issue4 【米国有米】第十一次作业

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4. No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."任何领域要取得重大进展，都需要外领域者的知识和经验。

There is a general debate over significant achievements which are made by outsiders who bring their knowledge and experience to one field of study among my schoolmates, when John Nash gained Nobel Prize in field of economics. One of the questions under debate is whether no field of study could advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that that field of study. In my opinion, the answer is not, not all the fields of study must advance in this way.

To begin with, some fields of study do gain great progress with fruit of other field of study. When outsiders enter a certain field, they bring not only their own knowledge or experience, but also a distinct view of this field. There is interesting phenomenon that nearly all the Nobel Prize gainers in fields of economics over the recent years are major in mathematics. For example mentioned above, John Nash, who is a professor in mathematics department in Princeton University, explains economic event with his mathematics theory, contributes greatly to progress of modern economics. It was the exchange of information and research measures that led these professors to a whole new view of one study.

Moreover, along with the rapid development of knowledge and technology, different fields of study often contribute great influence on each other, which now result in a new subject, a cross-discipline, such as biochemistry, physical chemistry. The cross-discipline not only accelerate research of their respective fields, but also make the new subjects begin at a high start point. Let us take biochemistry for example, which focuses on studying the origins of life by using thoughts from both fields of both biology and chemistry, has been taken into the application such as artificial bones. Furthermore, an increasing number of subjects need more and more knowledge and experience from other fields of study. For example, computer science needs other subjects like mathematics and art, to design a better program and a user-friendly appearance. Therefore it is necessary to learn from other fields of study to improve and make a progress in own fields.

However, not all fields of study must obtain great success with the exchange knowledge and experience from other fields. Although it is indispensable that one field of study would benefit from fruits of other fields of study, it is too absolute that any significant progress in any field results from other subjects. For example, computer science and engineering is always benefiting from its cousin, mathematics, but all progresses of mathematics didn't gain from any other field until now.  Therefore, it is commonly undoubted that the great successes of many fields of basic study come from their own creation and innovation.

To sum up, along with the rapid development of science and technology, more and more fields of study have closer correlation than ever before, and some of them gained great success with the fruit or research methods of other subjects. Consequently, the exchange and communication among different fields of study should be encouraged, so that we could make a greater progress.

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issue4 【米国有米】第十一次作业

4. No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."任何领域要取得重大进展，都需要外领域者的知识和经验。

There is a general debate over significant achievements which are made by outsiders who bring their knowledge and experience to one field of study among my schoolmates, when John Nash gained Nobel Prize in field of economics. One of the questions under debate is whether no field of study could advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that that field of study. In my opinion, the answer is not, not all the fields of study must advance in this way.
别致的开头，避免机械重复，但是个人觉得这样的开头如果能够在花费少量时间的情况下写出来，则是可取的。否则得不偿失。因为开头最重要的是让判官明确你的观点。

To begin with, some fields of study do gain great progress with（＋the help of感觉更佳） fruit of other fields of study. When outsiders enter a certain field, they bring not only their own knowledge or experience, but also a distinct view of this field. There is an interesting phenomenon that nearly all the Nobel Prize gainers in fields of economics over the recent years are major in mathematics. For example mentioned above, John Nash, who is a professor in mathematics department in Princeton University, explains economic event with his mathematics theory, contributes greatly to progress of modern economics. It was the exchange of information and research measures that led these professors to a whole new view of one study.

Moreover, along with the rapid development of knowledge and technology, different fields of study often contribute great influence on each other, which now result in a new subject, a cross-discipline, such as biochemistry, physical chemistry. The cross-discipline not only accelerates research of their respective fields, but also make the new subjects begin at a high start point. Let us take biochemistry for example, which focuses on studying the origins of life by using thoughts from both fields of both biology and chemistry, has been taken into the application such as artificial bones. Furthermore, an increasing number of subjects need more and more knowledge and experience from other fields of study. For example, computer science needs other subjects like mathematics and art, to design a better program and a user-friendly appearance. Therefore it is necessary to learn from other fields of study to improve and make a progress in own fields.(似乎这里的内容放到body1去更合适，讲的都是学科间的互相帮助)

However, not all fields of study must obtain great success with the exchange knowledge and experience from other fields. Although it is indispensable that one field of study would benefit from fruits of other fields of study, it is too absolute that any significant progress in any field results from other subjects. For example, computer science and engineering is always benefiting from its cousin, mathematics, but all progresses of mathematics didn't gain from any other field until now. （这个例子个人认为举得不太合适。数学这个学科也是在其他学科的推动下不断发展的：其他学科向数学提出问题，于是新的数学理论应运而生。比如：数学物理方程，博弈论。当然，这里不是在讨论argument。意在说明此例不好）Therefore, it is commonly undoubted that the great successes of many fields of basic study come from their own creation and innovation.

To sum up, along with the rapid development of science and technology, more and more fields of study have closer correlation than ever before, and some of them gained great success with the fruit or research methods of other subjects. Consequently, the exchange and communication among different fields of study should be encouraged, so that we could make a greater progress.
观点清晰，层次分明，语言很简洁，没有大问题。一般不错的issue