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PrudenceUID: 2286952

TOPIC: ISSUE154 - "Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
WORDS: 535          TIME: 0:56:31          DATE: 2007-4-4

The speaker asserts that education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators, both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Concerning the important role assumed by education towards students and society as well, I strongly agree with the speaker's contention.

Admittedly, we should underline the importance of professional educators. We all know that they have the special knowledge about how to educate students, and their year-by-year experience directs them to work more effectively and efficaciously. As teachers, they act just like ducts leading knowledge especially basic knowledge from books to students' heads. In this way they help students to take up weapons of living and doing researches. Moreover, the knowledge of psychology they equipped is particular important, which can help them to notice students' psychological change, and give them instruction not to go astray. Especially now when parents generally are busy with their work, and have limited time to be with their children, their influence towards students is more apparent.

However, parents--not only children's first teacher but also children's lifelong teacher--should give their children more concern, even though how busy they are. At first, parents-children relationship, which is more intimate than any other one, means more than living together. It is this relationship that helps parents more easily find their children's abnormal deed and thought. In this way, to ensure and enable their children to walking along the road of ethics and moral, which is essential to children's growing-up but also the well-being of family and society as well. Clinton ever wrote in his book My Life (and I paraphrase) that:" I respect my adept father very much. It is he that teaches me to be a good man. I thank him!" Thus, how important parents are! In addition, along with the development of technology, the TV set has come into nearly all families. However, there are some programs which are not beneficial for children to watch. And now, parents should take up their rights as parents to prevent children from watching such programs. Accordingly, parents' role towards children should be a key one, and they should act well as examples for their children to follow.

Furthermore, also communities have their undeniable responsibilities on students’ education. Communities are more like a situation in which students learn how to get along with others; that is, in this situation, students learn cooperation and competition, both are fundamental for students when they graduate from schools. Besides, in this situation, children will learn to help other and at any time lend a hand to others even they do not know who help them. Besides, the celebrities in this situation would influence students greatly. Concerning Washington, so many students regard him as the most prominent person, and take him as example to act to pursue success. Again, Bill gates' successful initiative will encourage several generations of students.

In conclusion, we should first admit education is rather important, then think about how to educate students effectively. In this procedure of educating students, professional educators, parents and communities, any of which should not be ignored, should strive together to promote a well education system--essentially beneficial to students--to coming into being.  

eddie23508okUID: 2281260

The speaker asserts that education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators, both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Concerning the important role assumed by education towards students and society as well, I strongly agree with the speaker's contention.(同意作者观点) Admittedly, we should underline the importance of professional educators. We all know that they have the special knowledge about how to educate students, and their year-by-year experience directs them to work more effectively and efficaciously(不是与effectively重复了吗？). As teachers, they act just like ducts leading knowledge especially basic knowledge from books to students' heads (用head太俗了，用brain更好). In this way they help students to take up weapons of living and doing researches. Moreover, the knowledge of psychology they (are) equipped (with) is particular (particularly) important, which can help them to notice students' psychological change, and give them instruction not to go astray. Especially now when parents generally are busy with their work, and have limited time to be with their children, their influence towards students is more apparent. (教育工作者作用很重要) However, parents--not only children's first teacher but also children's lifelong teacher (换个词，tutor/guider) --should give their children more concern, even though (用no matter好点) how busy they are. At first, parents-children relationship, which is more intimate than any other one, means more than living together. (好句子) It is this relationship that helps parents more easily find their children's abnormal deed and thought. In this way, to ensure and enable their children to walking along the road of ethics and moral, which is essential to (not only) children's growing-up but also the well-being of family and society as well. (好句子) Clinton ever wrote in his book My Life (and I paraphrase) that:" I respect my adept father very much. It is he that teaches me to be a good man. I thank him!" (good example) Thus, how important parents are! In addition, along with the development of technology, the TV set has come into nearly all families. However, there are some programs which are not beneficial (suitable) for children to watch. And now, parents should take up their rights as parents (改为they should have) to prevent children from watching such programs. Accordingly, parents' role towards children should be a key one, and they should act well as examples for their children to follow. (父母是孩子的良师益友) Furthermore, also communities have their undeniable responsibilities on students’ education. Communities are more like a situation (garden) in which students learn how to get along with others; that is, in this situation (neighbordhood) , students learn cooperation and competition, both (of which) are fundamental for students when they graduate from schools. Besides, in this situation (environment) , children will learn to help other (others) and at any time lend a hand to others even they do not know who help them (he is helping) . Besides, the celebrities in this situation would influence students greatly. (这句感觉怪怪的，不明白) Concerning Washington, so many students regard him as the most prominent person, and take him as example to act (去掉) to pursue success. Again, Bill gates' successful initiative will encourage several generations of students. (去掉) 社区很重要 In conclusion, we should first admit education is rather important, then think about how to educate students effectively. In this procedure of educating students, professional educators, parents and communities, any of which should not be ignored, should strive together to promote a well education system--essentially beneficial to students--to coming into being.   语言有进步，不过还需继续斟酌！！

PrudenceUID: 2286952

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