (IOC) members were unfolded. Plentiful (multiple) investigations implicated that it involved at least 24 IOC members as well as Salt Lake City, local officials who had led a successful bid to host the 2002 Winter Games. The scandal resulted in 造成appealing to major reform 较大的改革 within the Olympics' governing body. Indeed, senior IOC member Marc Hodler called the fund a bribe and further alleged that 5 to 7 percent of the IOC's 115 members yet accustomed to solicited bribes from cities bidding to host the Olympic Games. If it does not owe to the corruption scandal, problems would not be exposed and remedied in time.

3过分夸大丑闻的作用没什么意义，还可能被一些不怀好心的媒体和个人利用。
1、            炒作现象越来越严重。个人：中国的张珏
      媒体，
他们对公众带来了隐蔽的伤害，使人们觉得社会过于复杂，分散人们的注意力，尤其一些性丑闻，对缺乏判断力青少年可能带来更深远的影响。所以我们应该避免去关注这些垃圾丑闻。

Even on a societal level, scandals can serve chiefly to distract us from more important matters.

结局：确实，我们要肯定丑闻在政治，学术等方面产生了以外的作用，弥补了发言人和改革家不足的方面。也不可否认，丑闻有时候被故意利用从而损害公众的利益。我们应该擦亮眼睛，关注那些严重危害社会的丑闻并且去解决它，同时，鄙视和谴责那些利用丑闻，想获得特殊利益的人和团体。

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TOPIC: ISSUE185 - "Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

WORDS: 436/559          TIME: 上午 12:45:00+15     DATE: 2007-1-26

The speaker asserts that, about areas of politics, academia and so forth, scandals always benefits society, because it somewhat counterbalanced the shortages of those speakers and reformers insofar.有水平 I fundamentally agree with this assertion. On one hand, scandals actually have certain attractive to public and impelling people to search for solutions. On the other hand, however, we should aware that some individuals and groups of individuals are utilizing scandals with malice for certain disgraceful interests.

这个开头很好，我觉得不错，内容直接展开在这里，非常好，学习…….

First of all, scandals often serve us pay attention to peversive？ social or political problems, which otherwise neglect by those speakers or reformers. For instance, when oil-to-food plan was unmasked, it overshadows Annan's works in the past ten years in UN, which actually was excellent. In addition, oil-to-food scandal also drop public to deeply thinking and force the UN call for a major reform for the governing body. On the other hand, when it comes to academia, people always imagine with a pure impression. However, Dr, Hwang, Woo zsa' faked research was unfold, it broken such illusion and forced scientists to ponder why he is rises so rapidly and how could he cheated so many. Consequently, the both two cases reveal the fact that, in a sense, scandals are benefits our society. 和我用的一样的例子连话都基本一样

Moreover, not only scandals could appeal public to concern certain social problems, but also appealing people to look for solutions. Consider, for instance, in February 1999, the biggest occupation scandal in the history of the Olympic Game's, reports？好像少很多 of widespread payoffs and improper gifts to International Olympic Committee (IOC) members were unfolded. Plentiful (multiple) investigations implicated that it involved at least 24 IOC members as well as Salt Lake City, local officials who had led a successful bid to host the 2002 Winter Games. The scandal resulted in appealing to major reform within the Olympics' governing body. Indeed, senior IOC member Marc Hodler called the fund a bribe and further alleged that 5 to 7 percent of the IOC's 115 members yet accustomed to solicited bribes from cities bidding to host the Olympic Games. If it does not owe to the corruption scandal, problems would not be exposed and remedied in time. 这段例子太详细了，分析的不够，完全没有体现出这个solution，还是停留在了expose，满眼一看都是例子，还不容易看懂

Finally, to the society, scandals also serve mass of harms, especially when they are utilized by some individuals or groups which concerned them with selfish. There is a small example to support my point of view. More recently, in China, Zhang Jue, a starlet in the domain of movie, who discovered some private sexual relationship about herself with several famous Chinese directors. Many a media following this matter make a large number report, in fact, all those reports have meaningless. Both the media and the famale starlet herself, even crowds who pay more attention on it, they all have their perspective intentions. To the individual intend for popularize, to the mass medias desired as many attention as possible, and to the public only themselves know what they are want. After all, their behaviors pollute social circumstance and particular hurt the youth, who are premature to clear the things of right and wrong. 这段有深度，例子经典阿！

To the end, as the speaker’s assertion, sandals are really benefits our society much more, and make up certain insufficient functions of speaker and reformer. In other words, sandals contribute to politics, academia and those fields as like. Meanwhile, human should bright eyes to distinct and resist those mean individuals or groups of individuals who inclined to cater public for their own interests.

还是不错，不过没有限时和我一样，走到今天了不容易，别玩花的了好好拼，坚定了就不要动摇，说给你也说给我！

PS：Body2 我又看了一次，真的不行，这样很难写，你写得都跑题了，我觉得Body1，2 合并，根据具体的例子来solution， 把第一段分解为两段与第二段配合正好

[ 本帖最后由 liquidshile 于 2007-1-27 01:53 编辑 ]

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我已经修改过了,应该好多了~