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TOPIC: ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."

有保留的反对：法律没有公平、不公平之分，人们应该遵守法律。不健全distempered的法律可以amended

1、  区分just and unjust 每人观点不同

牟利的商人、不想上学的孩子

2、  人们有义务遵守法律

工厂生产时保护环境

3、  不遵守法律可能带来的后果

4、  法律不合理可以改进

13th amendment to free the slaves

15th amendment to ensure the blacks have right to vote

The speaker asserts that the laws can be divided in to two groups, and every citizen has a responsibility to obey just laws and more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust ones. However, although I concede that it is necessary for every individual to abide by law, I disagree with the speaker almost fundamentally in that responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey unjust laws.

To begin with, in order to get a clear view of the so-called two types of laws claimed by the speaker, one must come to question the function of laws. Made to protect the broad right of the public, to enable a particular groups such as people who are mentally- and physically challenged to enjoy reasonable rights, to ensure the well-being of our society, our law really functions as a fundamental rule for each and every individual in our society to follow in order to ensure the well-being and prosperous of the whole country. To quest whether a certain law is just or unjust, the answer to this question might vary form people to people. For instance, manufacturers and factory owners who are pursuing the maximum income at the lowest cost may view it is reasonable to increase profit at the expense of our environment. Or a child who dislikes school or being educated may find it unfair for everyone to receive education under the law requires compulsory school attendance. It is therefore, the justness of law could not be recognized properly by a certain individual.

Additionally, I find it necessary for every individual to abide by laws, as without laws, we has only our moral which can easily give way to emotions and feelings such as hate and jealousy, to adjust our behaviors, therefore our society may undergo chaos as a result. Consider if a manufacturer find it is unprofitable to implement certain protecting measures to protect our environment under certain laws concerning about protecting environment, then the owner may take every possible steps to increase profits regardless of the impact on our environment which is already so delicate to the extent that human being's survival is threatened. Or consider the compulsory school attendance which has already became law in most civilized countries, if most parents find it better off for their children who are our society's future dominators to work at an early age instead of getting enrolled in school, our society may have to stand broad unemployment, increasing crimes, decreased moral standard, and so forth. In short, every individual should obey laws in order to ensure the well-being of the society as a whole.

Unlike moral which can be affirmed and discredited, however, unreasonable laws at a certain stage can be amended so that they meet the requirement of legal demands and make a society a better and respectful one. For example, in order to fulfill the American dream that all men are born equal, the 13 amendment was made to free the slaves, while 15th amendment to ensure black people's right for vote. Moreover, as more and more women get involved in work field and have broadened their horizon in knowledge, the demand for women to vote was increasing so that the 19th amendment was made to meet this demand. Laws are not born to be just; it is people's reasonable demands that make laws healthy, proper and well-rounded.

To sum up, the speaker overlooks the purpose and function of laws. While I concede that some laws may appear to be unjust for certain group of people, I do believe it is everyone's obedience to law and the ability to query the reasonableness of law that make our society a better one and make the world a better place for us to live.

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[ 本帖最后由 kexinyupiao 于 2007-2-12 18:55 编辑 ]

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您好!能不能提供个提纲给大家 让大家好改,谢谢啦!

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我的一些拙见：
The speaker asserts that the laws can be divided in to two groups, and every citizen has a responsibility to obey just laws and more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust ones. However, although I concede that it is necessary for every individual to abide by law, I disagree with the speaker almost fundamentally in that responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey unjust laws （concede it is necessary for every individual to abide by law和disagree in that responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey unjust laws 不是一个意思吗？）.

To begin with, in order to get a clear view of the so-called two types of laws claimed by the speaker, one must come to question the function of laws. Made to protect the broad right of the public, to enable a particular groups such as people who are mentally- and physically challenged to enjoy reasonable rights, to ensure the well-being of our society, our law really functions as a fundamental rule for each and every individual in our society to follow in order to ensure the well-being and prosperous of the whole country. （对法律功能的解释仿佛和后面的分析“不同的人对just和unjust有不同看法”没有关系）To quest whether a certain law is just or unjust, the answer to this question might vary form people to people. For instance, manufacturers and factory owners who are pursuing the maximum income at the lowest cost may view it is reasonable to increase profit at the expense of our environment （最好像后一个例子一样和某一条law联系起来）. Or a child who dislikes school or being educated may find it unfair for everyone to receive education under the law requires compulsory school attendance. It is therefore, the justness of law could not be recognized properly by a certain individual.

