issue 31 <米国有米寒假作业 2.6>

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ssue 31 “Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial.”


提纲：1 科学研究对社会发展是有利的，/解决社会难题，为人们的生活带来便利
      2 某些科学研究存在争议也是合情合理的，并不能因为这些研究的不确定性和争议性而不投资于这些科学研究
      3 但是 政府在投资某些有争议的科学研究时，确实也应该慎重。
  1 Admittedly, research benefit to the development of society.
  2 Some research is beyond times, it is hard to determine its value when it is proposed. In fact,
  3 However, when it comes to some controversial research, government should be superintended.

Whether investment in research is always good investment even though the results of the research are controversial as the speaker asserts? In my view, I agree with the speaker insofar in research poses positive effects to the society and controversy and uncertain are the nature of research. Nevertheless, some certain research poses certain risks that the government must be careful to invest in it.

First of all, research plays an important role in the development of society. Research impels the society advance. For one thing, research makes our life more convenient. Take the internet for example, the widely application of internet makes it possible to communicate with others in any place, buy anything at home, work at home but not need to go to office. For another thing, research also can solve some social problems such as environmental problems, energy source problems. The achievements in environmental research provide a good way to deal with waste, such as recycling technology which can extract or reuse useful materials from garbage thereby decreasing waste’ harm to environment. Similarly, research in exploring energy source makes it become true that humankinds are apart from danger of lacking energy in the future. In short, research greatly benefits our life and the whole society. In term of this point, I believe that investment in research is indispensable and worthwhile.

In addition, it is ineluctable that some valuable research may be controversial when it is proposed. This point is determined by the nature of research which is a process of exploring unknown for true and lasting solution for problems. At the same time, the value of some research become practical application needs a long time. For instance, When Einstein proposed "special theories of relativity revolutionized", it seemed that few people be aware it would formed a theoretical base for the exploitation of atomic energy. When Luogeng Hua, a famous mathematician in China, began to research the principle of "1+1", perhaps few people can understood this action not mention to considered its future great contribution to the promotion of economy. Therefore, given the characteristic of research, even if some research is controversial, government also should support and invest in.

However, for some search which would necessary brings adversely influence to society, government should superintend even limit these rather than invest in them. Take Cloning for example, it is sure that widely application of cloning technology would disturb the orders of society. After all, it is hard to imagine that what the society would be when one person can be made by a scientist in his/her laboratory. Besides, some chemical or biological research also may threaten the security of society such as the chemical research Japan conducted during the World War II。Therefore, I think the government should be cautious to invest these research..

In sum, for what has been discussed, we can safely make a conclusion that research should be emphasized even though some are controversial when they are proposed, at the same time, government should limit or control some research which may bring harmful influence to society.

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Whether investment in research is always good investment(去掉investment更简洁） even though the results of the research are controversial as the speaker asserts? In my view, I agree with the speaker insofar in research poses positive effects to the society and(and 改成although或as far as可能使句子更清晰） controversy and uncertainty are the nature of research. Nevertheless, some certain research poses certain risks that the government must be careful to invest in it.（折中观点，个人感觉突出重点还是好一点）

First of all, research plays an important role in the development of society. Research impels the society to advance. For one thing, research makes our life more convenient. Take the internet for example, the widelywide application of internet makes it possible to communicate with others in any place, buy anything at home, work at home but not need to go to office. For another thing, research also can solve some social problems such as environmental problems, energy source problems. The achievements in environmental research provide a good way(good way可以用更高级的词如compelling approach替换等） to deal with waste, such as recycling technology which can extract or reuse useful materials from garbage thereby decreasingdecrease waste’(非人名非时间不能用所有格） harm to environment. Similarly, research in exploring energy sources makes it become(become可去掉） true(possible好一点，毕竟还没实现） that humankinds are(would) apart from danger of lacking energy in the future. In short, research greatly benefits our life(lives) and the whole society. In term of this point, I believe that investment in research is indispensable and worthwhile.（格式很规整，例子也很恰当，只是例子略感平常）

In addition, it is ineluctable that some valuable research may be controversial when it is proposed(or in the process of the development). This point is determined by the nature of research which is a process of exploring unknown for true and lasting solution for problems. At the same time, the value of some research become practical application needs a long time(这段话主语不太好，且value变成practical application说不通吧？）. For instance, When Einstein proposed "special theories of relativity revolutionized", it seemed that few people be aware it would formed（form) a theoretical base for the exploitation of atomic energy. When Luogeng Hua, a famous mathematician in China, began to research the principle of "1+1", perhaps few people can understood this action not mention to considered its future great contribution to the promotion of economy（最好不要举中国的例子，监考人可能反华）. Therefore, given the characteristic of research, even if some research is controversial, government also should support and invest in it.（论证controversial是整文的重点，还是该丰富点好）

However, for some search which would necessary brings（bring) adversely influence to society, government should superintend even limit these rather than invest in them. Take Cloning for example, it is sure that widely application of cloning technology would disturb the orders of society. After all, it is hard to imagine that what the society would be when one person can be made by a scientist in his/her laboratory. Besides, some chemical or biological research also may threaten the security of society such as the chemical research Japan conducted during the World War II。Therefore, I think the government should be cautious to invest these research..(论述反面例子时，可以先说其优点，再说更大的缺点，这样不仅可以更使读者信服，还可以增加字数）

In sum, for what has been discussed, we can safely make a conclusion that investment in research should be emphasized even though some are controversial when they are proposed, at the same time, government should limit or control some research which may bring harmful influence to society.

