issue69 南智二组第２０次作业 拍拍～～

merryjeanUID: 2243650

69"Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"

政府应该对科学研究和发展给予尽可能少的限制

1古往今来,科学研究通常在自由,宽松的环境中获得良好的发展.过多的限制,会禁锢人们的思想不利于社会的发展
2但是,科学是一把双刃剑,他在使我们生活更加舒适的同时,也带了很多问题.所以政府应该对其有所限制
3因此,政府既不应该给予科学研究太多的限制,也不应该任其自由发展而不闻不问,政府应该根据研究的不同性质给予不同程度的限制.

As it is known to all, thanks to the free and loose circumstance, the contemporary technology has increased dramatically. However, when we enjoy the convenience that the technology has brought, it also brings with some serious disasters. Therefore, the government should apply some restrictions on scientific research rather than let it grow blindly.

Admittedly, the prosperity of science is established in the circumstance which is full of freedom since in that situation, people’s creativity will be provoked to a great extent. At the same time, if too much limits on scientific research are placed by the government, it will confine people’s minds and only leads to stagnation of the society as a whole. Before 17th century, the Roman Catholic Church has controlled the academia strictly and all scientific research was served for its domination. At that age, geocentricism was widespread recognized and the Roman Catholic Church spurned and attacked all other theories. Therefore, the astronomy acted as the church’s instrument. The scientists’ mind was limited rigidly and resulted in the astronomy lagged behind eventually. Trough a long time’s endeavor the used heretical beliefs—heliocentricism became truth. With the coming of Renaissance, all realms of science attain the academic recovery on the base of loose and comfortable situation.

Nevertheless, some appropriate restrictions are necessary to be imposed by the government to maintain a steady society. Since the scientific research and development is a double-edged sword for the whole society. When we are excited about the changes it taken we should pay an excessive attention with the occurrence of simultaneous disasters. Without effective supervision, the society will be bogged in chaos. Take clone for instance. Nowadays, Biomedical Science is suffering a significant development and the clone becomes a controversial issue among the individuals, the government and the society. It is no doubt that we will benefit from its research, but the resulting consequences are unknown. The moral and ethic problems it initiates maybe will disturb the existing conceptions. Is the process of clone safe? Is it moral of killing the human embryos? How to deal with the deformed clones? When we face these problems we need guides and then the government should place some restrictions to confine scientific research and induce a direction it.

As a result, the government should neither allow unstrained freedom of scientific research nor impose too strict constraints on it. The government is better to formulate different constraints on different kinds of scientific research. On one hand, in the sphere of learning, especially the realms of math, chemistry and physics, the government should place restrictions as fewer as possible and even provide strong economic support for them. Those basic course need government’s sustainment rather than restriction attributes to their prosperity is the original impulse of the society. On the other hand, to some scientific research related to the ethic and morality, the government should place comprehensive restrictions. Any negligence will introduce big social problems.

In sum, to keep the society’s prosperity and satiability, the government should impose proper and special constraints on various scientific research.

supper_xuUID: 2227277

As it is known to all, thanks to the free and loose circumstance【of scientific research】, the contemporary technology has increased【advanced】 dramatically. However, when we enjoy the convenience that the technology has brought, it also brings with some serious disasters. Therefore, the government should apply some restrictions on scientific research rather than let it grow blindly.

Admittedly, the prosperity of science is established in the circumstance which is full of freedom since in that situation, people’s creativity will be provoked to a great extent. At the same time, if too much limits on scientific research are placed by the government, it will confine people’s minds and only leads to stagnation of the society as a whole. Before 17th century, the Roman Catholic Church has controlled the academia strictly and all scientific research was served for its domination. At that age, geocentricism was widespread recognized and the Roman Catholic Church spurned and attacked all other theories.【好例子】 Therefore, the astronomy acted as the church’s instrument. The scientists’ mind was limited rigidly and resulted in the astronomy lagged behind eventually. Trough a long time’s endeavor the used heretical beliefs—heliocentricism became truth. With the coming of Renaissance, all realms of science attain the academic recovery on the base of loose and comfortable situation.

