ISSUE11 第一次作业,强烈谴责ETS此道陷阱题!!求拍,哪怕给思路也好 ISSUE 11 “All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world’s most persistent social problem”The author’s suggestion seems reasonable, however, after serious analyzing, it is easy to find that the recommendation speaker raised only does help(help在这里是什么意思?) to the superficial surface of the issue. Propelling the mutual development of global economy meanwhile advocating the human’s rationality and catholicity is the essential thing for solving the deep level question in the presented issue. I will discuss the reasons for my point view in the following parts.In the first place, it is admitted that the suggestion, author presented, itself is a considerable idea, because only when people have the notion of understanding and mercy can they make the action to solve the persistent social problems. A man(a man 什么意思?) never consider about this question, without mentioning doing something helpful. Nevertheless, considering the practicality of the recommendation, there are still a lot of related conditions need to come into existence, thus the suggestion would be in use.Secondly, It is doubtful whether each nation has enough mutual understand, catholicity, cooperation to carry out the author’s recommendation. In addition to the lack of those elements mentioned upon, people are not rational enough to surpass themselves, furthermore surpass over the nation, ethnic, boundary of the country, hence in, war, race discrimination, gap between rich and poor those I defined them as the persistent social problems still exist. For an(an 可以去掉吧) example, a report about the war between Israel and Pakistan(是palestine不是巴基斯坦) is worthy of being thought. A little Israel girl with dirty dress but beautiful eyes and innocent expression shot the boy immediately when she found he is Pakistani, because in her little heart there were only hatreds to Pakistani. There are weaknesses in people’s personality, which cause them cannot survive from the hostility. So it is hard for man to surpass himself, much more outreach the nation, ethnic. The fundamental reason behind it is lacking economic power, and that is why people still just live and develop within the nation and the ethnic.Moreover, people need not go through the extremely cruel war and then learn how to understand each other. Many other ways lying for people to choose, such as WTO, WHO, IMF, those organizations provide people a better way to get together and solve the persistent social problems by communication and cooperation. Also, the tendency of globalization become incandescent supplies everybody in the world a larger room to develop. For instance, world famous typhoon company Wal-mart has now established over 5000 mass markets in 10 countries in the world, offers 1.6 million people jobs regardless of their rank, race, nation. The company so understands every culture, tolerates to contain different colors of people that Wal-mart can melt many marketing notions together, and conquers fierce conflicts between different distributors. From the case of Wal-mart, it shows nowadays there are plenty ways for people to choose to understand and cooperate. Besides wal-mart such kind of global company, there are still tourism, technical skills emigrant for globalization.In a word, the effective way for solving social problems is to develop the world economy, as well as advocate human’s mutual understand and cooperation. It is inspired(inspiring) that the development of the world is tend to what people wished. Economy development is never-ending improvement. When a train has been started full-speed, who can stop it? 感觉文章逻辑不是太清楚,单词量很大,很多单词不认识,呵呵。 和我一样,觉得lz 的论证还需要加强,可能是话题本身比较抽象吧 |