哈哈，第一次改你的文章，学到了很多句式和单词的用法，比如说我从没用过pose，ineluctable什么的。感觉你在例子的选择方面要斟酌一下。我有个新东方老师建议我们不要用中国的例子，改卷子的人可能不喜欢中国，而且改卷人是美国人，要举他们熟悉的例子。

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提纲：
1 科学研究对社会发展是有利的，/解决社会难题，为人们的生活带来便利
2 某些科学研究存在争议也是合情合理的，并不能因为这些研究的不确定性和争议性而不投资于这些科学研究
3 但是 政府在投资某些有争议的科学研究时，确实也应该慎重。
  1 Admittedly, research benefit to the development of society.
  2 Some research is beyond times, it is hard to determine its valuewhen it is proposed. In fact,
  3 However, when it comes to some controversial research, governmentshould be superintended.

Whether investment in research is always goodinvestment even though the results of the research are controversial as thespeaker asserts? [怎么是问句呢]In my view, I agree with the speaker insofar in research posespositive effects to the society[用逗号断开]and controversy and uncertain are the nature ofresearch.[你上面提出的并不是作者说的，又何来同意呢？] Nevertheless, some certain research poses certain risks that thegovernment must be careful to invest in it. [个人认为你在这里没有清晰地陈述你的观点]

First of all, research plays an important role in the development of society.Research impels the society advance. For one thing, research makes our lifemore convenient. Take the internet for example, the widely application ofinternet makes it possible to communicate with others in any place, buyanything at home, work at home but not need to go to office. For another thing,research also can solve some social problems such as environmental problems,energy source problems. The achievements in environmental research provide agood way to deal with waste, such as recycling technology which can extract orreuse useful materials from garbage[分号断句] thereby [缺少主语]decreasing waste’ [这里的所有格是打字错误吗？] harm to environment.Similarly, research in exploring energy source makes it become true thathumankinds are apart from danger of lacking energy in the future. In short,research greatly benefits our life and the whole society. In term of thispoint, I believe that investment in research is indispensable and worthwhile.
[本段论证很充实，很好，不过和主题联系不大]

In addition, it is ineluctable that some valuable research may be controversialwhen it is proposed. This point is determined by the nature of research whichis a process of exploring unknown for true and lasting solution[复数] for problems. At thesame time, the value of some research[复数] become practicalapplication needs a long time. For instance, When Einstein proposed"special theories of relativity revolutionized", it seemed that fewpeople be aware it would formed a theoreticalbase for the exploitation of atomic energy. When Luogeng Hua, a famousmathematician in China, began to research the principle of "1+1"[我不知道你是不是学数学的，反正这个1+1的理论还是没有找到], [这里应该句号断句]perhaps few people can understood this action not mention to considered [原形]its future great contribution to the promotion of economy.Therefore, given the characteristic of research, even if some research[复数] is controversial, government also should support and invest in. [我觉得你最好还是多说些关于研究经费，不要光放在争议的研究上]
我搜了下资料但没找到1+1理论：华罗庚是中国现代数学家。华罗庚是在国际上享有盛誉的数学家，他的名字在美国施密斯松尼博物馆与芝加哥科技博物馆等著名博物馆中，与少数经典数学家列在一起。他被选为美国科学院国外院士，第三世界科学院院士，联邦德国巴伐利亚科学院院士。又被授予法国南锡大学、香港中文大学与美国伊利诺伊大学荣誉博士。华罗庚在解析数论、矩阵几何学、典型群、自守函数论、多复变函数论、偏微分方程、高维数值积分等广泛数学领域中都作出卓越贡献。他共发表专著与学术论文近三百篇。
倒是发现陈景润揭开“哥德巴赫猜想1+1

However, for some search [复数]which would necessary bringsadversely influence to society, government should superintend even limit theserather than invest in them. Take Cloning for example, it is sure that widelyapplication of cloning technology would disturb the orders of society. Afterall, it is hard to imagine that what the society would[will]be when one person can be made by ascientist in his/her laboratory. Besides, some chemical or biological researchalso may threaten the security of society such as the chemicalresearch Japan conducted during the World War II[能不能把这个事件说完，我还不知道这个怎么有害呢]。Therefore, I think the government should be cautious to invest theseresearch.. [论证很规范。但还有可以充实的地方]

In sum, for what has been discussed, we can safely make a conclusion thatresearch should be emphasized even though some are controversial when they areproposed, at the same time, government should limit or control some research[复数] which may bring harmful influence to society.
总评：文章写的还可以，例子不要乱引用，句子注意断句以免信息杂糅，还有语法问题等；HOHO~~` ^__^