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第2周---周1(2.19)---第三次作业

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【题目】

Issue48

"The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."

【参考链接】
0510G同主题写作第五期---------------Issue48

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【题目】

Argument17

The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove town newspaper.
"Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal （which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove for the past ten years） to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still $2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover, EZ—which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks—has ordered additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied' with EZ's performance."

【参考链接】
0606G同主题写作第十七期——Argument17


【注意】
完成作文后请先自行修改，排除基本拼写语法错误（可以使用Word），提交自己比较满意的结果。这样有助于提高修改效率，同时也是对别人的一种尊重。
Keep fighting!

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yuwei327UID：2256655

我也想加入行吗？
考试时间：3.27
地点：哈尔滨

大家一起加油 ！

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summer.1101UID：2275276

我能加入你们的小组吗？ 我是3月28考试，非常渴望加入你们的互改小组，我现在大三，六级已过，准备作文近一个月了，希望和你们一起共同进步！！！

childbenbenUID：2296395

我可以加入你们小组吗？
我是3.30考试，地点是济南。非常希望加入你们小组。大家一起加油！

CRUSADE小组UID：2304114

----------------------------------------------------------------注意~！----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
(于2月20日晚)
过节期间大家似乎都热衷于搞腐败活动^^
所以鉴于许多人包括我在内均保持了有作业未交的状态，本周将只留两次作业（已留完）
另外，本周作业的改错顺序是倒着的。即2改1，3改2，4改3，5改4.。。
大家只需在下周前交上便可！并希望大家能把落下的作业补上~！
ps.本次决定仅有三人同意，因为剩下的人，都不见了。>"<如果各位谁有反对意见请尽早提出
---------------------------------------------------------------注意毕~！---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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第2周---周3(2.21)---第四次作业

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【题目】

Issue41

Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.

【参考链接】
0506G同主题写作第十一期---------------Issue41

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Argument51

“Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician, were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment.”

【参考链接】
0606G同主题写作第十期--------------Argument51


【注意】
完成作文后请先自行修改，排除基本拼写语法错误（可以使用Word），提交自己比较满意的结果。这样有助于提高修改效率，同时也是对别人的一种尊重。
Keep fighting!

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冰山在融化UID：2281720

同意.
前几天我还生病跑医院的...这周补上欠下的作业.下周跟上进度!

rose_07UID：2276843

bless~~~~~
早日康复噢！！！
身体是杀G的本钱哪^&^

CRUSADE小组UID：2304114

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第3周---周1(2.26)---第五次作业
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【题目】
Issue185
Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other areas-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

【参考链接】
0706G同主题写作第四期--------------Issue185

aggie_agatha提供的关于政治的另外的文章，放在一起，供参考
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-615007-1-1.html

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【题目】
Argument142
The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease.
翻译：上一期的《健康饮食》杂志上刊登的题为《食铁》的文章报导说最近一项研究发现饮食中铁的含量过高与心脏病发病率增加有关联。而且，我们已经知道饮食中大量的牛羊肉和心脏病是有联系的，牛羊肉中铁的含量很高。基于以上研究和牛羊肉与心脏病之间的已知联系，我们可以得出结论，高铁含量与心脏病之间的关联最有可能是牛羊肉与心脏病之间关联的作用。

【参考链接】
0706G同主题写作第六期--------------Argument142

【注意】
完成作文后请先自行修改，排除基本拼写语法错误（可以使用Word），提交自己比较满意的结果。这样有助于提高修改效率，同时也是对别人的一种尊重。
Keep fighting!

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fanaoUID：2306689

我是4。27上海的！

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第3周---周三(2.28)---第六次作业
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【题目】Issue150   科技类

“Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.

【参考链接】
0510G同主题写作-Issue150


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【题目】Argument76

The following appeared as part of an article in a health and beauty magazine.
"A group of volunteers participated in a study of consumer responses to the new Luxess face cream. Every morning for a month, they washed their faces with mild soap and then applied Luxess. At the end of that month, most volunteers reported a marked improvement in the way their skin looked and felt. Thus it appears that Luxess is truly effective in improving the condition of facial skin."

【翻译】一组志愿者参加了一项关于消费者对新的Luxess面霜的反应的调查。在一个月中的每个早晨，他们都用柔和香皂洗脸然后使用Luxess。一个月之后，多数志愿者报告说他们皮肤的观感显著改善。因此，这说明Luxess对于改善面部皮肤状况确实有效。

【写作思路分析】
看到每一个argument题目后，自己首先要做的一个工作就是――在自己的脑中将这个题目进行拆分，其好处是利于分析、规谬。一般而言，可以将题目拆成：“论据－结论”式，同样也可以拆成：“原因－结果”式，前面的叫法比较正规，后面的叫法通俗易懂。这样，在每一个argument题目中，其实就包含了2个部分：“论据”和“结论”。这个题目是很简单、很典型的argument题目，前面说的都是论据，在论据说完后，结论很自然的放出。但是还有些argu题目中结论和论据是糅合在一起的，不是太明了，这时候大伙儿就必须自己先将他们一一分辨，然后重新组织。

【参考链接】
0510G同主题写作第七期－－argument76


【注意】完成作文后请先自行修改，排除基本拼写语法错误（可以使用Word），提交自己比较满意的结果。这样有助于提高修改效率，同时也是对别人的一种尊重。
Keep fighting!

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第3周---周5(3.3)---第七次作业

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【题目】

Issue207   文化类


“Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies or groups of people have a diminished sense of who they are. “

【翻译】：仪式和典礼有助于定义一个文化。如果没有这些，社会或者团体就会逐渐地迷失自我。

【参考链接】
0510G同主题写作----------------------Issue207


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【题目】

Argument117

【题目】117 The following is a memo from the business manager of Valu-Mart stores.
　　"Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores."

　　【翻译】　　最近一次调查超过70％的回应者报告说他们被要求回家完成的工作量比以前多。由于Valu-Mart在过去并没有发现办公用品部销量的显著上升，我们应该利用这种在家办公的趋势，在所有Valu-Mart商店增加家庭办公机器比如打印机、小型复印机、碎纸机和传真机的存货。我们也将增加办公用品比如纸笔和钉书机的存货。通过这些变革，我们办公用品部将会成为我们商店中盈利最多的部门。

【参考链接】
0510G同主题写作－argument117


【注意】完成作文后请先自行修改，排除基本拼写语法错误（可以使用Word），提交自己比较满意的结果。这样有助于提高修改效率，同时也是对别人的一种尊重。
Keep fighting!

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第4周---周3(3.8)---第八次作业

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【题目】
抽象类
136 "The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
【翻译】

没有选择的情况少之又少。

【参考链接】
0706G同主题写作第一期---------------Issue136

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第5周---周三(3.15)---第九次作业

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第5周---周三(3.15)---第九次作业

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Issue177

177 "The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."

【参考链接】
0706G同主题第三期——Issue177

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Argument145

A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the person—often so briefly that the waking goes unnoticed—and can leave the person too tired during the day to exercise. Anyone who snores, therefore, should try to eat less than the average person and to exercise more.

【参考链接】
0706G同主题第五期——Argument145

新学期开始一周了，大家一定都很忙吧。偶也是完全似乎没有时间了。不管怎样，大家还是尽量挤出时间挑选一些来写吧。这次作业布置得仓促，都选了0706G的同主题。

加油~

xixiaiko

aggie_agathaUID：2198539

我归队了，明天交作业。