Additionally, I find it necessary for every individual to abide by laws, as without laws, we has only our moral which can easily give way to emotions and feelings such as hate and jealousy, to adjust our behaviors, therefore our society may undergo chaos as a result. Consider if a manufacturer find it is unprofitable to implement certain protecting measures to protect our environment under certain laws concerning about protecting environment, then the owner may take every possible steps to increase profits regardless of the impact on our environment which is already so delicate to the extent that human being's survival is threatened. Or consider the compulsory school attendance which has already became law in most civilized countries, if most parents find it better off for their children who are our society's future dominators to work at an early age instead of getting enrolled in school,  （不读书，早工作就会导致后面的unemployment, crimes吗？分析一下）our society may have to stand broad unemployment, increasing crimes, decreased moral standard, and so forth. In short, every individual should obey laws in order to ensure the well-being of the society as a whole. （建议把第二段开头对法律功能的分析放在这一段I find it necessary for every individual to abide by laws后面，写成“每个人都遵守法律是必要的，因为法律可以。。,没有法律会。。”，然后举例）

Unlike moral which can be affirmed and discredited, however, unreasonable laws at a certain stage  （when? 这句写的太笼统了。可以考虑比如“at a stage when they’re thought unacceptable by most people”）can be amended so that they meet the requirement of legal demands and make a society a better and respectful one. For example, in order to fulfill the American dream that all men are born equal, the 13 amendment was made to free the slaves, while 15th amendment to ensure black people's right for vote. Moreover, as more and more women get involved in work field and have broadened their horizon in knowledge, the demand for women to vote was increasing so that the 19th amendment was made to meet this demand. Laws are not born to be just; it is people's reasonable demands that make laws healthy, proper and well-rounded.

To sum up, the speaker overlooks the purpose and function of laws. (overlook ?speaker有这样吗？) While I concede that some laws may appear to be unjust for certain group of people, I do believe it is everyone's obedience to law and the ability to query the reasonableness of law that make our society a better one and make the world a better place for us to live.

总体上，文章不错，逻辑清楚，语言流畅，例子丰富。

我的issue17，欢迎来拍啊，呵呵
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TOPIC: ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
有保留的反对：法律没有公平、不公平之分，人们应该遵守法律。不健全distempered的法律可以amended

1、  区分just and unjust 每人观点不同

牟利的商人、不想上学的孩子

2、  人们有义务遵守法律

工厂生产时保护环境

3、  不遵守法律可能带来的后果

4、  法律不合理可以改进

13th amendment to free the slaves

15th amendment to ensure the blacks have right to vote


The speaker asserts that the laws can be divided in to two groups, and every citizen has a responsibility to obey just laws and more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust ones. However, although I concede that it is necessary for every individual to abide by law, I disagree with the speaker almost fundamentally in that后面应该是个句子 responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey unjust laws.

To begin with, in order to get a clear view of the so-called two types of laws claimed by the speaker, one must come to question the function of laws. Made to protect the broad right of the public, to enable a particular groups such as people who are mentally- and physically challenged to enjoy reasonable rights, to ensure the well-being of our society, our law really functions as a fundamental又是这个词 rule for each and every有点重复 individual in our society to follow in order to ensure the well-being and prosperous of the whole country. 句子有点长，读的比较辛苦，但是表达还是不错To quest whether a certain law is just or unjust, the answer to this questionanswers搞定 might vary form people to people. For instance, manufacturers and factory owners who are pursuing the maximum income at the lowest cost may view it is reasonable to increase profit at the expense of our environment. Or a child who dislikes school or being educated may find it unfair for everyone to receive education under the law that requires compulsory school attendance. It is therefore,这么说有点别扭 the justness of law could not be recognized properly by a certain individual. 这一段还是不错的

Additionally, I find it necessary for every individual to abide by laws, as without laws, we has only our moral which can easily give way to emotions and feelings such as hate and jealousy, to adjust our behaviors, therefore our society may undergo chaos as a result. 这句的结构还是比较复杂的，建议不要从句套从句，但是表达还是很好Consider if a manufacturer find it is unprofitable to implement certain protecting measures to protect our environment under certain laws concerning about protecting environment这句有点罗嗦了, then the owner may take every possible steps to increase profits regardless of the impact on our environment which is already so delicate to the extent that human being's survival is threatened. 句子仍旧相当的复杂，其实长短句结合会更加有力Or consider the compulsory school attendance which has already became law in most civilized countries, if most parents find it better off for their children who are our society's future dominators to work at an early age instead of getting enrolled in school, our society may have to stand broad unemployment, increasing crimes, decreased moral standard, and so forth. In short, every individual should obey laws in order to ensure the well-being of the society as a whole.这一段有些动词用的很好，但是句子比较繁了

Unlike moral which can be affirmed and discredited, however, unreasonable laws at a certain stage can be amended so that they meet the requirement of legal demands and make a society a better and respectful one. For example, in order to fulfill the American dream that all men are born equal, the 13 amendment was made to free the slaves, while 15th amendment to ensure black people's right for vote. Moreover, as more and more women get involved in work field and have broadened their horizon in knowledge, the demand for women to vote was increasing so that the 19th amendment was made to meet this demand. Laws are not born to be just; it is people's reasonable demands that make laws healthy, proper and well-rounded.这一段不错

To sum up, the speaker overlooks the purpose and function of laws. While I concede that some laws may appear to be unjust for certain group of people, I do believe it is everyone's obedience to law and the ability to query the reasonableness of law that make our society a better one and make the world a better place for us to live.
总体来说还是不错的，觉得一些动词用的很好，值得学习，结构也很清晰，就是有的句子复杂罗嗦了一些，呵呵，还是不错~加油~