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2001年写作考题
图画+提纲+场景
P7 2001年写作考题评分标准及样卷

Directions:
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it.（不是重心,不能展开 ）
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to （注意文体，是写议论文不是写信）
1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning （象征意义）of the picture below,（描述,寓意，包涵两个经典段落）
2) give a specific example, and（举例参前，可以给多个例证）
3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. You should write about（建议措施，可以一个也可以更多）200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)


About love which is probably the noblest feelings of mankind, different people have different understandings. Below, there is a picture in which a light stands in the middle of the darkness and is burning itself to enlighten the world. Here, the light stands for love and the meaning of the picture is that when we fall upon darkness, we can count on love, for love, just like light, can burn more seriously in the darker world.
This picture shows the power of love and there are(is) sufficient evidence supporting it. For example, when the SARS is at large all over our country, it is love that makes us believe we can defeat the virus. Without it, the country would only be filled with fear and tears, which would lead us to fail in the fighting with the SARS.
After knowing the strength of love, we have to learn how to show love. Firstly, you should follow a rule that thinking not you can direct the course of love and if love finds your worthy, she will direct your course. Secondly, you ’d better do something to show love, not only just saying, for “Saying is easier than doing”.

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