issue186 【自由女神小组】第八次作业

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issue186 【自由女神小组】第八次作业
186 "Practicality is now our great idol, which all powers and talents must serve. Anything that is not obviously practical has little value in today's world." [05/21; 06/0]
实用主义是我们现在主要的追求，一切的力量和才智都必须为其服务。任何并非显著实用的东西在当今世界几乎是没有价值的。(当务之急和长远大计的关系)
Position: disagree
1.       应当承认，在这时代，实用主义确实是我们现在的追求。例如：科学的进步使实用主义表现为实用主义。不实用的东西将会被淘汰。//医学的发展，蒸气机的发明。
2.       与此同时，我们不能过分的注重实用主义，应该更加的注重思想的发展。一些非常有价值的研究，其研究时并没有实用价值，我们不能否认它的生要意义。//原子弹，核能。
3.       艺术并不实用，但他是某些人的理想。//贝多芬第九钢琴曲。毕加索这类的人。


题目：ISSUE186 - "Practicality is now our great idol, which all powers and talents must serve. Anything that is not obviously practical has little value in today's world."
字数：481          用时：1:21:39          日期：2007-1-27

Nowadays, practicality plays an important role in the world and makes the current society prosperity. More and more people have formed a conception: practicality is our idol which all of things must serve and the unpractricality thing has little value in our society. However, I can not agree with these people who actually exaggerate the function of practicality.

Admittedly, in the modern times, the practicality is the most important purpose which we pursue. We should use all of our powers and talents to pursue something that can be used to improve the condition of our life. When something thing seems unpracticality from now on, it will be eliminated later. Take the computer for example, the first generation of the computer was so cumbersome and the operation speed was slow. With develop of the technology, the computer become smaller and smaller and the operation speed become faster and faster. As a result, we will never use the first generation of the computer. The stream machine is another good example, before the stream inventing, the main labor force are human or animals, because stream machine can carry much heavy thing and the and the machine do not need to feed, in current society the main labor force is machine.

However, at the same time, we should not overstate practicality too much and should pay more attention on the development of the ideology. For instance, there are some valuable researches when they were under researcher, we did not find it was practicality, but with the development of the technology and the society we find it become practicality today. When the A-bomb invented in the Second World War, it was the most powerful weapon in the world, then the most people just thought it was a weapon and has nopractical, but today, we can take advantage of the atomic energy to generate electric. Therefore we can not judge a thing whether it is practicality now.

Moreover, the art is unpracticality but it is the idol of some people who has influence of whole society for a long time. The Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in his middle-aged. However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history. His music, including 9 symphonies, 5 piano concerts, several senates and so on, forms a transition from classical to romantic compositions. The same thing with a famous artist Picasso, his abstract art connotes an unrealistic interpretation of its original creature. Therefore, we could not make a conclusion that such thing like art has little value.

To sum up, from above analysis, we may come to the conclusion that it is unfortunately true that practicality is now our great idol. However, something that is of no obvious practicality, such as art and religion, might be of more value than practical ones.

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Nowadays, practicality plays an important role in the world and makes the current society prosperity. More and more people have formed a conception: practicality is our idol which all of things must serve and the unpractricality thing has little value in our society. However, I can not agree with these people who actually exaggerate the function of practicality.(点明了作者的主评价)Admittedly, in the modern times, the practicality is the most important purpose which we pursue. We should use all of our powers and talents to pursue something that can be used to improve the condition of our life. When something seems unpracticality from now on,（from now on好象没有起到什么作用） it will be eliminated later. Take computer for example, the first generation of computer was so cumbersome and the operation speed was slow. With develop of the technology, the computer become smaller and smaller and the operation speed become faster and faster. As a result, we will never use the first generation of the computer. The stream machine is another good example, before the stream invented, the main labor force are human or animals, because stream machine can carry much heavy thing and the machine do not need to feed, in current society the main labor force is machine. （current个人觉得应该改为modern,然后这一段好象写得有点简单）However, at the same time, we should not overstate practicality too much and should pay more attention on the development of the ideology.（将more改为enough应该会好点） For a instance, there are some valuable researches when they were under researcher,( under researcher什么意思？) we did not find it was practicality, but with the development of the technology and the society we find it become practicality today.(时态不是很清晰) When the A-bomb invented in the Second World War, it was the most powerful weapon in the world, then the most people just thought it was a weapon and has nopractical, but today, we can take advantage of the atomic energy to generate electric. Therefore we can not judge a thing whether it is practicality now.Moreover, the art is unpracticality but it is the idol of some people who has influence of whole society for a long time. The Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in his middle-aged. However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history. His music, including 9 symphonies, 5 piano concerts, several senates and so on, forms a transition from classical to romantic compositions. The same thing with a famous artist Picasso, his abstract art connotes an unrealistic interpretation of its original creature. Therefore, we could not make a conclusion that such thing like art has little value.（现在讲的是today’s world，Beethoven and Picasso在这的用处到底有多大？）To sum up, from above analysis, we may come to the conclusion that it is unfortunately true that practicality is now our great idol. However, something that is of no obvious practicality, such as art and religion, might be of more value than practical ones.


总的来说文章写得不是太清晰，有些含糊，没有把作者的思想表现清楚，可以看到作者对ISSUE已经有一定了解，套路已经清楚，现在就是要加紧熟练

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