Nevertheless, some appropriate restrictions are necessary to be imposed by the government to maintain a steady society. Since the scientific research and development is a double-edged sword for the whole society. When we are excited about the changes it taken we should pay an excessive attention with the occurrence of simultaneous disasters. Without effective supervision, the society will be bogged in chaos. Take the research of clone for instance.【不错的例子】 Nowadays, Biomedical Science is suffering a significant development and the clone becomes a controversial issue among the individuals, the government and the society. It is no doubt that we will benefit from its research, but the resulting consequences are unknown. The moral and ethic problems it initiates maybe will disturb the existing conceptions. Is the process of clone safe? Is it moral of killing the human embryos? How to deal with the deformed clones? When we face these problems we need guides and then the government should place some restrictions to confine scientific research and induce a direction it.

As a result, the government should neither allow unstrained freedom of scientific research nor impose too strict constraints on it. The government is better to formulate different constraints on different kinds of scientific research. On one hand, in the sphere of learning, especially the realms of math, chemistry and physics, the government should place restrictions as fewer as possible and even provide strong economic support for them. Those basic course need government’s sustainment rather than restriction attributes to their prosperity is the original impulse of the society. On the other hand, to some scientific research related to the ethic and morality, the government should place comprehensive restrictions. Any negligence will introduce big social problems.【感觉这段像结尾】

In sum, to keep the society’s prosperity and satiability, the government should impose proper and special constraints【constraint是名词，constrainters,restrictions】 on various scientific research.

语言很不错，条理也很清楚。还有值得我学习的就是这些例子，经常被别人批没什么例证呵呵。merry能否传授点经验啊？^_^
感觉结构方面安排的不是很好。你的观点：the government should apply some restrictions on scientific research rather than let it grow blindly.
我觉得合适的结构：B1，不限制或者尽量少限制对科学发展有利 B2B3，用however转折，论述适当限制的必要性
如果光看你的BODY部分很难得出你的观点，因为你把支持和不支持的内容几乎平均分配了。你可以把观点改一下，说是否限制要找到一个平衡点，这样可能会好些。纯个人观点，不知道你怎么认为？
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[ 本帖最后由 supper_xu 于 2007-2-4 17:25 编辑 ]

zhf8608UID: 2247117

As it is known to all, thanks to the free and loose circumstance, the contemporary technology (not standard expression)   has increased dramatically. However, when we enjoy the convenience that the technology has brought, it also brings with some serious disasters. Therefore, the government should apply some restrictions on scientific research rather than let it grow blindly (let it develop without control).

Admittedly, the prosperity of science is established in the circumstance which is full of freedom since in that situation, people’s creativity will be provoked to a great extent. At the same time, if too much limits on scientific research are placed by the government, it will confine people’s minds and only leads to stagnation(good expression) of the society as a whole. Before 17th century, the Roman Catholic Church has controlled the academia strictly and all scientific research was served for its domination. At that age, geocentricism was widespread recognized and the Roman Catholic Church spurned and attacked all other theories. Therefore, the astronomy acted as the church’s instrument. The scientists’ mind was limited rigidly and resulted in the astronomy lagged behind eventually. Trough a long time’s endeavor the used heretical beliefs—heliocentricism became truth. With the coming of Renaissance, all realms of science attain the academic recovery on the base of loose and comfortable situation.(这段写的很好.还是有些表达要注意.)

Nevertheless, some appropriate restrictions are necessary to be imposed by the government to maintain a steady society. Since the scientific research and development is a double-edged sword for the whole society. When we are excited about the changes it taken we should pay an excessive attention with the occurrence of simultaneous disasters. Without effective supervision, the society will be bogged in chaos. Take clone for instance. Nowadays, Biomedical Science is suffering a significant development and the clone becomes a controversial issue among the individuals, the government and the society. It is no doubt that(不太书面化)l benefit from its research, but the resulting consequences are unknown. The moral and ethic problems it initiates maybe will disturb the existing conceptions. Is the process of clone safe? Is it moral of killing the human embryos? How to deal with the deformed clones?(不错,句式多变)se problems we need guides and then the government should place some restrictions to confine scientific research and induce a direction it.

As a result, the government should neither allow unstrained freedom of scientific research nor impose too strict constraints on it. The government is better to formulate different constraints on different kinds of scientific research.(语言应锤炼) On one hand, in the sphere of learning, especially the realms of math, chemistry and physics, the government should place restrictions as fewer as possible and even provide strong economic support for them. Those basic course need government’s sustainment rather than restriction attributes to their prosperity is the original impulse of the society. On the other hand, to some scientific research related to the ethic and morality, the government should place comprehensive restrictions. Any negligence will introduce big social problems.(欠妥)

In sum, to keep the society’s prosperity and satiability, the government should impose proper and special constraints on various scientific research.

总体上很不错.