ISSUE48 飞跃小组disyoo第三次作业 猛拍

disyooUID: 2223964

TOPIC: ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
WORDS: 488          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-2-26

提纲：
1. group of people+:影响历史的事件，无论是战争还是科学成就，都不是少数人决定其成败，而是大量的人们所作出的贡献。
2. forgeten-:影响历史的人们并没有被大众所遗忘，相反，人们在回顾历史的时候总会想起他们
3.famous few+: 大多数的杰出科学贡献是少数人作出的，推动了历史地发展 诺贝尔奖

Were the most significant events and trends in history made by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten? The speaker claims so. However, I concede that the events and trends in history were made by groups of people , however, they were not been forgotten by people in late time. Otherwise in my view, the most progress in a social was coursed by the choice of famous few.

First, success that do effective to history in any field was made by groups of people, which includes success of a war or success in a science study, without  the team work of these groups of people the history is hardly to write out. Every time a victory of war lead to a new time of the social, in world war II, at least 30 million of socials was death and tem more countries include America, England, France, China, est. fall in to the war to fight against the evil side, without the power of billions of people for 6 years struggle, we would never see the victory. So it is important that the effect made by people in groups to the events and trends in history.

However, the groups of people who do effect in history were never been forgotten, people always memory them in different way. To be an example again of the World War II, every year in the day it was end  in 1945, people in recent world will memory the people who dead for the peace of the world through many different way. In China people will write the name of each hero on a piece of white paper and make it a flower to celebrate the coming of the peace. So even though the amount of people who do grate effect in history is a large number, we people in the modern world will never forget their identities.

Further more, it is true that some grate success in history, especially in science, which has deep promotion in research field for human beings was coursed by a single person. Here is an example to well support my view that the Noble Price for science every year is sent out for the person who do most success for the world in Medical or Biology, Physics and Chemistry, est. And each year, the amount of people who enjoy this price is less than 10 people. And the only rule of the Noble price is, that the people who do most significant events and trends in history of human progress are fit for the price. So the most affective change and success in the history were made by the famous few.

In sum, the most significant events and trends in history were made by famous few who do a series of work to make upgrade to the world than common people do in his life and groups of people who were still living in the memory of people.

joyce8512UID: 2263806

提纲：
1. group of people+:影响历史的事件，无论是战争还是科学成就，都不是少数人决定其成败，而是大量的人们所作出的贡献。
2. forgeten-:影响历史的人们并没有被大众所遗忘，相反，人们在回顾历史的时候总会想起他们
3.famous few+: 大多数的杰出科学贡献是少数人作出的，推动了历史地发展 诺贝尔奖

Were the most significant events and trends in history made by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten? The speaker claims so. However, I concede that the events and trends in history were made by groups of people , however, they were not been forgotten by people in late time（in the following days）. Otherwise in my view, the most progress in a social (society)was coursed by the choice of famous few.

First, success that do effective to history in any field was made by groups of people, which includes success of a war or success in a science study, without  the team work of these groups of people the history is hardly to write out. Every time a victory of war lead to a new time of the social, in world war II, at least 30 million of socials was death and tem more countries include America, England, France, China, est. (etc)fall in to the war to fight against the evil side, without the power of billions of people for 6 years struggle, we would never see the victory. So it is important that the effect made by people in groups to the events and trends in history.

However, the groups of people who do effect in history were never been forgotten, people always memory them in different way. To be an example again of the World War II, every year in the day it was end  in 1945, people in recent world will memory the people who dead for the peace of the world through many different way. In China people will write the name of each hero on a piece of white paper and make it a flower to celebrate the coming of the peace. So even though the amount of people who do grate effect in history is a large number, we people in the modern world will never forget their identities.
这段在讲群众没有被遗忘，而题干说的是群众在历史学习的过程中没有被放到重要位置。稍微有点擦边球的味道。可以往题干上再靠靠。

Further more, it is true that some grate success in history, especially in science, which has deep promotion in research field for human beings was coursed by a single person. Here is an example to well support my view that the Noble Price for science every year is sent out for the person who do most success for the world in Medical or Biology, Physics and Chemistry, est.这个词常用阿，一定要写对！ And each year, the amount of people who enjoy this price is less than 10 people. And the only rule of the Noble price is, that the people who do most significant events and trends in history of human progress are fit for the price. So the most affective change and success in the history were made by the famous few.

In sum, the most significant events and trends in history were made by famous few who do a series of work to make upgrade to the world than common people do in his life and groups of people who were still living in the memory of people.