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kexinyupiaoUID: 2250204

TOPIC: ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
WORDS: 512          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-2-22
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提纲：
有保留的同意：有些领域不需要外来者带来新知识。有些领域需要。
1、学科内在发展：牛顿定律、肖邦的音乐
2、随着学科内的联系、需其它学科的辅助发展：生物学、电子

Does any field of study advance greatly only when outsiders bring their expertise to that field of study as the speaker maintains? Although I concede that some advancements in realms of inquiry were contribute to researchers majoring in that fields, yet on balance I agree with the speaker's assertion that study field can advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to the field for the inquiries in today's world are closely related.

Admittedly, common sense and the history of science and other field of study inform me that some discoveries and even some crucial advancement were come up with experts in that certain fields. To support the argument, one needs to look no further than the development of physics. As we all know, it is Newton, a preeminent physical scientist, who theorized the law of gravity and the three fundamental laws in physics, which largely promoted the world toward improvement and bettered our human beings' understanding of nature. Besides, it is Chopin, a famous pianist even honored as a new Mozart in his lifetime, who buried the traditional roles of the left and right hand, thus, provide a new world for people absorbed in music. These and some other countless examples can serves as evidence that some great advancements were made by experts in that field as history informs us.

However, with the development of today’s world, we human beings have come to realize that one field of study can not be totally separated from another as some areas of inquiry are virtually connected together. Some scientists equipped with abundant amount of knowledge can also function as experts in other fields. And some improvement in one area may depend on the achievements of other areas. I turn first to the development of biology. As we all know that twenty first century is considered as the century of biology. However, had not the improvement made by other fields such as mechanism, physics and chemistry, the field of biology should not prospers as it is today. The improvement of mechanism can devise more sophisticated instruments with which biologists can investigate the nano-world in the cell; the achievement in physics enable the innovation of equipment using electrons which can enable the biologists get a clear picture of scenario in the cell; while the knowledge of chemistry can better the biologists with the characteristics of the components and elements in the cell.

I turn next to the field of the development of integrated circuits on which our modern world can make such progress as it is today. The improvements of integrated circuits rely largely on the material discovered by experts in chemistry as well as the achievement in the field of mathematics and physics. Only with the expertise brought in by the so-called outsiders, can the improvement in integrated circuits be made.

To sum up, in my point of view, the speaker overlooks some improvement which only attribute to experts in the related field. However, I agree with the speaker that the field of study can advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to the study.

[ 本帖最后由 kexinyupiao 于 2007-2-22 12:07 编辑 ]

shuwenyingUID: 2233183

有保留的同意：有些领域不需要外来者带来新知识。有些领域需要。
1、学科内在发展：牛顿定律、肖邦的音乐
2、随着学科内的联系、需其它学科的辅助发展：生物学、电子

Does any field of study advance greatly only when outsiders bring their expertise to that field of study as the speaker maintains? Although I concede that some advancements in realms of inquiry were contribute to researchers majoring in that fields, yet on balance I agree with the speaker's assertion that study field can advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to the field for the inquiries in today's world are closely related.观点很清晰～

Admittedly, common sense and the history of science and other field of study inform me that some discoveries and even some crucial advancement were come up with experts in that certain fields. To support the argument, one needs to look no further than the development of physics. As we all know, it is Newton, a preeminent physical scientist, who theorized the law of gravity and the three fundamental laws in physics, which largely promoted the world toward improvement and bettered our human beings' understanding of nature. Besides, it is Chopin, a famous pianist even honored as a new Mozart in his lifetime, who buried the traditional roles of the left and right hand, thus, provide a new world for people absorbed in music. These and some other countless examples can serves as evidence that some great advancements were made by experts in that field as history informs us. 赞一个，很好阿～～

However, with the development of today’s world, we human beings have come to realize that one field of study can not be totally separated from another as some areas of inquiry are virtually connected together. Some scientists equipped with abundant amount of knowledge can also function as experts in other fields感觉最好不要这样写，有点……既然他们已经是另一个领域的expert，就不算是outsiders. And some improvement in one area may depend on the achievements of other areas. I turn first to the development of biology. As we all know that twenty first century is considered as the century of biology. However, had not the improvement made by other fields such as mechanism, physics and chemistry, the field of biology should not prospers as it is today. The improvement of mechanism can devise more sophisticated instruments with which biologists can investigate the nano-world in the cell有点中式英语; the achievements in physics enable the innovation of equipment using 这里你用了enable… doingelectrons which can enable the biologists get 这里你又用了enable … doa clear picture of scenario可以这样用吗？呵呵俺不敢肯定 in the cell; while the knowledge of chemistry can better哇形容词活用做动词，强！ the biologists with the characteristics of the components and elements in the cell.

I turn next to the field of the development of integrated circuits on which our modern world can make such progress as it is today. The improvements of integrated circuits rely largely on the material discovered by experts in chemistry as well as the achievement in the field of mathematics and physics. Only with the expertise brought in by the so-called outsiders, can the improvement in integrated circuits be made.

To sum up, in my point of view, the speaker overlooks some improvement which only attribute to experts in the related field. However, I agree with the speaker that the field of study can advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to the study.

LZ太强了，限时还能写的这么好！！
很流畅，有一些表达偏中式英语！突然发现LZ快考了，Good luck！
希望LZ能抽时间看看我得,THX
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kexinyupiaoUID: 2250204

Main Entry:2better
Function:verb
Date:before 12th century

transitive senses  
1 : to make better: as  a : to make more tolerable or acceptable *trying to better the lot of slum dwellers*  b : to make more complete or perfect *looked forward to bettering her acquaintance with the new neighbors*
2 : to surpass in excellence : EXCEL
intransitive senses   : to become better
synonyms see IMPROVE


better可以做动词的~