Issue56 【Chasing For "6" Score】第二次作业,让板儿砖来的更猛烈些吧~

桃太郎UID: 2275108

56"Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."

syllabus:
position government should pay more attention on solving the immediate problems
1 the problems of today are immediate to solve
2 but the government should not pay more attention on solving today`s problems which are not immediate.
3 the problems of future are anticipated,and solving the immediate problems do help to analyze the problems of future which are anticipated.
4In fact ,some anticipated problems could not be ignored.







As a ineluctable byproduct of the rocketing science and technology of modern society various  problems nowadays exist in out society such as population explosion , environment preserving and crisis of energy. Weighing these problems ,some people suggest that government attach more attention to solving the urgent issues of today than trying to solve the latent problems of the future. Generally maintaining this statement, I still have some moderation for this suggestion.

Above all, the problems of today which are immediate should draw the focus of the government. The phenomenon can be traceable to that the immediate problems of today which  play a crucial part in the stabilization of our society are seriously pressing and hardly ignored .The government are disseminating planned parenthood comprehensive as a reflection of the problems of population explosion and the crises of the energy. If these urgent issues of today are neglected , the society will become a chaos with the soaring number of human beings and the declining source which can be used as energy by humankinds.

However, the government should not pay more attention on solving today’s problems which are not in emergency. Confronting a large number of problems of today, the government is about to make his advisable choice. The problems which are not severe to our society should be solved sharply and not waste the precious time of our government. For instance, the problems of the increasing number of car accident which are related to the high speed can be solved easily by limiting the speed on the road where the car accident took place at a high frequent.

Moreover, the anticipated problems of future are latent and potential which only can be foreseen but not exist exactly. Therefore the government should attach more attention to the problems which exist actually and less attention to the problems which are hypothesized. Also solving the immediate problems of today can really do help to avert the underlying problems of the future. Making a environment protecting plan for environment problems of today can avoid the sand storm  and the greenhouse effect which cause the death of a great deal of halo bios in the future.

In fact ,some anticipated problems could not be ignored. Everything on our earth is not separated which is at least to some extent linked to others. A responsible government should always consider a vista of society and the development in the future. Consequently paying attention to underlying problems in the future is also beneficial in some contents.

To sum up, government should putting the mainly energy on problems in most needed, while keep a concern on the other ones. Neither could be disregarded obviously , since solving every problem perfect our society.

[ 本帖最后由 桃太郎 于 2007-2-5 23:34 编辑 ]

chongxinlaiUID: 2235209

As a ineluctable byproduct of the rocketing science and technology of modern society， various  problems nowadays exist in out society such as population explosion , environment preserving？pollution and crisis of energy. Weighing these problems ,some people suggest that government attach more attention to solving the urgent issues of today than trying to solve the latent problems of the future. Generally maintaining this statement, I still have some moderation for this suggestion.reserved agree？可是have some moderation for这种用法好么？总觉得adv+v比较好

Above all, the problems of today which are immediate should draw the focus of the government. The phenomenon can be traceable to that the immediate problems of today which  play a crucial part in the stabilization of our society are seriously pressing and hardly ignored 前两句完全可以和起来嘛immediate problems playing a crucial part。。。。。。should draw focus。。。。.前面限定一下consider， certain poverty countries having overdue population，毕竟很多西方国家人口是负增长。The government are disseminating propagandize？planned parenthood comprehensive as a reflection？有问题，是对解决xx问题的对策的一种反映吧 of the problems of population explosion and the crises of the energy. If these urgent issues of today are neglected , the society will become a chaos with the soaring好像是个褒义词，应该找个中性或贬义的来 number of human beings and the declining source resourcewhich can be used as energy by humankinds.

However, the government should not pay more attention on solving today’s problems which are not in emergencycompare with future problem or immediate crisis ？more和谁比啊？. Confronting a large number of problems of today, the government is about to make his advisable choicewhy?原因在后面的话，价格because、since之类的引导好了. The problems which are not severe to our society should be solved sharply and not waste the precious time of our government. For instance, the problems of the increasing number of car accident which are related to the high speed can be solved easily by limiting the speed on the road where the car accident took place at a high frequent.看ts想说不解决某些问题，而论述则是小问题要快解决不要浪费时间，到底是？

Moreover, the anticipated problems of future are latent and potential which only can be foreseen but not exist exactlyin future. Therefore the government should attach more attention to the problems which exist actually and less attention to  用rather than tothe problems which are hypothesized. Also solving the immediate problems of today can really do help to avert the underlying problems of the future. Making a environment protecting plan for environment problems of today can avoid the sand storm  and the greenhouse effect which cause the death of a great deal of halo bios in the future.

In fact ,some anticipated problems could not be ignored. Everything on our earth is not separated which is at least to some extent linked to others. 这句罗嗦了些，Not everything is irrelative in the earth A responsible government should always consider a vista of society and the development in the future.and 前后意思一样吧 Consequently paying attention to underlying problems in the future is also beneficial in some contents.还是觉得有问题，题目也没否定anticipated problem不该解决，只是要体现出即使解决也不如immediate problem重要吧

To sum up, government should putting the mainly main？energy on problems in most needed, while keep a concern on the other ones. Neither could be disregarded obviously , since solving every problem perfect sour society.
整体上蛮流畅的，虽然与偶观点不是很相同，但可以把自己的意思表达清楚了。LZ加油！！！

susan8940UID: 160449

1 the problems of today are immediate to solve
2 but the government should not pay more attention on solving today`s problems which are not immediate.
3 the problems of future are anticipated,and solving the immediate problems do help to analyze the problems of future which are anticipated.
4In fact ,some anticipated problems could not be ignored.


观点是赞成。
从提纲来看，第一段和第二段表达了一个意思：现今的问题有紧急和非紧急之分，应该侧重解决紧急的今天的问题。
但是，题目说到的是：focus more on solving immediate problems of today,所以貌似一二段的区分没太大必要。。。你认为呢？讨论下吧：）
请帮我看看，给些意见哈
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